Argh! So heartbreaking! But I'm so glad you updated, I've been waiting for a new chapter as patiently as possible. Looking forward to new chapters! Wonderful writing!Author's Response: Sarah,
Oh, yes... this one is quite heart-breaking and very difficult to write. I mean it was HARD!
Thank you so much for your compliments. I've been working on this next chapter and will have it much sooner than the last one. So sorry to make you wait.
The war has started and there is more to come.
Thank you so much for your patience and especially for coming back to read more.
Thank you sincerely,
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I cannot stop reading this. I have to physically stop myself from reading on when I'm reading this story. It is absolutely wonderful! Keep writing, I can't wait to read what's next!Author's Response: Sarah,
Wow! Really? Oh, my goodness, that is quite a compliment. I'm so glad that you like it so much.
What's next has been written, but unfortunately I missed the queue closure by mere seconds. I was devistated that I missed it. :(
But when it re-opens, I promise to post it as soon as I can.
Well, thank you so much for your kind words that bring excitement and much encouragement.
Merry Christmas to you and your family wherever you are...
Dark Whisper Report Review
I have not been able to stop reading this story since I started it two days ago. It's really great so far, I like it a lot. I've been noticing a few areas where you're sentence structure gets confusing and where there are extra words that shouldn't be there, however, these are pretty easily overlooked. I am absolutely taken away by your writing. It is so wonderful. I just recommend taking a little more time to edit your work to make sure everything makes sense. Keep writing! I'm excited to read what happens next!Author's Response: Thanks for reading and I'm glad you like the story. Sorry you didn't like some of my writing. I always take a lot of time to edit my work, but when you work solidly on something for a month, sometimes you can't see the errors right infront of you. I tend to write it as it comes into my head or as I think Hermione will be thinking it, so it may seem like I'm rambling, which I know some of the time I am, but Hermione is pretty confused at parts in the story and so it may come out pretty confusing on the page. I always read and re- read my work so many times before I edit and I am currently going back and re- editing earlier chapters, so hopefully any mistakes you've noticed will be fixed.
Thanks for reading and hopefully you will like what it to come. Report Review
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful! I absolutely loved this.Author's Response: Thank you, thank you! I'm so glad you stuck with the story and enjoyed it so! Report Review
This was a beautifully written story. I absolutely am in love with it! Wonderful job!Author's Response: Thank you! That makes me very happy. :) Report Review
This is absolutely wonderful so far! I can't wait for the next chapter! Though I understand if it's a little bit of time before it gets posted, I know how life likes to get in the way. I'm really enjoying where this story is going so far. :)Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much! Real life is just so inconsiderate, isn't it? I constantly have ideas stewing in my mind, so even if I'm not physically writing at the moment, rest assured it's being worked on. Hoping this will be one of the longest breaks in between chapters, and looking for the next one to be up early summer for a conservative guess. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Your support means SO MUCH! ~Renny Report Review
Love it, love it love it! I really enjoy reading this story!Author's Response: aww. thanks. I'm so glad you like it! Thank you for reviewing! Report Review
I am so pleased you decided to create a sequel. I absolutely love The Dream of One Night and I was perusing the new stories on here after a long while of not visiting this site and I was pleasantly surpirsed when I came across this one! I'm so excited to read this as you work on it!Author's Response: Well, thank you! *I'm* so pleased that you decided to read it and leave me a review ;) It really means a ton to me. Reviews are really the best way I have to gauge if anyone actually notices that this story exists and is reading it (which in turn really helps my motivation to keep writing! I mean, I'd do it anyway just for me, but it would probably take me a lot longer). I hope you like the rest of what I've written so far. I should be able to start serious work on it again early summer since things are a bit hectic in my personal life right now. I've set an unofficial goal for myself to have at least half of it done by the end of the year so it doesn't take me four years like the first story did to write. Thank you a million times over again for your kind words! ~Renny Report Review
Aw! I hope she says yes!!! Report Review
This is a really wonderful story so far! I find myself feeling disappointed that the chapters are so short! But this is a very sweet story and I'm really enjoying reading it. I haven't read a Hermione/Fred or George in a LONG time and I was pleasantly met with this cute story. :) Keep writing! Would absolutely love to read more!Author's Response: Thank you so very much! I'll keep writing and do my very best to make the chapters longer! Thank you!! :) Report Review
This is really wonderfully written. I love the idea. Would love to read more!Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you continue to read :) Report Review
This is really wonderful so far. I forgot about this story for a little while, as I haven't been on this site in quite a long time, so I reread it from the beginning to here, and it's really great. I absolutely love where this is going. Keep writing!Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review, I'm glad you like it! Report Review
I just wanted to let you know that I absolutely love this story. I recently decided to re-read some of the stories on HPFF because I missed it and I came across this one in my favorites. It makes me smile. I don't really know if this means much now since it has been a while, but I just wanted to let you know how happy this story makes me. :) Report Review
I am really enjoying this story so far! I hope you update soon! :)Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm working on the next chapter now. ;) *HUGS* Report Review
This made my day increadibly better! I really needed a laugh! The story was cute. I really enjoyed reading it! :) Report Review
Loved it! Really haunting, I can literally see the scenes playing out before my eyes.Author's Response: Thank you very much! ^_^ Report Review
This is awesome so far! It's beautifully written and I love it.Author's Response: Thanks so much! I should have a new chapter up in a day or two. Waiting to be validated.
~Renfair Report Review
Wow, that was fast...well, I loved this chapter as much as the rest of it and I can't wait to find out what happens next!! Report Review
Yay!! I can't wait for the next chapter! This was so cute. Report Review
Oh!! This was beautiful! Sad, but beautiful. Author's Response: Aww, thanks very much! Report Review
Sniff. That was so sad, but beautifully written. PLease update soon! I'm interested in what will happen next!Author's Response: Yes, it was, I actually was tearing up when I thought it up. :(
Thank you for reviewing. Report Review
Aw! That's so sad! I loved this, it was amazingly written. Snape is one of my favorite characters and I was so upset that he died. But I liked this one-shot. It was really cute.Author's Response: Thank you very much! ^_^ Report Review
Aww. This was amazing! I loved it. I'm glad they're together...for now. Author's Response: For now, haha. :P Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
I like it so far!! Can't wait to read more. *.~Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much! =D Report Review
Aw!! It was so good but depressingly good. Does that even make sense??? Well anyway, it was good and I loved it even though it was sad. Thought provoking also...at least for me anyway.*.~Author's Response: Makes total sense and I'm glad you feel that way. Twas what I was going for! :) Report Review
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