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Review #1, by ChivalrousHow not to be a Woodley: Of Rebels and Romantics

16th June 2017:
So glad I decided to read this! I absolutely love it! Post soon! :)


Author's Response: Thank you so much! Next chapter will be up next week :)

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Review #2, by ChivalrousThe Murderer's Daughter: Chapter 5

16th June 2017:
I absolutely love the idea behind this story! It's very refreshing and I'm so excited to see where you take it! James and Sasha are so cute! I love their relationship and her relationships with all the Potters! I'm so glad I decided to read this! I hope you post soon! :)


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Review #3, by ChivalrousWhat to Do with the Wotters : The Story of Rose and Scorpius

2nd August 2015:
Okay now you've really got my attention!

I'm so curious as to where this story is going! Andy is a lovely OC and I have a special place in my heart for any and all Malfoys! :)

Just wondering did you chose the name Andromeda on your own or is Andy named after Andromeda Tonks (née Black)?

I loved the update and can't wait for the next one!


Author's Response: Awe! Thanks! I seriously love Andy. I think she's my favorite character that I have ever written!

Wow. I literally just finished writing the part about how Andy did indeed get her name from Andromeda Tonks. I explain it all in the next chapter! I didn't think anyone would realize that she could have gotten her name from her Great Aunt.

I'll try not to give away too much, but yes you are right. And it is a backstory I'm very proud to explain next chapter!xD

Really, thanks again! LOVE YOU.

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Review #4, by ChivalrousSurvival Instinct: How to: Quidditch

2nd August 2015:
I LOVE QUIDDITCH MATCHES! I've read a lot from someone in the stands point of view and the reason I really enjoyed your writing of it was because it was very to the point. You didn't lallygag around and focus on the minute details and logistics of the match. It was so refreshing! (Guilty as charged though right here...)

Albus and Marley's encounter was certainly odd. I'd like to see more of Albus though!

SO MUCH CONSPIRACY! I LOVE IT! I'm really really excited to see where you're taking this Death Eater conspiracy thing. The latest development was certainly enlightening, but not completely unorthodox so I'd like to see where it goes!

Anyways I loved the chapter and can't wait for you to update again! :)


Author's Response: Yaaay you liked the quidditch bit! I was so nervous/excited to write it, so its good to see that the response is positive! Everyone has a special place for quidditch and I was just hoping to do it justice :)
LOTS of Al coming up! Don't worry. It's my first attempt at suspense and it seems to be goinf quiet well so I'm glad. Thanks for the review! :)

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Review #5, by ChivalrousBody Builders: talkin' body, or the contract

2nd August 2015:
I love this! That is so funny that you mentioned "Talking Body" because I listened to it the other day and was like "wow this reminds me of Body Builders" so that's really cool!

Melisande is a great OC! I love her and how she's such a prefect! Fred is completely different than any other Fred I've ever read so thank you for that!

I love this story so please post soon! :)


Author's Response: Hi again! I'm glad that you liked chapter two!

Yeah, "Talking Body" is actually the inspiration for this whole thing, especially the lines that are quoted at the top of this chapter. Taken out of context, they make it seem like a mad scientist actually making bodies (to me, at least). Haha, it makes me quite happy that you were reminded of my story! I'm honored!

Thank you! Melisande is quite annoying to me right now, because I'm not sure if I'm getting her quite like I want her to be, but we'll see in the future. My favorite thing to do is to write Fred in a different way--in my other WIP, he's a Slytherin con man, so that's also different. I like mad scientist Fred best out of my two Freds, though, because he's much nicer and crazier. :D

I haven't written chapter three because I have to go back and edit the first two chapters again, but I will try to update in the near-ish future!


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Review #6, by ChivalrousSeized: Is There Anything Left to Say?

28th July 2015:
Ahhh! This chapter was so good! I can see where Astoria is coming from, but at the same time I think she is a complete moron... Hahaha!

I loved this chapter and I can't wait for the next update! :)


Author's Response: Thanks, Ireland! I think Astoria is a moron too ;) Next chapter is almost done :)

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Review #7, by ChivalrousSurvival Instinct: How to survive the aftermath

28th July 2015:
Ahhh! You're back! I can't believe you wrote this a long time ago, because it fits in so seamlessly! And hey, filler chapters are great sometimes! I'm just excited that you posted a new one!

