Haha i absolutely love Teddy here! He's just how i imagined him to be as a teacher at Hogwarts ^.^
OMG JAMES. He's just too adorable! I just wanted to go into your story and pull his cheeks and hug him really tight because he was that adorable! :D
I think you should make this into a short story collection! Then i can read more of adorable James ;)
Keep writing one-shots in the middle of the night! :) Report Review
Ian's mum is so - blargh! (keeping them reviews 12+), but i'm sure you understand how i feel about her ;)
I quite liked how Ian was portrayed! It wasn't the typical rich boy. I really loved how he was standing up for Ava. I legit went: AW!
More than anything, it was the Ava-Louis moments that made me love the chapter! I'm glad she finally understood that Ian and Louis are two different people! It means that she's (sorta) getting over him! :D I like how Louis keeps expressing his feelings - although in French! At least at no point can she say "you never told me you felt like that" or something along those lines!
Sorry for the ramble-y review. I'm going to stop now! Update soon! :D Report Review
i absolutely loved this chapter! :) Especially the fact that Addie and Albus didn't get together immediately. Also, that Addie moved to San Fran. Most people just keep them with their besties, but this was different, it was good :)
EEEP! James and Annelise got married! Yay! I'm really glad you showed the wedding because i absolutely ship them :D
As a teeny point of criticism - i felt that you moved the Addie-Albus relationship a bit too fast in the end! I mean it, i felt that a little more talking i guess would make it more realistic! I mean, i don't think Addie is someone who would sleep with someone without really talking things out you know? I mean they did, but a little more would have been better!
Anyway, overall i really liked the chapter! I hope you update soon! :D Report Review
ELLIE! You're all for plot twists aren't you? :P Mark? I didn't see that coming! I never took him for someone like that hey ho i guess we all have our dark sides!
Ah. Jaimee moments! EEP! I absolutely loved those! And i loved how you brought Aimee's feelings for Dan. And you told us about the relationship they had in depth! It gave us a lot more insight as you why she was so heartbroken when he left!
Anyways, update soon and good luck for your GCSE's! :) Report Review
Can i just say that i absolutely love Ron? He's exactly how i had imagined him as a dad! :D
Ohh she did slapped Scorpius! I must say, i quite enjoyed that scene!
I really like how Rose wants to become a painter. It's something quite new because most people expect her to end up like Hermione, doing something in the ministry or make-a-change sort of stuff. Her ambition to become a painter is different and it makes a very nice change from reading how other people (including myself) characterize Rose!
Update soon! :DAuthor's Response: Thank you!! Ron is my favorite character in the HP-verse so any opportunity to write him I will certainly take. I had been waiting for a chance to write him as a dad and I love the way he turned out. Exactly how I imagined him at that age.
I really like that Rose wants to be different. She does what she loves and I agree that a lot of people feel she'd be like a mini-Hermione. I like her taking more of Ron's route though. Being a daddy's girl and more creative rather than logical. Ron didn't always have a great deal of logic and neither does Rose, unless it involves following the rules.
Thank you so much! Hope you like the rest! Report Review
Ryan was so mean here :( I'm sure there is a reason as to why she behaves the way she does! She's quite different though from how people normally portray pregnant girls - and i like that! :D
And good for Freddie for standing up to her! I think she needed that.
I can't wait to see how the Quidditch match plays out, so update soon! :DAuthor's Response: There is definitely a reason. Ryan is very complex, but Fred only knows what he sees and hears from others. In the same way that she only knows about him what she's seen and heard. They have to move past that. And yes, she was very mean, but at the same time, she's very hormonal, doing this on her own, and tends to assume the worst in people. Let's hope Freddie can turn that around.
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I really love Rose and Addie's friendship! It really portrays what true friends are like. You point out each other's mistake and not just mindlessly support them.
Blargh. Addie and Al! Love each other already! D: There better be some Al and Addie emotional talk next chapter! I'm watching you...
*creepily sneaks away*
*creepily comes back* - UPDATE SOON! :D Report Review
Naww I love all the Gwen - James moments! :)
NO. You're breaking me heart! She can not like Joshua! D: Why is Joshua so nice? It's so hard for me to hate him!
GWEN! DID MY YELLING HAVE NO EFFECT ON YOU LAST TIME? BLARGH.
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I read all nineteen chapters in one reading and i have to say - it's amazing! :D I really love the entire concept of the story. It's new, it's good!
BLARGH. I nearly died with all the Rose and Scorpius moments in the story! They're just too adorable!
