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Review #1, by TheoryOfHeartetc. etc. (and life goes on): Love Overrated, Overruled

3rd November 2013:
I have been waiting for this so long! I am beyond ecstatic that it's finished! It is a perfect way to bring back that part of Albus that loves playing games. And you hit it right on the nose when Clemence lashes out and hurts him deep. It's brilliant and I cannot wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you! c: Guh, I've been trying to make sure current etc. isn't TOO different from the first chapters. Had to bring back their playfulness again!

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Review #2, by TheoryOfHeartetc. etc. (and life goes on): The Self-Fulfilling Prophet

9th August 2013:
This is very good! I have read every chapter and have felt pulled into the story. I feel as if I am Clemence; I share her emotions, taste Albus's kiss, and can feel his body just as she can by only reading a few words on a page. One thing I would like to see more of (which you did when Clemence was beat up) is Albus' soft side. That he really truly cares about something, not just sex. But if he really is just using her and he never really felt anything but lust, then forget that last tidbit! :) You are truly a great writer! Keep it up!

Author's Response: I like writing Albus' softer side too! I think that's where the crux of his conflict lies, the more genuine side of himself and this thrill-seeking taste that he likes too much. The other thing is, Clemence actually tends to rebuff Albus when he cares--a little too close for her and all that. So he's actually doing what he thinks Clemence likes.

Thank you! c:


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