I think this chapter is positively charming Madame! (Read in a posh voice for full effect.)


Lovely chapter, I can't wait for the next one! :)


Author's Response: Oh, you're too kind!
So happy you liked it.

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Review #8, by Chivalrousfirst: first kiss

21st July 2015:
I adore this story! Albus is absolutely precious and is a wonderful human being. Your portrayal of him is one that I just love!

Esme is a great OC and you've done brilliant work with her! James was a wonderful minor character as well!

I can't wait for the next chapter, because this story is so good!


Author's Response: Ireland! :)

I was so shocked to see a review... Thank you so much! I am glad you like both Albus' and Esme's characterizations. :)

The next chapter is definitely coming soon, I promise! :D


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Review #9, by ChivalrousBody Builders: body language, or the beginning

17th July 2015:
Interesting first chapter! I love your characterization of Freddy! I hope you post soon! This story is so good!


Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it, and I hope you continue to enjoy!


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Review #10, by ChivalrousMirror, Mirror: gods and monsters

12th July 2015:
Okay so this was perfect.

Um you're perfect.

And your writing is perfect.

The Greek myth aspects were done wonderfully and since I seriously dig Greek myth I was so happy to read this!

I absolutely love 'Gone Girl' and while reading this I was thinking about much Luna reminded me of Amy and then BAM I read your author's note and was like "oh well that's why."

So this was a lovely one-shot and you're AMAZING!


Author's Response: omg im smiling so big that i might just swallow my own head
youre sooo nice!!! and lovely!!! and cute!!!
im so happy you liked this!
and omg same i love gone girl (it was just brilliant)
YOU are amazing!
thank you sooo much, love (pink twinkling hearts) xx

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Review #11, by ChivalrousPast Tense: fourth.

8th July 2015:
Wow, okay I really love this!

When I first read the summary I was immediately interested and then I started reading! It's so good!

All of your characters are amazing and individual with their own quirks and personalities showing through. I absolutely love Steph and her siblings' names are pretty awesome! Speaking of siblings I can't wait to meet Telemachus, he sounds amazing and his name is the best.

I haven't gotten to see much of the plot and where the story is going, but I'm so excited to see what's going to happen. Really really excited!

So post ASAP, because I'm insanely curious!

This story is wonderful and you're an amazing writer!


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Review #12, by ChivalrousNo Strings Attached: Feisty

25th June 2015:
The ~quidditch bros~ are gr8. Every scene with Green Eyes...I mean Noah...was golden!

I adore this story and I can't wait till you post the next chapter! *squeals*


Author's Response: The are ~gr8~ aren't they? Noah is my baby ♥

Thank you so much! Next chapter coming soon! *squeals back*

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Review #13, by ChivalrousColoring Outside the Lines: Chapter Two

21st June 2015:
I loved this chapter! Although switching POVs so many times in one chapter can be confusing so watch out for that.

I absolutely adore your characterization of Roxanne! It's so different from any other Roxie I've ever read!

I also loved the insight you gave us into Nashira's world, she's very refreshing for a Slytherin!

So all in all, great chapter! I hope you post soon!


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Review #14, by ChivalrousColoring Outside the Lines: Chapter One

11th June 2015:

I absolutely love this story!

Your characters are so wonderful and realistic! Roxanne as a Hufflepuff? I never would have written that myself, but it works so well for this story. Nashira is very cool and I love her being a Slytherin! I have a special place in my heart for Slytherins.

We didn't get to see a lot of the plot, but I'm excited to see where it leads!

I love the premise and how you've set the story up, it makes me so excited to read the rest of the story!

I hope you post soon, because I adore this!


Author's Response: Ah such a lovely review! First off, thank you so much for taking the time to respond, it really means a lot. I am so so glad that you like it so far! I actually have the first few chapters written from before (they are only in need of massive editing), so I can promise quick updates for a while! Funnily enough, the pacing was one of my major problems when I first started writing it, and I definitely noticed that I would include a lot of irrelevant tangents or scenes that I am trying to cut down. I suspect that I still will have some problems with it, but hopefully I will improve somewhat. Seriously though, thanks again for the review! It really did make my day :)

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Review #15, by ChivalrousBrother's Blood: Tale of a fool: Brother's Blood

4th June 2015:
Hello Ireland here for the Bronze vs. Blue Review Battle!