And as for the traitor, i have a feeling it may be Lysander or Lorcan! Though of course, i may be wrong. Let me know if i'm right :P
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YOU UPDATED :D
I love Al's denial at the beginning of the chapter! He's so - what would you say - naive (?) in that sense because rejection is something so completely new to him! I really like that, despite his confidence and arrogance - he's still like most people, even though he thinks he's not!
New rule: You must include Logan in your all your chapters! He's just that awesome :D
I just had one question - i thought Chelsea said no to be Al's girlfriend and she'd only faked the whole thing in front of Logan. So in the end (i got a bit confused here) - when al says "Well, at least I've got Chelsea." Does that mean that they're dating or he's under the illusion that they are?
Sorry - i just got a bit confused! :(
Anyway - i hope you update soon! :D Report Review
Hi! :D I'm back to annoy you ;) (hopefully i don't)
Anyway, so here i am reading and reviewing this chapter when i have board exams starting in two weeks. So feel loved ;)
Moving on, i surprisingly quite like James! Even though he's a total jerk! But i'm 99.9 percent sure there's a backstory to his behavior! And I love how you portrayed the Addie-Hugo friendship matter - it wasn't the typical met-on-the-first-day. And the letter - you gotta love those desi references :D I really liked Bianca - even though you didn't introduce her yet - she seems quite bubbly and just generally awesome! Somehow, i have this feeling that if she's introduced to James - they'll get along smashingly well!
I'm going to go do chemistry now. or tear the chem book apart. the latter is more likely though.
UPDATE SOON! :DAuthor's Response: You never annoy me! Not if you deliberately tried to!
I am feeling loved! Espesh since in the past two weeks, every one of my teachers and all these relatives I didn't even know existed have called and told me about the importance of /BOARDS/.
OMG BOARDS, indeed.
The entire Addie/Hugo friendship backstory was very last-minute and not particularly well-thpught-out, so I'm glad you liked it. Also, Bianca is a bubbly little person, you'd never guess she and Addie are sisters. As for desi references, first I was thinking of Paris, but then I thought of all the research I'd have to do, and thought, well, Delhi is easier. I'm not sure about Bea getting along with James, but she'll surely like Hugo. ;)
I WILL TRY TO!
MY FEELS. THEY'RE ALL OVER THE PLACE. AVA. WHAT YOU DOING. I nearly melted when he said 'i can't stop thinking about you Ava' - in french of course. I'm a sucker for romance so you got me there ;)
Sorry for yelling at Ava - i'm a bit hyped up on caffeine at the moment :P
Update soon! :DAuthor's Response: ASKLJGS;D'FJK THE FEELS. AVA. STAHP. I hope you didn't literally melt; that would be rather messy and inconvenient. Of course Louis can say something like that in French because she can't understand him. But in English? Never.
Ahaha, it's okay. I understand :)
Next chapter is going in the queue very, very soon. Thanks for the review! Report Review
hello :) could you pass on the message to Gwen please?
YOU'RE SUPPOSED PROFESS YOUR LOVE FOR JAMES AND BE WITH HIM YOU SILLY GIRL. NOT JOSHUA. WHAT ARE YOU DOING. WHY. WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU. CANNOT YOU SEE THAT JAMES LIKES YOU. BLARGH.
I'm done ranting ;) Hopefully she comes to her senses! Update soon :)Author's Response: Haha, I promise to pass that along (x but I'm quite sure she's just going to bin it because she's made herself believe that he couldn't possibly love her. She'd need real, concrete evidence to make herself believe otherwise d:
Let's hope she will eventually come to her senses ^^
I will! The next chapter is already done, I'm thinking about putting it in the queue during the weekend (:
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BLARGH. I nearly died with the amount of Javery action here! :D But the code D: But hey, rules are meant to be broken yes? ;)
Update soon! :)Author's Response: Absolutely. They definitely are. Except these consequences are pretty dire in comparison to the ones at Hogwarts. Thanks! Report Review
Aww James is so sweet! :) Him and Aria are good for each other! It's just simple understanding of each other's emotions that makes them so adorable!
I'm so glad Aria and Jett broke up! Although i wish Jett finds another girl - i think he deserves that.
And you MUST include more Al and Louis in your chapters! I absolutely love them :D
Update soon! :)Author's Response: He is, isn't he? They're /really/ good for each other. You got it exactly right ;)
Well, technically, they haven't /officially/ broken up yet. But yeah, they have unofficially. And you're right - he does deserve to find another girl.
Ahaha, I love Al and Louis. They'll definitely continue to make their appearances.
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I really liked this chapter - it showed how Laila (sorry if i spelt her name wrong) truly felt and this insight gave a deeper meaning to her personality!
I feel though as if the chapter should be a little longer! With more events in them! That would definitely make the story more interesting! In the sense that you won't have to wait for a while for the next chappie and you sort of forget what happened in the previous because there was nothing major!
