Yea! Very happy now, and thank God George is going to be okay. Report Review
Yikes. That was too short! I need more!! Report Review
Wow, I really loved that chapter! Some question marks were strangely placed (and I'm not talking about the ones in place of quotes), but I thought it was very well done. Ron will be fine. He'd better be. Report Review
AHHHHH!!! AWESOME!!! Report Review
Yea! I'm so happy you updated. I was only able to pick out a couple of things that were in the sixth book, but I think you're doing a great job working around it.Author's Response: The slide-along- apparition, the position of the clock hands and Fleur showing up with Bill? The Dementor attack was something I had planned anyway, so it doesn't really count. Report Review
Love the end. I've been off the computer for the week, so I was so sure I was missing tons, but this is exactly what I wanted. Report Review
Stupid Charlie. Geez. Still, very good chapter and great save on the age difference. I always assumed Hermione was the youngest as well, and I think I'll always think of her that way, but you did a good job changing it. Report Review
Harry needs to turn Parvati away, I would encourage it. In fact, the reason why he and Parvati are even dating is sort of lost on me, I can't picture them together for very long. She just wants to be a teenage girl and go after all the cute boys, but as much as Harry deserves the luxury of being young and hormonal, he just doesn't really have the time or the emotional capacity for it, nor do I really want to put up with it when the perfect girl for him, the one that can make him open up, is sitting right in front of him. I wish I could talk some sense into Harry.... Report Review
These people are pathetic, they need to get over themselves and learn that there are more important things in life than feeling sorry for themselves (specifically Remus). I bet he's going to feel really sorry for what he did when James and Lily are killed. Still, love your story as much as ever! Report Review
Yea! I really want to read the other chapter, but I'm content with this one. Parvati... okay, I'm starting to hate her. But I do that a lot, hate the people who interfere with my favorite couples. Update soon. Report Review
Really, I liked the ending, though it could use a sequel, an epilogue wouldn't really do. Wink wink, nudge nudge....Author's Response: LOL! I get your hints, i'm most probably going to do a sequal so look out for that!!! Report Review
I loved it! I haven't laughed that hard in forever!Author's Response: Good to know I made you laugh! Report Review
I had a good laugh, definitely going to recommend this one. I'm off to practice pointless acts of evil on my sister and practice my evil laugh. Nyeh-heh-heh....Author's Response: Wow, they got this last chapter up fast...anyway, thanks for the reccomendation! And I too practiced my pointless evil tactics today...on a certain friend of mine...hahhaaaa...ok, that's done, thanks for reading! Report Review
I got all of them right! I think I may actually succeed in the evil biz, but first I have to come up with a new name....Author's Response: The whole 'name thing' is hard, I will admit, but I'm sure you will come out successful. Report Review
I love it. I'm learning tons already....Author's Response: A lot of this stuff comes in handy Report Review
I love Ron so much, his lines are always the best. I hate how in the movie either Harry or Hermione steal Ron's best quotes. Update soon! Report Review
Er, doesn't Crabbe have two b's and an e? Anyway, it doesn't matter. What a coincidence, my sister just let her pet toad free minutes before I read this story. Good chapter!Author's Response: Yes, your perfectly correct, it should have two b's and an e, but I was running on empty, no sleep, to much homework, and real work so I got lazy and didn't look up the spelling. I'm very sorry:( BUt other than that i'm thrilled that you enjoyed it!! You pet a toad eww!!! j/k some are very cute. Report Review
Oh! After I read the last chapter, for some reason I thought it was over! Imagine my surprise when I saw the next chapter today; I couldn't wait to read it, so I put off all my other things. I loved it! Report Review
ARGH! I shall kiss Ginny. '“Do you like it?” he asked, worried sick the answer would be no.' What kind of person admits they don't like the present someone gives them. "Hey, do you like this? I spent a ton of time trying to pick it out." "No, I hate it." Hermione's better than that. Ah well, poor insecure Ron, I love him to death.Author's Response: Yes, poor Ronnie is a tad insecure but come on, I think he sorta has the right to be. I read a comic (luann?) and Appeartly guys think that we girls are at times, cold and heartless . Although I hope Ron dosn't think that of Hermione. Yes, For Ron being insecure, it's hard not to love him. Thankies for the review! Report Review
This is too weird. Claire shouldn't interfere with the books, something bad will happen to Harry! I have to keep reading despite myself....Author's Response: Haha, sorry if the weirdness bothers you. Thank you for continuing to read. I hope you find the rest of the chapters less weird. Report Review
That is what I am so afraid of, changing the story and messing everything up. This plot is so delicate.... Report Review
I think we should let Sirius die. I wasn't honestly that upset when he died because I knew J. K. Rowling would give us a reason for it later. I did, however, cry when Harry did at the lake because I don't want him to be sad, no matter how much he acted like a jerk in the fifth book. On to the next chapter... Report Review
I hate the part where Harry loses to Diggory, I always am upset when I read it. This story puts my real dreams onto paper, except I would have ended up hugging Harry and crying by now. Report Review
I think after total elation would come complete and utter home sickness for me. Still, this story for some reason makes me want to give Harry a hug. I love it, which is strange, because normally I try to avoid these kinds of stories. Report Review
I've always dreamt of what I would do if I landed in the books, but recently I've decided I would kill myself or hide myself in a tiny remote cave very far away to prevent messing with the story in any way. The tiniest thing could throw the entire Harry Potter universe into complete chaos, especially if I knew what was going to happen. I wouldn't want to accidently let Voldemort become too powerful or kill my beloved Harry and Ron. However, I may send a note to Ron and Hermione telling them to hook up.... No, I wouldn't want to interfere. Good chapter, though. Report Review
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