I'm in awe at the fact that you managed to write a brilliant story in 500 words! I could never do that!

Setting aside the fact that it's only five hundred words, this story is so well-written. I myself am not really a second POV kind of writer, but with this story it just really made it. Somehow it drove the points home harder than it would've in any other POV.

I also don't usually read a lot about Dumbledore, but I was feeling quite adventurous today and it was well worth it!

It was very interesting for me to see inside of Dumbledore's brain since in canon we never really see a side of him other than "the wise mentor" side. And you wrote it in a beautifully twisted way.

The things you wrote made it easy to see how Dumbledore's choices in life affected him and changed him. It was easy to see how he grew and changed and developed as a character in this story and even canon! Which is so crazy, because it's only 500 words!

Sorry I keep stressing that, but it just blows my mind that a story this good is only five hundred words!

So bravo and hats off to you, Kat, because you did an amazing job!

I loved it!


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Review #16, by ChivalrousTransparent: The Favor

31st May 2015:
Hi Gabbie! Here I am for the review swap!

So this is brilliant!

I've read Dominique a thousand different ways with her being a popular Queen Bee, a tom-boy, and a quiet girl, but your Dom is one of my all time favorites! Her stutter just makes her so different from any of the others and it doesn't seem to be a staple of her character. The stutter doesn't make her Dominique, but it's a part of her and it shapes who she is without consuming her and that's really cool! :)

All the supporting characters I've seen thus far are wonderful! Or wonderfully horrid when it comes to Victoire and Teddy I suppose. They seem exceedingly well-developed for minor characters especially in the first chapter.

I can tell that you like to do things in a very different manner than what's obvious! Which is so fun and exciting! I would've never thought to do what you've done with your characters, but it works and it's great and I'm here for it! Haha!

I'm very curious to see what Teddy wants from Dominique, but I'm quite sure it won't be good at least for Victoire. Eek!

All in all I loved this! It's different and fresh and I'm excited to see what happens next! :)

So please excuse me while I go finish this! Haha!


Author's Response: Hello!

Thanks for stopping by, I really enjoyed reading this review! I don't think I've read too many Dominique stories on the archives and I'm really curious about this tom-boy version! For some reason, her stutter is just simply a part of her character. I couldn't imagine her any other way and I'm glad that you liked it. :D

Hahaha, the supporting characters just get worse but here's a thing for you: Pay close attention to Teddy Lupin after chapter six, he may surprise you. Not so sure about Victoire yet...>:(

Anyway, thank you SO much for the review, it meant a lot!

Much love,


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Review #17, by ChivalrousNo Strings Attached: Reveal

28th May 2015:
So I love this. The sass is real. The dynamics of the Potter fam were great. Charlotte is queen. And you need to post ASAP.

(For real tho this is wonderful like thank you for bringing me this joy at two in the morning when I read this and could not stop laughing)


Author's Response: So I love you. The appreciation is real. The review you left is great. You are queen. And I will keep updating ASAP.

(For real tho this is a wonderful review like thank you for bringing me this joy when I read this and could not stop smiling)

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Review #18, by ChivalrousHome: Prologue

20th May 2015:
I really enjoyed this. The premise is vague, but it works and I dig it. I can't wait to see more from Dominique and where this story goes!

Post soon!


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Review #19, by ChivalrousMurphy's Law: Chapter Two

14th May 2015:
I love this! The premise is excellent with Pippa and Murphy's Law!

Your characters are very vivid and seem to jump off the page! Especially Pippa, Connie, and Dominique, on a side note I love your characterization of Dom!

I can see where the plot is beginning to take form and I'm very excited to see where this story goes!

Post soon!


Author's Response: Hey! I am so sorry for taking so long to respond! I was putting responding off but I am determined to respond to everyone before New Years!

So thank you so much for reviewing this story! I was so unsure about this - it's ridiculously out of my comfort zone so every review means a lot!

Thank you! I'm glad you loved it! That's what I was going for - I really wanted Pippa to be likeable and vibrant and just to be amazing so i'm glad you think she jumps off the page! Haha, thank you! Dom was quite hard to write so i'm glad you like her!

