Rofl! the bodily function thing was so funny! haha. I love the way you wrote this and how I your writings and descriptions made me feel bad for poor Remus. Your great at writing and please, please, please write more!
AllieAuthor's Response: Thanks so much for your rewiew and your support! This is my first ever fanfiction, and it's nice to know people are reading it. I hope this story continues to live up to your standards, and chapter three who'll be posted soon :) Report Review
It's me again:) I think your story is really great! I think it's hilarious how Wormtail think he paints good, but is really terrible, haha. The way you write lets be know more about the characters. I like this and think it's fascinating!
Allie Report Review
Your doing good! You describe Hermione perfectly, she fits just like her character in the book. I thought this was an interesting point of view, and enjoyed it very much!
AllieAuthor's Response: Thank you so much :) I'm glad you enjoyed it! xx Report Review
This was a very interesting story! I was fascinated by how you used a phobia, and I wanted to read more. Your writings give me a good idea of how the character looks, thinks and feels. Keep writing :)
AllieAuthor's Response: Aww thank you! All your compliments just made my day. :'D
Don't worry, I will keep writing, feel free to check out more stories of my stories, I have plenty. ;) (shameless self-promoting. :p)
Thanks for the lovely review! :D Report Review
Hey! This is pretty good! I love how descriptive you are, and that cliffhanger... Well I totally want to read more :) Keep writing please, and if you do, I'll keep reading. It's a great start!
AllieAuthor's Response: You are the first one to review...Thank you soo much for reading it. Next chapter will be here soon.:) Report Review
Before I had a Hpff account I remember randomly searching and finding this story. I instantly wanted to read more and more and more. You did a great job writing this novel. Most stories I read are overly dramatic, but you ended this perfectly. Thank you for writing this work of art,
AllieAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! You just made my day! I'm glad you liked it and thanks for the review! Report Review
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