*sniff* I HATE YOU!!! I mean I love you to bits sis but how come you're writing is always, ALWAYS better than mine? Huh???? Huh???? That was a cute chappy and Alan is starting to kind of um...scare me? Like that stalker, killer kind of guy from that movie Enough. *cringes* Not the memories! Oh yeah, good story....yeah....just kidding! Update soon! *Hugs* ~HisGirl

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Ooooh! Kind of reminds me of that movie Enough w/ J-Lo. Something's going on....~HisGirl P.S. Yes I know this review is after the other one but don't worry, I DID read them in order!!! ~HisGirl

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Haha! I told you! I knew it! I so knew it! Stupid Alan guy..lemme at him, just lemme at him! I will soooo kill him! *takes a deep breath* Never underestimate a person who reads too much fanfiction! Oh did I say brilliant story? ~HisGirl

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Very cute but just one question? Is Gillian her niece? Cuz you kept saying nice and I was a little confused. Anyways keep up with the story and I look forward to more! ~HisGirl

Author's Response: Thankyou for pointing out that mistake. I was in a rush to publish it sorry. Thank you again.

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Aww that was a really cute story! I wish a guy said I was beautiful but all the ones I know are stupid. Very good job! ~HisGirl

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Good start. I like where this is going. ~HisGirl

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Now let's just say that was very interesting. A good interesting not bad. It's weird because in the books Harry and Ron And Hermione didn't meet until they were all 11. How were they friends at nine? And are they muggles or apart of the wizarding world. Just some questions I was thinking about while I was reading but it was good writing. Keep up! ~HisGirl

Author's Response: ya.. im sorry i didnt make it clear... but harry is a wizard and hermione is muggleborn... you'll understand more of it when i keep writing... thanks for the review!

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You're going to add to this right? I mean, you just can't end it that way!!! I loved the story though. ~HisGirl

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Very good start! I like it very much! ~HisGirl

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You know I swear as soon as I started reading this I could of sworn I've read this somewhere else. Well I'm not finished yet but keep up the good work! ~HisGirl

Author's Response: lol! Well this is posted on Sink Into Your Eyes. you might have read it there. thanks for reading!

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Awww that was soo cute and had a very good plot! I like the idea of making Harry the one who ran away. I mean in all the stories i've read Ginny ran but this was a nice change! Good work! ~HisGirl

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Very cute start! I love it! ~HisGirl

Author's Response: Thank you :-) I am looking forward to updating again as soon as I have some time (sorry if it is a while, please be patient, I promise it will come!)

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I love this story!!!!! I stay up late most nights just trying to read each chapter. It kind of scared me at first on how "Jane" like Remus. When I first read that I was like, "Whoa! Now that's some serious fanfiction I've never read before!" But take that statement as a good thing because I like new ideas and plots when it comes to fanfiction. Makes life a little more interesting. Well keep up the writing! ~HisGirl

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Even though I haven't fully finished this story yet...I just wanted to say that I really, truly love your stories! You are a wonderful writer and I hope some day I'll be just as good as you. ~HisGirl

Author's Response: Thank you for the compliments. I have gotten better as I have written, that and a good beta. It's taken time, but in the end, it's worth it. Thank you again.

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Wow! Nice job but we all know something is going to happen isn't there? Huh? Huh? I really look forward to more of your writing! ~HisGirl

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OH MY GOSH!!! That was soo good and for this is your very first fanfic? You're kidding me right? I love it and it isn't boring. I look forward to more! ~HisGirl

Author's Response: thank you:-) You made me grin. This is actually the first thing I have written since about sixth grade (I am in college now) that didn't involve highly boring essay prompts. I appriciate your review so much, you made me grin. I will be adding another chapter in a bit after I proof it. Thanks again!

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Hey there good start! I look forward to more and yes.....Voldemort's dead!!!! Sorry i had to say that....~HisGirl

Author's Response: Thank you for the nice reviews on both my stories! :-) I hate writing stories where voldemort is still alive its just to much work to keep up the 'Harry is on the verge of being killed' plot! hehehe LUV YA Katie aka oliverwoodubmine

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Oooooh! I like very much where this is going! Update real soon okay?!~HisGirl

Author's Response: Thank you. I will try and update when ever possible.

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Very good start. Wow a lot of chapters and I've only read one! Don't worry, I will personally find time to read them all because your story is sooooo good!!! The characters are very much like the ones from the book. I'm looking forward to more! ~HisGirl

Author's Response: hey hisgirl! thanx 4 readin my fanfic! i hope you enjoy it as much as i've enjoyed writin it! thanx so much!

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THAT SOOOOOOOOOOO SAD!!!!!!!!!! OH MY GOSH WHY DID YOU HAVE TO KILL HER?????!!!!!!! Perfect name for the baby and hurry and finish the story!!!!! ~HisGirl

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Very cute start. I look forward to more....just as soon as I finish reading the rest of the chapters! Keep writing! ~HisGirl

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Very cute! I love the idea! Update soon!!!! -HisGirl

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Hey there it's me! I haven't had the chance to read it but I will make time! Sounds pretty good and keep up! -HisGirl

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You killed her! That was sooo sad!!! How could you do that?????!!! The story was absolutely incredible. I love it, I love it! -HisGirl

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Ooooh that's a tuffy Starlene. I mean there's nothing really else you could do to this story except have Audria grow up but that's it. I'm not sure about a sequel but I do suggest a new story? You know, just to spice up life just a bit? You're decision though, and I'll support you all the way! -HisGirl

Author's Response: Thank you thank you thank you!!!!!You are soo supportive of my fics!!!I hope you like the new one I'm putting out......It's a story about Hermione's friend Roxanne....But I havent got it up yet....

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