Thank you! I know I haven't updated in forever but there will be new chapter in the near future!

Thank you again for reviewing!


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Review #20, by ChivalrousSurvival Instinct: How to save the day

16th April 2015:

I'm so glad that they are back and I hope to see them again soon!

I hope you post ASAP!


Author's Response: Aww, thanks! :)
I'll def be updating soon. Just wanna get a bunch of writing in before I have to really crack down for finals (May is fast approaching. Yikes!)

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Review #21, by ChivalrousMasquerade: Waltzing on Glass

16th April 2015:
Ah! I love this story! Irene is very well-composed OC and I have a soft spot in my heart for Slytherins with morals!

I love all your characters especially Blaise and Astoria!

I think the formalness of the ball and everything is very pureblood and I love it!

I hope you post soon!


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Review #22, by ChivalrousComplicated: In Which The Moron Has A Heart

16th April 2015:
"Albus is wonderful.

Jason is wonderful.

Joe is wonderful.

Louis is wonderful.

Rose is wonderful.

Scorpius is wonderful (in a terrible way).

Olivia is wonderful.

Everyone is wonderful.

This story is wonderful.

Posting the next chapter would be wonderful."

A poem by Ireland dedicated to your story. Ha ha!

I loved this chapter!

Post soon!


Author's Response: Hi! Thank you so much for such a kind review - I'm so glad you're still enjoying reading! I've been using camp nano to mainly do some work on my other novel here, Victoire, but am working on the next chapter of Complicated and will try to have it up in the next week. It's a big one with lots of Albus/Olivia and lots and lots of drama :)

Thanks for reviewing! Lots of love, Emma xx

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Review #23, by Chivalrous(Don't) Panic: 3. Of Managers and Being Advanced

16th April 2015:
Okay first off, I love Reggie. Like a lot. Reggie is life. Her reaction is probably exactly how I would react if somehow my name got called out of the Goblet of Fire! She very believable as a character and really just one of those characters you want to root for!

I know we only saw a small bit of her, but I love Cassidy. She's very Ravenclaw and I dig that!

James and Nikola and Lorcan like please excuse me while I pass out from the wonder of them.

James is more platonic, but I just love James II because he's James bloody Potter II.

Nikola is love. That is all.

Lorcan is a good character, because he really pushes back at Regina and they have an interesting dynamic that I'd love to see more of!

I really love this story and I hope that you continue to write it! I love your style and the way you write Regina, it's very real and that's so cool!

Please post the next chapter soon!


Author's Response: Hello! I am sorry that I never responded to this. I kind of disappeared from the fanfiction world for awhile.

But I just wanted to let you know that I have now read this review and thank you so much for it!

I recently have been writing new chapters to Reggie's life and I have a few new ones up.

Because you know what Reggie IS life, haha. I just couldn't stay away from her. I had to come back and write more of her story.


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Review #24, by ChivalrousThe Monopoly on Honour: Her Bellatrix Lestrange

30th December 2014:
Can I just say wow?

I absolutely loved this!

I'll just get right to the review, because I'm so ready to tell you how amazing this is.

Your attention to detail is meticulous and wonderful. The details involving the Guild are awesome and I loved that entire part of the story!

In terms of characters, Magnus Darling is very interesting and I'd love to see more from him and get more information on his background. He sparks so much curiosity from me, I love it!

Alicia is a wonderfully portrayed Gryffindor. She is brave, but she's not stupid or headstrong and that really defines her as a character and sets her apart from all the other Gryffindors we know. (I'm looking at you, Ron Weasley!)

Astoria absolutely slays. There is nothing about her that I don't love. The way you've portrayed her is wonderful and since she is one of my favorite characters from the series I thank you!

I need more Draco! He's absolutely darling and I'm dying for more!

Lucius and Narcissa are wonderfully in canon. I've always had a soft spot for them, especially Lucius. I'm dying to know what his plan is! I'm assuming that it's some sort of self-sacrifice, but part of me hopes not, because I find his character very intriguing and I want more of him.

Daphne and Theodore! I'm so upset about Theo getting chunked into Azkaban! The relationship between him and Daphne was wonderfully placed, but I kinda wanna hit you for ripping them apart... Just kidding, I love the intensity it added to the story!

