{reviewid: 1353179, reviewer: 'siruis_lady'}
24th March 2007:
Good, a ton more believe able then others.
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{reviewid: 1211961, reviewer: 'siruis_lady'}
29th November 2006:
is he evil or misguided. both...I love it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading =)
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{reviewid: 1188496, reviewer: 'siruis_lady'}
7th November 2006:
something to think about, i have this problem to, but use more action rather then telling, put teh reader in the mist of the situation. I loke your story but it feels like im reading instructions rather then a story.
but good content.
Author's Response: I know what you mean on that and I think I will be doing a bit more in the sequal. We shall see. Thanks for reading.
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7th November 2006:
you have a very morbid way of telling things, and for us who look to stories for comfort yours seem to take one on a rollar coster, right before dropping them off in to the icy aybss, forsaken but satisfied. Thanks.
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{reviewid: 1175388, reviewer: 'siruis_lady'}
25th October 2006:
mmm, that almost set things in motion...almost.
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{reviewid: 1173201, reviewer: 'siruis_lady'}
23rd October 2006:
slightly creepy, all the implacations but rather enjoying. thanks for such a fresh idea.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks! Having a fic called fresh or original is always a huge compliment to me. :) I'm really glad you liked it and thanks for reviewing!
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{reviewid: 1135731, reviewer: 'siruis_lady'}
13th September 2006:
Mmmm, what's next?
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{reviewid: 1079730, reviewer: 'siruis_lady'}
27th July 2006:
Loved it, your story reads like a movie...if only.
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{reviewid: 992206, reviewer: 'siruis_lady'}
19th May 2006:
Hale, i am not worthy...lord.
Author's Response: If you are prepared for the trials and show your true mettle, even you may be worthy....
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{reviewid: 939523, reviewer: 'siruis_lady'}
16th March 2006:
next....
Author's Response: you will...have to wait I suppose. If you don't like it and are going on to the next story fair thee well, but if you're waiting for a next chapter it's up to the monitors I have two new ones submitted.
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{reviewid: 933694, reviewer: 'siruis_lady'}
11th March 2006:
Who killed the baby? Dumbledore? And which is the greater evil, them your her?
Author's Response: I think that maybe I'm the greater evil, and yes, Dumbledore killed caused her to miscariage by accident!
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{reviewid: 917553, reviewer: 'siruis_lady'}
26th February 2006:
I think she should be with harry, but this is a Draco?Ginny fic. so my choice is limited. Make Draco burn, that little green monster.
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{reviewid: 894637, reviewer: 'siruis_lady'}
8th February 2006:
Man that was evil. I had hoped you would have showed us more. but still I love your story. It just feels so evil.
Author's Response: Thanks - you'll get more in the next chappy!
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{reviewid: 887875, reviewer: 'siruis_lady'}
3rd February 2006:
The way you write is wonderful, the only thing that makes me weary is some times you use to much detail. like in the beginning you explained how life less hermoine's soul had become, then you told me the same thing 10 more times. I get that she's hurt. Just tell me what she's ganna do about it. But other then that I really love your story.
Author's Response: thanks for the constructive critism i'll bare that i mind=) i really appreciate this review...please keep reading! and im glad you enjoyed my story! *Hugs* XxXxX
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{reviewid: 887870, reviewer: 'siruis_lady'}
3rd February 2006:
Good, great good, good, great great.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing.
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{reviewid: 886539, reviewer: 'siruis_lady'}
2nd February 2006:
I love you stories, its the ones like this that made me want to join this site in the first place. Good job.
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{reviewid: 851351, reviewer: 'siruis_lady'}
9th January 2006:
I hardly getr the wordless confessions, only because I'm a verbal being.
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{reviewid: 851306, reviewer: 'siruis_lady'}
9th January 2006:
I love it more everytine I read it, YOUR truly are one of those gifted writers and if you ever write a novel I want a signed copy. siruis_lady.
Author's Response: O_O Oh, wow. Wow. Aw, THANK YOU! :D You don't know how MUCH that made my day. ^_^ Thank you very much; I appreciate the kindness. You put a smile on my face!
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{reviewid: 851008, reviewer: 'siruis_lady'}
9th January 2006:
love it. again your writing reminds me of JK herself. I love with much respect where its due.
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{reviewid: 841682, reviewer: 'siruis_lady'}
4th January 2006:
Wonderful. in a nutshell.
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4th January 2006:
Good, I would never have guess this as the next installment, but love it all the same. Your a very good story teller.
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16th December 2005:
You just said in one chapter that Harry isn't here, but just then you changed. It's confusing.
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12th December 2005:
Ok, I'm missing them, could I ask when and most importanly why were they not posted? I just tuned in about a month or so ago...I would love to read them.
Author's Response: they need to be reposted..(sigh) that takes a bit of time and editing...lol
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12th December 2005:
mmm.
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{reviewid: 801023, reviewer: 'siruis_lady'}
7th December 2005:
were you in a hurry to end this or was it just a really really good story beginning to middle then a sap sucker at the end.
I loved it until you ended it thier, I mean I would have like to see her work it out, and not just drop those feelings you made so intense for a two minute converstion, you should have made her draw for blood and then forgive, thier other ways of finding a happy ending then the short cut. but to each it's own, I didn't hate the story just disliked the ending. A Sequel...too much to ask? please.
Author's Response: Thanks for the detailed review - I'm sorry you didn't like the ending. I was in quite a rush, but I had it all planned out in my head and I figured my readers might be getting bored with Draco and Hermione arguing all the time, so I decided to make it end happily. A sequel could well be on the way though - if I can think up some ideas!
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