I'm sorry if that sounded mean - i didn't mean it to be harsh. I understand when you can't elongate your chapters but adding more events would be awesome :)
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it was a bit of a filler-y chapter - except the end where they found the note of course!
poor rebecca - i feel so bad for her :( i hope they find her body or something and let rebecca have her funeral for tori - i think she deserves that!Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Courtney:) Report Review
Danielle. another girl. what. what is happening. i can not. no. like what.
excuse me for being extremely incoherent at the moment - the last line completely and utterly shocked me D:
And i just realized that this is the first time i'm review-ing one of your stories even though i've read all of them! Sorry about that - i'll leave as many reviews as i can when i get the time. promise :) xAuthor's Response: That first sentence is my favorite ever, actually. Very much love.
Yeah, I'm a sucker for a cliffie. SORRY. That's my fault. I take responsibility.
Oh, you've read them all?? Thank you!! I really appreciate the support! When you get time, I would greatly appreciate it. Thanks and I really hope you enjoy the rest! Report Review
Ahh finally Albus and Flora were getting along (sort of) why did she ruin it by asking about his son? D: And blargh the hooded guy was so creepy :O Update soon! Report Review
It's the end! Wow! I have been following this story for a long time now and it's hard to believe it's over! I really liked your epilogue - it was very different from the normal ones :) Especially how you talked about everyone's future - not just the major characters! I think you've given an amazing end to an amazing story! Update your other WIP's soon!
Though i realize that may be a little hard with your GCSE's. I'm shitting myself for them - i hope your better at controlling your stress! Good luck! :D Report Review
YES! UPDATE! I'm also very happy to be your 400th reviewer! :D
Back to the chapter - it was a great chapter! Especially the James and Cassie moments! No kiss? NO!
I hope the next chapter is out soon! With more (Jassie?) moments! :DAuthor's Response: THANK YOU FOR THE 400th review! I realise that I've gotten to 20 chapters and this is the closest that Jassie have ever been to anything and it's still very far away from even friendship...ahha. Thanks for reviewing :) Report Review
Ah. I absolutely love Shiloh. Her dramatic attitude makes her ten times more fun to read! :D
Naw - James was so mean! But at least there was some Scarlett-James interaction which made me very happy :D Rose and Scorpius - they are the highlight of this chapter! i love love love them!
Okay i'm going to stop ranting now - UPDATE SOON!Author's Response: Shiloh is quite the drama queen! I'm glad that you find her entertaining:) She's a fun character to write. As for James and Scarlett, their interactions won't always be so nasty! Somtimes (well, okay, a lot of times...) they will be, but not forever I promise. Rose and Scorp will keep up the useless bantering for a while, I can promise that!
Thank you so, so much for reviewing:) Report Review
I specially logged in to review this chapter so feel loved ;)
I just finished this novel yesterday night at about one and let me tell - the last two chapters made sob (italicized). I cried my eyes out. I just wanted to say that this is so beautifully written. It's a perfect ending. Well, you know. When you're dead.
Your story is the first angst story i've read and after this i've decided to never read angst ever again. Yep. You're that good an author that your story got me reading angst and stopped me reading angst!
The point of this review is to say - you're amazing! :D Keep writing wonderful angst which i will probably never read because i'm just too emotional!Author's Response: I do indeed feel very loved! Thank you very much, Holly Mist :)
I'm not sure whether I should be pleased or ashamed that I've ruined angst for you forever. I assure you there's some great ones (and ones that have happier endings) but, wow, I'm so glad you liked it.
Thank you very much! :)
-AC Report Review
This was sufficiently depressing...
She killed herself? Hmm i sort of guessed right. I first thought she had been kidnapped or something!
But i'm guessing that the next chapter - the note will be found yes?
UPDATE SOON!Author's Response: Sufficiently depressing? Hm, I hope that's a good thing!
Thanks for the review.
Courtney:) Report Review
Omg, Dan isn't dead yet is he? I didn't like him very much but dying would be rather extreme!
And - James and Aimee moments! I nearly died! (not literally)
And you're taking your GCSE's at the end of the year? Like as in november? Because i'll be taking mine in May. So since you're revising so much i thought you would be taking yours at the same time! Sorry - i'm just curious!
Anyway - update soon! :DAuthor's Response: nooo, nooo, dan isn't dead yet, he's on life support potion in st mungo's. he got into a car accident on the way to aimee's place to see her.
ahaha, i love writing jaimee moments, i've got to say.
and when i say 'at the end of the year', i mean the end of the academic year - yeah, may & june of this year. sorry for making that unclear. anyway, thank you so much for the review!
ellie :) xx Report Review
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