I can tell that you've put an intense amount of thought into your story and that's great! Sometimes though, your pacing is a bit too fast and sometimes I felt lost in all the new information. It's not that big of a deal, but it just adds a tad bit of confusion to a wonderful story!

Your plot, on the other hand, is executed brilliantly and I can really tell that every single scene means something and adds to the plot!

I absolutely love this story! I'm so excited for it!

You're a brilliant writer and I love the tone of this story!

A wonderful read!


Author's Response: Hi Ireland,

I'm so sorry about the late reply (and I will finish the edits on chapter 8 this weekend, I promise! - you've been incredibly patient with me, thank you!)

Ah, the Guild :) I don't think I have to tell you that it's one of my favourite aspects of this story - we've been talking about Magnus a lot, so you've probably realised that already :) But yes, I can promise you a whole lot more from him - we've only scratched the surface, so far, and we're about to go into the underworld, so to speak.

Alicia is one of the characters I find easiest to write, actually. Characters like Magnus and Lucius and Astoria especially, are fun to write but they also require so much more forethought and planning to write, because they have a much better idea than she does about what is actually going on. So I really like writing her, not because she isn't capable of subtlety (because she is, because in order to be a barrister you have to be able to manipulate language), but because she is an apprentice. My idea of her is that she - and to a lesser extent, Thaddeus, are the characters through which we learn, if that makes any sense at all?

I find that every single time I sit down to write an Astoria chapter, she becomes more and more complex, as in, Lucius and Magnus levels of complex. So it makes me so happy to see you're with me on this one! And there is a wonderful Draco bit coming up as well, which I hope you'll like.

That is actually my big difficulty with Lucius and Narcissa - keeping them in canon, but still complex and human. And as for the Plan, it's coming, is all I can say. Not that I'm deliberately drawing it out, it's simply that Lucius plays the long game.

For Daph, I genuinely can't wait until we get to her trial. It's going to be a big moment, or that's the idea, anyway! Will Theo turn up again? Honestly, I haven't decided!

I know, the pacing in the first three chapters... I will edit them at some point. And indeed, every scene is in there for a reason :)

Thank so much,
Celi xxx

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Review #25, by ChivalrousComplicated: In Which Breakfast is Traumatic

25th December 2014:
In honor of it being Christmas, could you please wrap Al up as a present and put a bow on top?

Please and thank you.

Anyways, getting on with the review!

I adore Olivia. She's just absolutely wonderful and snarky and so Slytherin it brings my heart joy.

Reading this chapter I do, however, find a couple of things that are strange. Olivia seems very quick to accept her new Gryffindor friends and there's not a lot of internal struggle for her. Maybe she's just accepting it and not really giving it much thought and that's fine! It just seems a bit strange to me at least.

You really are hitting me in the feels with this chapter! Bloody Scorpius Malfoy! His staunch loyalty to Cassie is absolutely darling and I love him for it. He was a bit nasty to Clara though, like the poor thing! He could have been rude quietly and not shouted across the Great Hall about it. Geez Scorpius!

Olivia's parents being sketchy is freaking me out... I need to know what's happening! Her Mum is hysterical like I'm torn between rolling my eyes and laughing my brains out every time she's involved!

Louis, Rose, Oz, and Joe are excellent supporting characters and I love each of them very much.

On the real though, where is Cassie!? Surprises are not fun for me, I like to know these things!

I absolutely love this story and even if you didn't like this chapter it was wonderful!

Thank you loads for updating!


P.S. Update soon! :)

Author's Response: Aww thank you so much! This review is quite astonishingly generous and has made me super smiley and happy :)

I totally see what you mean about Olivia being very quick to accept her new friend. Hopefully it'll make a bit more sense when the next few chapters are uploaded - she's not fully accepted them as her friendship circle yet, she's just in shock after Scor's outburst - but I'll definitely work on that when I come back and edit.

Scorpius was fairly unacceptably mean to Clara, but I'm really glad you understand what made him do it. He's having a bit of a touch time so is allowed a few nasty moments I think.

And I'm so glad you find Pansy funny! She's a terrible mother but is a lot of fun to write.

Thank you for such a lovely review! I'm really happy to hear you're enjoying reading, and will try to update asap when the queue opens again :)

Emma xx

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