Reading Reviews From Member: Sarah
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Review #1, by SarahLying Josephine: This Is For

17th October 2017:
Yay! An update! I really enjoyed this chapter, I thought your portrayal of the Weasley's was wonderful and I'm so glad we got to hear Jo speak up a bit more. Always anxiously awaiting new chapters. Loving this so far!

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Review #2, by SarahWrapped in Red: Draco

27th April 2017:
Yay! New chapter! I'm so glad you've updated. I started this when you first published and have loved all of it! Looking forward to reading more!

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Review #3, by SarahThe Shadow and the Soul: A Light in the Abyss

27th November 2016:
So happy for the update! I'm loving the tension between the two and I can't wait to read on!

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Review #4, by SarahThe Shadow and the Soul: A Hall of Ghosts and Shadows

13th May 2016:
I just binge read Prey and the first chapters of this sequel. Really amazing. This is some of the best writing I've ever read! I am anxious to see how this continues!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind words! Delighted you enjoyed Prey and I hope you continue to stick around for this part of their story!

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Review #5, by SarahDelilah's Black Book of Poems: Epilogue: What happened?

14th February 2016:
So wonderful. So so so wonderful. I truly enjoyed reading your story from beginning to end. Beautiful ending.

Author's Response: Sarah,

Oh, thank you so much for taking a chance on such a long story and sticking to it all the way to the end. I'm happy to read your thoughts on "the end." It was a true journey and a dream in my heart to see it through.

Thank you from my heart...
Dark Whisper

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Review #6, by SarahDisappear: Rebirth

13th December 2015:
Loving this story so far. Looking forward to more updates!

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Review #7, by SarahA Reason to Win: Chapter 6

10th December 2015:
Hi! Your writing is very good. But as you have pointed out yourself, there a few plot holes. In your editing, I would focus more on explaining the reasoning behind the suspicion of Shakelbolt and other members of the Order. I feel like that needs to be explained better and worked into the story more. It just seemed so sudden. Things in general seem to happen very suddenly, which can work for certain instances, such as an ambush by death eaters, but things like McGonagal out of the blue showing up to offer positions as professors at Hogwarts needs a little more planning. In that case, I feel like McGonagall would have set up an official meeting with Hermione rather than just dropping in at the burrow. Other than the plot holes and some more organizing of the story itself, your writing is very good and your story line is very interesting. I do hope you continue with it and get a chance for some editing!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the feedback! I'm hoping to get lots of time to work on it over the winter break, although I'm a little torn between editing the (numerous) plot holes right away or plowing through while making notes of them and going back at the end to do a rewrite. I'll keep in mind what you've said about the organization and things seeming too sudden. Again, I'm thrilled you took the time to leave a review, it means a lot to me.

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Review #8, by SarahWrapped in Red: Chapter Four: Wrapped in Red

3rd December 2015:
Super cute! This is a really precious story so far!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

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Review #9, by SarahDelilah's Black Book of Poems: The Magic of Delilah's Black Book of Poems

16th November 2015:
I'm so glad you updated! This story is so wonderful and I can't wait to find out the ending! Truly beautiful writing.

Author's Response: Sarah,
Thank you so much for sending me your review! I really needed it today. You have no idea! Truly it sends me encouragement to keep going. THANK YOU!

More soon, as I hope to have this story FINISHED by Christmas!

I really needed this today!
Dark Whisper

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Review #10, by SarahNothing Else Matters: Epilogue: Seven Years Later

26th May 2014:
Wonderful, just wonderful. I've really enjoyed reading this story and of course the first one as well! Both are among my all time favorites. Thank you so much for sharing your creations, they were truly wonderful and a pleasure to read.

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks so, so much for your review! I'm so glad you enjoyed my stories! I really enjoyed writing them (ok, maybe not always the writing part, but the reading it after I wrote a chapter and going, "Oh! This is much better than I thought it was! *phew*") It's always amazing to read that someone likes my writing, and then to know it's among their favorites is even better. Thank you so much again for taking a moment to let me know you enjoyed everything. Take care! ~Renny

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Review #11, by SarahLying Josephine: Nice to Meet You

3rd March 2014:
This is really well written. I am seriously enjoying Josephine's personality and how it is portrayed next to Fred's. I really hope you continue with this, it really is a good story so far. I'd like to see where it's headed. Hope to see an update soon!

Author's Response: Hey, thank you so much! I'm so happy you feel that way! It's always so great to hear that people like Jo both as an individual and in regards to her relationship with Fred! Woot! ^.^ And an update is right around the corner! Chapter four is completely written, it just needs to be edited, so it'll be up very soon! :-D Thank you so much for taking the time to leave such a kind review! I truly appreciate it! :)

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Review #12, by SarahDelilah's Black Book of Poems: After the Fall

3rd July 2013:
Ah! So excited that you updated! I cannot wait for the next chapter! I'm very excited to see what happens next. :)

Author's Response: Sarah,

Oh, thank you for your excitement for my Delilah story. You won't have much of a wait as it is ready to post when the queue reopens. And then it will still need validated, so who knows when it will post exactly, but it will be sooner than later.

More of Draco and his elves soon...
Dark Whisper

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Review #13, by SarahDelilah's Black Book of Poems: Kiss Me Goodbye, Love

23rd April 2013:
Argh! So heartbreaking! But I'm so glad you updated, I've been waiting for a new chapter as patiently as possible. Looking forward to new chapters! Wonderful writing!

Author's Response: Sarah,

Oh, yes... this one is quite heart-breaking and very difficult to write. I mean it was HARD!

