That was heart-shatteringly beautiful! I really loved it. Excellent work.

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Wow, that was amazing. Excellent work! You captured a lot of emotion and painted the memories beautifully.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you appreciated it, thanks for the review!

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oh no! a twist. Congrats, I'm on the edge of my seat and demand an update lol (jk on the whole demanding thing.. though I do look forward to it.) Great job so far. Really diggin' it.

Author's Response: hey! lol, (chapter 5 is waiting validation. thanks for being so demanding!) lol

i'm really excitied that you think my story is good. you're on the edge of your seat? great! that's where i want you!! thanks for taking the time to read and review!
so :D

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aww romance! I'm really diggin' your story so far. I can't wait to read more.

ps: I read your response to my first review and I am very very flattered. I don't have any suggestions, I think you're doing great. Keep up the good work! (update soon!)

Author's Response: hey! that YOU again-so much. chapter 4 should be up soon and then i've got a looong chapter 5 ready to go. really excited to know what you think! thanks for the encouragement.
so


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so far so good :)

Author's Response: thanks! glad you like it!
so

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I am really looking forward to finishing this story. ^_^

Author's Response: I hope so, ^_^ Thanks for the review.

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after you "preview chapter" it'll show you your chapter and all the big gaps are there, if you go down to where you pasted your text and take care of the spaces (they show up there as well) then "save" chapter it should help. :)

The story- :( I hope this gets fixed. Poor Hermione. I still can't figure out if Cho really cares or not.. lol I guess I'll just have read to find out.
I'm really enjoying this story btw.

Author's Response: Thanks for the tip. But I really can't fix the big spaces...There's a red text that says: Must be in double return...or something like that.

Thanks for the review, btw.

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:( poor Hermione.. unrequited love sucks hardcore...

Author's Response: Yeah, poor one, huh? ^_^ Thanks again.

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huh.. this shall be interesting. Good story so far. I can't wait to find out how this all unfolds.

Author's Response: Haay ^_^ another review. Thanks. The next chapter will be validated soon.

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Very interesting. I look forward to seeing how this develops.

Author's Response: wow! you actually checked out my story- i'm honored. it's my first FF so i'm hopeful i can keep the interst up. i've got 9 chapters done and i know where i'm going... if you have any suggestions for me [being such an awesome author ;) ] i would welcome any and all.

thanks so much for taking the time to read and review! (i'm grinning ear to ear!)
thanks again!!!

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I like this twist. It gives the story suspense and some where to go. I know I've mentioned it before, but this story is still flowing really well.

Author's Response: I don't think that I could write a story without some element of twist. Thanks for reviewing. :)

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bum bum bum! lol. I love it so far! very nice I look forward to reading the rest.

Author's Response: Well have fun reading, and be sure to tell me what you think. :)

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I really enjoy your writing style. It's easy to follow and it flows nicely. The story itself was magnificent. Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you!

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I really enjoyed it. I thought it was written very well, and it was honestly a great plot. Nice work!

Author's Response: Yay, thanks so much!

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That was a very cute story. Nicely done.

Author's Response: thank you! ^_^

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ha! I like it.

Author's Response: ^_^ thanks!

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I like the story so for, it's very quaint. I will admit that there are quite a few typos... that throws it off a bit.

Author's Response: thank you. sorry. i went back to fix them, so they are just waiting for validation.

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It was a cute start.

Author's Response: ^_^

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That was so sweet... and very very sad. I really liked it. Excellent!

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. =)

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That was really quite cute. A lot of things you wouldn't expect happened but I really liked it. Good job!


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very nice. This prologue was written magnificently. I look forward to reading the rest.

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope that you enjoy the rest.

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that was incredible! Great job!

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I loved the story it was great.but you CANNOT leave it like that!! Good story none the less.

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AWW that was adorable! Very good, very cute.

Author's Response: Thank-you!

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I LOVED IT. I thought it was adoable. good job.

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