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Review #1, by dystanyrose31I Will Dare : Chapter Fourteen: Pictures of You

25th May 2013:
I haven't finished reading your story yet, but I had t say something about this chapter in particular. I thought this was by far your best chapter. You have hit on so many different emotions and nailed the characters to a T.

I particularly enjoyed how you paired enemies together, Hermione and Pansy, Draco and Ron. You have done an amazing job of allowing them to open up to the other. I also enjoyed the Luna, Harry pairing, to shoe that even Luna can be wild and hurt by the rumours, and Harry is more than the hero.

So all in all, well done. I am looking forward to finishing your story.

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Review #2, by dystanyrose31Chasing Fate: An Excuse To Be Close

23rd April 2013:
I am really enjoying your story. I have also favoured your first part. You asked last chapter what we would like to see happen, quite honestly I can't see Hermione leaving Dean unless he dies or ends up cheating on her with a healer. That being said I like the whole lead up with the "Master" and the dark and mysterious of who he is. I think it is Lucuis Malfoy, or Lestrange. However another thing I would like to see happen would be Hermione actually kidnapped and Draco be the one to find her. Or Draco and her find Romeo and Juliette again, without the dying part. I think in this story Hermione should end up with Draco's baby, and him not believe her at first that it is his to add to the drama of the situation and danger(getting kidnapped while preggers).

Again I would to end this with a keep going I love your story so far.

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