Thank you so much for your compliments. I've been working on this next chapter and will have it much sooner than the last one. So sorry to make you wait.

The war has started and there is more to come.

Thank you so much for your patience and especially for coming back to read more.

Thank you sincerely,
Dark Whisper

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Review #14, by SarahDelilah's Black Book of Poems: Trust Me for an Hour

9th December 2012:
I cannot stop reading this. I have to physically stop myself from reading on when I'm reading this story. It is absolutely wonderful! Keep writing, I can't wait to read what's next!

Author's Response: Sarah,

Wow! Really? Oh, my goodness, that is quite a compliment. I'm so glad that you like it so much.

What's next has been written, but unfortunately I missed the queue closure by mere seconds. I was devistated that I missed it. :(

But when it re-opens, I promise to post it as soon as I can.

Well, thank you so much for your kind words that bring excitement and much encouragement.

Merry Christmas to you and your family wherever you are...

Dark Whisper

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Review #15, by SarahScars: Changed

8th December 2012:
I have not been able to stop reading this story since I started it two days ago. It's really great so far, I like it a lot. I've been noticing a few areas where you're sentence structure gets confusing and where there are extra words that shouldn't be there, however, these are pretty easily overlooked. I am absolutely taken away by your writing. It is so wonderful. I just recommend taking a little more time to edit your work to make sure everything makes sense. Keep writing! I'm excited to read what happens next!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and I'm glad you like the story. Sorry you didn't like some of my writing. I always take a lot of time to edit my work, but when you work solidly on something for a month, sometimes you can't see the errors right infront of you. I tend to write it as it comes into my head or as I think Hermione will be thinking it, so it may seem like I'm rambling, which I know some of the time I am, but Hermione is pretty confused at parts in the story and so it may come out pretty confusing on the page. I always read and re- read my work so many times before I edit and I am currently going back and re- editing earlier chapters, so hopefully any mistakes you've noticed will be fixed.
Thanks for reading and hopefully you will like what it to come.

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Review #16, by SarahSlytherin's Angel: The Platform

7th December 2012:
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful! I absolutely loved this.

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you! I'm so glad you stuck with the story and enjoyed it so!

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Review #17, by SarahSo, Listen...: April 1996

24th May 2012:
This was a beautifully written story. I absolutely am in love with it! Wonderful job!

Author's Response: Thank you! That makes me very happy. :)

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Review #18, by SarahNothing Else Matters: Chapter Four - Severus

3rd May 2012:
This is absolutely wonderful so far! I can't wait for the next chapter! Though I understand if it's a little bit of time before it gets posted, I know how life likes to get in the way. I'm really enjoying where this story is going so far. :)

Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much! Real life is just so inconsiderate, isn't it? I constantly have ideas stewing in my mind, so even if I'm not physically writing at the moment, rest assured it's being worked on. Hoping this will be one of the longest breaks in between chapters, and looking for the next one to be up early summer for a conservative guess. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Your support means SO MUCH! ~Renny

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Review #19, by SarahFlesh Memory: Brain Teasers

28th April 2012:
Love it, love it love it! I really enjoy reading this story!

Author's Response: aww. thanks. I'm so glad you like it! Thank you for reviewing!

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Review #20, by SarahNothing Else Matters: Chapter One - Avrille

26th April 2012:
I am so pleased you decided to create a sequel. I absolutely love The Dream of One Night and I was perusing the new stories on here after a long while of not visiting this site and I was pleasantly surpirsed when I came across this one! I'm so excited to read this as you work on it!

Author's Response: Well, thank you! *I'm* so pleased that you decided to read it and leave me a review ;) It really means a ton to me. Reviews are really the best way I have to gauge if anyone actually notices that this story exists and is reading it (which in turn really helps my motivation to keep writing! I mean, I'd do it anyway just for me, but it would probably take me a lot longer). I hope you like the rest of what I've written so far. I should be able to start serious work on it again early summer since things are a bit hectic in my personal life right now. I've set an unofficial goal for myself to have at least half of it done by the end of the year so it doesn't take me four years like the first story did to write. Thank you a million times over again for your kind words! ~Renny

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Review #21, by SarahFrom Nightmares To Sweet Dreams: The Question

26th April 2012:
Aw! I hope she says yes!!!

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Review #22, by SarahFrom Nightmares To Sweet Dreams: The Understanding

23rd April 2012:
This is a really wonderful story so far! I find myself feeling disappointed that the chapters are so short! But this is a very sweet story and I'm really enjoying reading it. I haven't read a Hermione/Fred or George in a LONG time and I was pleasantly met with this cute story. :) Keep writing! Would absolutely love to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you so very much! I'll keep writing and do my very best to make the chapters longer! Thank you!! :)

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Review #23, by SarahSlytherin's Angel: The Deal

23rd April 2012:
This is really wonderfully written. I love the idea. Would love to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you continue to read :)

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Review #24, by SarahFlesh Memory: Just Keeping Busy

19th April 2012:
This is really wonderful so far. I forgot about this story for a little while, as I haven't been on this site in quite a long time, so I reread it from the beginning to here, and it's really great. I absolutely love where this is going. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review, I'm glad you like it!

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Review #25, by Sarah:

20th February 2011:
I just wanted to let you know that I absolutely love this story. I recently decided to re-read some of the stories on HPFF because I missed it and I came across this one in my favorites. It makes me smile. I don't really know if this means much now since it has been a while, but I just wanted to let you know how happy this story makes me. :)

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