Reading Reviews From Member: HPForevermore
  
2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by HPForevermoreLife, Love and Laughter: Life, Love and Laughter

18th December 2013:
LOVED this! Excellent work!

Author's Response: Thank you!! It was a fun challenge.

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Review #2, by HPForevermoreUntennable: The Final Act

5th September 2013:
Hi Harrysmyhero,

I really enjoyed this story! Loved the plot! The only constructive criticisms I have pertain to proofreading, which in some chapters was good but in some chapters was sorely needed (I understand if you're doing it yourself how easy it is to overlook something like 'is' versus 'his'), and punctuation, particularly 'comma usage', which was inconsistent throughout (at times I had to reread paragraphs and dialogue, which disrupted the flow of the story).

That being said and on the whole, your creativity is excellent!

I will be reading more...

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