Bubbley Tigley Giggles of happiness, I normally hate songfics but that is really good. I take alot of frustration out on my dulcimer and I can relate with Lily. It's great! and of all people you know I dont say things unless I mean them! :):):):)

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, I do know how you don't say things unless you mean them.

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Wow! what a way to find out! I love it! Keep It up. you did have a few gramatical errors but nothing too annoying. Happy Christmas!

Author's Response: I'll probably be posting it tomorrow, so it will be validated some time during the weekend. Thanks for reviewing!

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wow im impressed. I love the letters idea it leaves you to do the imagining of all the things they are doing

Author's Response: thanks for the review.

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Good Job, I like your start. Hedwig is a girl though not a boy. Happy writing!

Author's Response: Yeah, I realized that after I had already wrote that part. I just didn't think to go back and fix it. Good catch though, I give you a cookie.

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well first off you have some editing to do. The comment Hermione made about causing the eaves dropping is interesting and i am curious to see where that goes. keep writing an maybe try to make you chapters longer it was a bit short and it has lots of room for more. Happy writing.

Author's Response: I edited and when I get my next part done i will be combining the two so that the first chapter is longer. Please check back and let me know what you think, thanks for reviewing

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(HOWLER!) How old are you any way?12 or something. Your review on my page is rather touching, but don't two face it. Say what you mean, if you don't like an honest review then don't ask people besides your friends to read your work. By the way, I love your "molten lava," comment, it was great, I will have to remember that one. Next time I review your work I won't use the word sucks, I will be more sophisticated and use words like, dreadful, and appauling, or perhaps something smaller like, B-A-D! or YUCKY! Feel free to send any and all editory suggestions to me. I am open and willing to change any mistakes that someone has pointed out. Thank you for the review and I will consider revising as soon as possible. (End of Howler!) GOT MILK!?!?

Author's Response: Yes, I am twelve. I am an aspiraring writer, and I'm not the best punctuator or speller. So what?

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ok if people are telling you you should make your chapters longer... YOU SHOULD!!!!!! OR WE WILL STOP READING THEM! none of us want to waste our time with square characters that have no feelings and only dialogue. by all means keep writing but actually follow advice!

Author's Response: I've been trying to edit now.

Author's Response: I combined some of the chapters, and added some feeling into it.

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ok where did this come from? your chapter is short and you give NO background and NO explanation, and your Description sucks. you said you dont mind fire so here it is.

Author's Response: Constructive critism is great. It's really good for writing. What you said about the chapters, I decided to combine them.

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Yipee!! i love it when will you write again?!? I love it! you havnt lost it! it was great!

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when are you going to update? your story intrigues me and i am curious as to where it will lead.

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huh good

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your chapters are short but i like the story.

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Yeah!!!!! Yipee!!!! Finally!!!! Ahhhhhhhhh......

Author's Response: Hey! Good to see you back. Glad you're excited about the story too! LoL Take a look at the missing moment for this story and let me know what you think about it. Please

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Yipee! she's back!!!! Hooray!!! (just like me...I havent read all yet but i know i will love it) hope u good.

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eh... ok so far. you do realize that alestor is moody's first name dont you?

Author's Response: yeah, but Alestor is also the Deamon of Lightning. Moody dunt come into it.

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pretty funny... you should continue on with it.

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good job

Author's Response: Thanxs

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Why?!? Why must you keep us in complete and total agony??? I cant wait for your next chapter. Hope all is well in your world..

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good chap.

Author's Response: thanks

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that slime ball.

Author's Response: haha thanks for the lovely review... I assume your talking about McLaggen... I hated him from the start so I just had to add something against him here...

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nice.

Author's Response: Thanks!!! i love getting reviews even if they're short. I love how you actually think of me :)

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wow powerful. my mum always knows when something is wrong with my Dad or my sisters and I . She saw my dad's NDE a year ago when it was happening so you are doing a good job with the discription. Keep it up.

Author's Response: Thanks i am typing like crazy!!!

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I hope you update soon. You had a good start. Keep up the good work.

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He He He He.... good one

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wow i love it... its so sad that he will never know his child. I hope its a twins... girl/ boy. Any way great job.

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