Reading Reviews From Member: CrazyHPWriter
  
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Review #1, by CrazyHPWriterNobody's Child.: Nobody's Child.

13th May 2013:
THIS STORY IS AMAZING! Your portrayal of Teddy's emotions and the whole photo album thing... AMAZING!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. Really glad you enjoyed it.

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Review #2, by CrazyHPWriterThe Road to Hell.: The Road to Hell.

13th May 2013:
I like this story, but I felt like it was skipping over emotions and there wasn't very much description. I do like your portrayal of his father, though.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.

Yeah, you've a point about it skipping over a lot. I was going through a lot of time, so I guess some things got short-changed. And I'm not very good at description anyway - not physical description anyway.

Thanks for pointing those out.

And glad you liked the portrayed of Barty Crouch Sn. It's based a lot on the comment in the books about how people said he should have paid more attention to his son and maybe he wouldn't have ended up as he did.


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