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Review #1, by eatmycupcakesJust Fly With It : Problem #6

9th February 2015:
I like this story. I feel like if you're gonna make James and Brielle so close in the other story, and have people read both, then you should probably have her mentioned more often. Especially in the potions class seeing as how Brielle was partnered with Fred and James. I do like how you've portrayed James though. I like the tension between he and Addison. I just think that if you're gonna have people see a link between the two stories you should make sure that there is somewhat of a parallel of the two timelines. Especially with the Halloween party if you ever include it in this story.

Author's Response: Thank you! Brielle will be added more into the story however both JSWI and TIT are not directly related but I understand what you are saying! I am planning on including a Halloween party so I will keep that advice in mind!

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Review #2, by eatmycupcakesThe Invisible Thief : The Return of TPG

9th February 2015:
This is such an amazing story, and every time it pops up, I just can't stop myself from rereading the entire thing before I get to the new chapters. I love Brielle, but I really love Leslie and her relationship with Fred, mainly because I empathize with how she felt about him. I really hope that you get the new chapters up soon, because this time around, I really, really, really need to see how Brielle makes up with Al and what they get up to with TPG. Please update soon!!!

Author's Response: Thank you that is so sweet! Leslie and Fred are both so much fun to write, of course, so is Brielle though. I'm updating today!

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Review #3, by eatmycupcakesRisen: Out of the Ashes : A Discovery, A Rainy Day, and A Trip Down Memory Lane

31st January 2015:
Hi, I have to say that I really love your story, however, there is one inconsistency in this chapter. When James tells Charlie that it was Ava who ran up to him after he yelled at Charlie's father, that's not what happened, I'm pretty sure that it was Harper who did that because it's more true to her character. Also, I checked, and it was Harper.

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for the review.

That part you mention is a part of the story I haven't gotten to yet in the editing process. I have been careful about leaving notes at the end of each chapter about the editing and to not read too far ahead- because of things like that. So yes, in the original story it had been Ava but I changed it to Harper. I will change that when I get to it. :)

Thanks again for reading. :)

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Review #4, by eatmycupcakesComplicated: In Which Things Get A Little Bit More Complicated

19th January 2015:
This is such a great story. I bet Cass ran off with Liv's dad. I've felt like that might be the case since a couple of chapters ago. And I'm sure that that's what Liv's dad wants to talk to her about.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! Andrew's mistress will be revealed soon :)

Emma x

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Review #5, by eatmycupcakesThe Invisible Thief : Sideline Kisses

9th September 2013:
Why don't you write faster, if it's possible can you do like one chapter a day? It would be awesome

Author's Response: I love how you want more however that really isn't the nicest thing to say to someone. I spend a lot of time writing and I have over five+ chapters ready to post the problem is I can't post every day because chapters have to be validated and besides that I have a life outside of writing for a fanfiction. I'm glad you want more but i'd appreciate if you left me a review telling me what you think and how I can improve instead of something like this. I actually update must faster then anyone I've ever seen on this fanfiction.

Thank you for leaving a review xx

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Review #6, by eatmycupcakesThe Art of Being Bad: The Art of Fraternizing with Puppy-Kicking, Child-Punting, Owl-Punching Ruffians

14th August 2013:
I absolutely fucking love this. I was in stiches the entire time I was reading this. Please, please,please write more. I want to see what she does next.

Author's Response: Well I absolutely effing love you, eatmycupcakes. Haha that's awesome! I consider a day I made a person laugh a successful day. Of course, the day I made you laugh was about three months ago. And I'm probably not that funny in real life -- I use puns a lot -- so I haven't spent a day well in awhile. Anyway, the next chappie is in the queue!

Thanks for the review!! :)

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Review #7, by eatmycupcakesHalf and Half: Quidditch Plays and Uncertanties

27th July 2013:
You keep making my stomach do loop-de-loops can you please finish this wickedly awesome story so that I can know how it ends.

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Review #8, by eatmycupcakesThe Invisible Thief : Borrowing is not Stealing

6th June 2013:
CONTINUE! I ship it already!

Author's Response: I'm glad you do!
You're too sweet :')
Next chapter should be up very soon

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Review #9, by eatmycupcakesThe Life of Anni Powells : The Life of Hugo Weasley

6th June 2013:
This is pretty awesome, I wish there was more for me to read!

Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate that!(: There will be more to come soon! ~Janelle(:

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Review #10, by eatmycupcakesWarning: This Girl Is Not A People Person: Intoxicated

20th April 2013:
Are you going to make James be in love with effie? Because if you are, I'm really not going to be able to continue reading this story. Even if he was, it would be really cool to see him not get the girl in the end. Like, see him and Scorpius both attempt to gain her affections and Effie decide that even though he was her best friend, she doesn't like him that way and that she was going to stay with Scorpius. However, if you already have the story written there's no use in changing it.

Author's Response: i'm glad you've said that because i can see that some people who read it might predict that happening but i've already decided on my characters and i actually dont think James would fall in love with Effie - i don't want to spoil what i've planned to write by saying this but James wont ever really love Effie like that. thank-you for reading and reviewing, it's refreshing to hear an honest opinion!

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Review #11, by eatmycupcakesThe Kissing Booth: Valentine's Day

20th April 2013:
you should do one for every holiday, and for each of the weasley cousins, or at least try, it could be funny. This was really good by the way

Author's Response: That's actually a pretty brilliant idea, I really like that idea! I might actually do that (and I most likely will). I will attempt to make them as hilarious as possible. And I'm glad that you enjoyed this!

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Review #12, by eatmycupcakesBulldozer: Ghosts and Potions

19th April 2013:
I really like this, I like how you portrayed your characters, and I hope that you write more!

Author's Response: Thanks! I shall be updating soon.

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Review #13, by eatmycupcakesWarning: This Girl Is Not A People Person: The Ice Queen Is Melting

15th April 2013:
I like the writing of this. If you're worried about Effie not being mean enough, then have her birthday come up, or the anniversary of Rainie's death. She has gone a little soft, but that's to be expected from a teenage girl with her first boyfriend. All in all, you did a good job with this.

Author's Response: aw thank-you, that's a really good suggestion it will help me because i've been getting stuck! thank-you so much for reviewing and i hope you enjoyed reading it!

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Review #14, by eatmycupcakesMissing: Tori

17th March 2013:
I don't think I've reviewed this story yet, but I've tracked it for a while. I love your plotline. I like the characters and the way you don't let us know what happened with Tori as the story unwinds. I like Charlie, and love the different view points that everyone has. Thanks for writing this!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks a lot for the super sweet review! I'm glad you chose to review this chapter, as it was one of my favourites to write!

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