What can I say? It's absolutely brilliant. I love that Isa is the one who has to tell everyone else exactly what to do, and she seems to me a lot stronger than she was at the start of The Lost Marauder's Love.
10/10 :)Author's Response: I'm glad your liking it chazzie :)
I wanted to make her stronger, better, happier (even with the war). I based her off me in a lot of ways so I wanted to put her through the changes that I went through. Plus having a child and losing David Potter made her grow up a lot.
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Again, great storyline. I love your characters and the way you have suggested that peter is the traitor, without placing the blame on him. Keep writing!Author's Response: Chazzie!
New chapters will be going up soon. It's hard because my tablet doesn't allow me to update, but the next will be going up very soon.
I'm glad your liking the story. Keep reading to find out what happens next. As always please keep reviewing. It makes my day to get your comments.
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Ace so far! Im guessing here but... The sweet was still in James' jumper which Alvie now has. She eats the sweet, becomes pregnant and thinks it's hers and Albus'? Anyway, great story and keep writing! :)Author's Response: Hm, we'll see ;)
I'm glad you're enjoying it. Next chapter is being written... Maybe it's finished, I can't decide haha.
Thanks for reading and reviewing! :) I was staring to lose hope because my writing's just getting worse and worse, but knowing you're enjoying it makes it better :)
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Loved it! I cried, it was really touching. Wonderful. Report Review
Im not sure which I love more - this or your novel! It is honestly amazing. I wanted to cry for George, and the way he was so broken. I cant imagine life without my twin, so I cant think what it would feel like, aside from the dispair. My sister loves it too. You should really do a sequel... *hint hint* :)
Absolutley 10/10Author's Response: Ok you're now the second person to tell me I need to do a follow up. If I ever finish "A Lost Marauder Love" I will write a follow up to "I've always loved you."
Any tips or ideas you have for the follow up let me know. Report Review
Ace few chapters, I loved them! I ment to say in the other reveiw that the trip was really well writen, and the pizza part quite funny, as i one had to order pizza for 12 people and nearly got the wrong orders. Thank goodnes for my twin! I love remus, and I know I say it in nearly every review but you write him really lovely. Descriptions were quite short and sweet, so could maybe have been a touch fuller. Your characters have really expanded throughout the story, so really well done! Im glad I can encourage :)Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the trip. That one was really fun for me. My Dad lives in New York so I grew up going to a lot of pizza places.I actually based it on the local pizza place back home. When I was little we did the statue hunt in central park and it was a blast.
Im glad you're liking the characters cause you might hate me soon. Isabella says no to Remus, at least for now. James is growing up more and more. Just wait until you see him deal with the rest of the guys.
I hope you continue to enjoy the story. As always I cant wait to see what you think about whatsto come. Report Review
Yay, Draco won! Sorry, that sounds mean. I feel sorry for Eric, but come on, this is Draco we are talking about! Brill limbo scene, and the only thing I could pick up on was that Kingsley seemed a bit distant, other than that the characters were amazing. Cant wait for the ending :) Report Review
Aww I loved it! Sorry I haven't had time to review resently, but Im back now :) I think she will say yes, but she talks to lily and molly first as she has been hurt so much. Thank you for the updates!Author's Response: Im glad your back. Report Review
Cool story :) could be interesting, and i like the characters. Nicknames huh. Something to do with mother and child star and moon or that? Infantem lunae - infant moon & mater stella - mother star? Just guessing :) anyway, i'll be reading!Author's Response: Awrh thanks and youre right, but dont tell anyone else!! they have a deep meaning further on in the story but im not gonna say anything, i dont wanna ruin it!!! thanks for the comment though and ill try to update soon!! Report Review
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