Reading Reviews From Member: Faith Passion Destiny
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Review #1, by Faith Passion DestinyThe Art of Breathing.: Burn out.

14th November 2013:
I'm just going to make the general thought that you don't remember me which is completely understandable but I left a review on chapter 8 almost a year ago. I have sadly neglected this website and I wish I hadn't. After I left that review, I never fully got to finish this wonderful story, and I am so full of horrible remorse that I didn't. But here I am a year later finishing this and I don't know what to say. I feel empty and I can't bring myself to get out of my bed and I can't stop the tears. I so badly wish this was a book so I could have it on my bookshelf and read it over and over again until finally the spine breaks in two. That's how much I truly enjoy this. And it only took my about like a week to finish but it has been one of the most emotion filled weeks I have ever experienced in my entire life. I prayed that it wouldn't end and here I am. Binging on ice cream and lying underneath the covers of my bed with all the lights off wishing I could go back in time and experience every laugh, tear, and smile that this story caused me. I dearly hope you are doing well (or at least better than I am) and I think that you will do great things during the rest of your life. I wish you the best and please continue writing because it would be a shame if such marvelous talent went to waste. I hope that one day I will be able to write a story or book or poem that is just as beautiful as your writing. XOX

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Review #2, by Faith Passion DestinyThe Art of Breathing.: Even Worse.

17th January 2013:
I would just like to say that this may be the best story I have ever read. Not only has it A. Made me laugh, B. Made me actually cry (kinda embarrassing), and C. Made me understand the main character; but it has a plot that drew me in from the first chapter. I have read a lot farther in the story (about half way through) but this chapter has stood out the most. When Mary was describing the love and wanting she desired in Charms class was hauntingly beautiful (haha if you watch How I Met Your Mother it's a quote from it). I had writers block but when I read that part it kind of inspired me. I used your writing (I hope that's ok!) when she was describing love and quoted it. I typed it on my type writer and I said all credit goes to you at the end! Anyway, I love your writing style and the long chapters! I really hope you continue to write!


Author's Response: Isabel/Faith Passion Destiny (wonderful username, by the way, really really awesome!)

Thank you for this LOVELY review! I love you, I really really do. I'm in the middle of a writer's block at the moment, and I know how it is. SO FEEL FREE!

As a side note, I love my type writer.

But thank you for such a lovely review I'm so glad that you liked it thank you thank you and thank you.

So yeah, thank you very much :)


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