Reading Reviews From Member: jamesandlily_forever
  
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Review #1, by jamesandlily_foreverInnocent: Marlene's Revenge

19th May 2013:
NOOO!! Please tell me he doesn't die! NO!!! He's innocent! What about harry?! The suspense I want to know now! You can't kill him off! He's a main character! ;.(

Author's Response: I can't tell you anything. :S I know he's innocent - that's what makes this whole situation so terrible. :( Harry's safe enough at the moment. :S The suspense is cruel of me isn't it? Sorry about that. :S
I won't make any promises where Sirius is concerned. :/
Thank you so much for the review!
MarauderLover7.


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Review #2, by jamesandlily_foreverInnocent: Nowhere To Run

13th May 2013:
NO What happens?!?! AGH I wanna know now!!! THE SUSPENSE!!

Author's Response: I can't say - you'll have to wait, unfortunately. :S Haha, suspense is what I was going for... :P
Thank you so much for the review!
MarauderLover7.


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Review #3, by jamesandlily_foreverInnocent: Merry Mayhem

10th April 2013:
I love how Harry took right too the broom, and beat Sirius. I also loved how Sirius said that he would still want to be his godfather, and take care of him if he wasn't in Gryffindor.

Author's Response: I loved letting Harry fly again - I've been wanting to write this scene for ages but I needed to find the right place to include it. :P Of course he would - Sirius' parents hated him because he was a Gryffindor - and while he didn't particularly like his family - he would never put that sort of pressure on Harry. :)
Thank you so much for the review!
MarauderLover7.


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Review #4, by jamesandlily_foreverLike a House on Fire: Asphodel, Powdered Root of

8th April 2013:
I really liked this chapter, and how much Sirius is trying to talk to her, because that is what I see him doing..
..and I'm glad your writing again! :)

Author's Response: Yes, I am glad I am writing again, too! It made me very happy to get this chapter posted! And it's nice to hear that you enjoyed the chapter, and where Sirius is going, as a character!

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Review #5, by jamesandlily_foreverInnocent: Taking Risks

4th April 2013:
This is great! I love how Narcissa is finally standing up for herself. I always felt that she and Reg were similar, because it seemed as though they didn't really agree with what was happening, but couldn't really do anything about it, and didn't really want to!

Author's Response: Thank you - I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D Yes - I imagine she's quite a stubborn woman, and I'm having a lot of fun trying to show that. :)
Exactly - she and Reg were both victims of circumstance, which is why I imagine she's seized the opportunity to chance Draco's upbringing. :)
Thank you so much for the review!
MarauderLover7.


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Review #6, by jamesandlily_foreverBlack Hart: Deadlines

31st March 2013:
Just an FYI do you know that Eyebrow is in a lot of words I'm not sure peyebrowsion is a word maybe you meant passion etc...

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Review #7, by jamesandlily_foreverA Game of Truth or Dare: Aftermath

24th March 2013:
Please continue with this story it has been great to read so far!

Author's Response: Ah wow, thank you very much! =D I shall do so =) Thanks so much for your kind review! ^^

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Review #8, by jamesandlily_foreverAsk Lily: Stuck With Each Other

24th February 2013:
is Mystrium101 James?

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Review #9, by jamesandlily_foreverJust Say Yes: The Room of Requirements

11th February 2013:
When are Quinn and Sirius going to get together? But really though...

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Review #10, by jamesandlily_foreverThe Untold Story of James and Lily: Surprises Around Every Corner

1st February 2013:
Are you doing the "Thrice defied lord voldemort" thing? I loved how he knew Lily was pregnant before she did.

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Review #11, by jamesandlily_foreverReality: Reality

25th January 2013:
I love the idea about James enjoying Lily's faults, and when you said that you didn't own harry potter because if you didn't you wouldn't be writing a fan fiction about it

Author's Response: Thanks! One of my biggest pet peeves in James and Lily stories is when James constantly drools over Lily and thinks she's the most perfect being in the world with absolutely no faults. That's no conducive to a healthy relationship.

And thanks, haha. That's actually a lie, though. If I were to ever become a famous author, I would anonymously write fanfiction that is secretly cannon, just to see what people thought. I'm still not J.K. Rowling, though.


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Review #12, by jamesandlily_foreverRemus & Lily - A Loyal Friendship: A Remus & Lily Story ~ Written By MarauderFelicis41

23rd January 2013:
haha you have to stop using the prefects bathroom...I think this is a great idea showing how Lily and Remus are friends

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Review #13, by jamesandlily_foreverThe Dating Game: Creating the Game

22nd January 2013:
I like it..Its funny having them do a dating game and all I had never thought of that before!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you like the idea.
Courtney:)


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Review #14, by jamesandlily_foreverIvy Lee Collins Series: Passion: Chapter Three: Sirius

22nd January 2013:
This is funny especially the part when sirius flipped Ivy over his shoulder, and I don't know if I have already left a review already...eh well I read it again because I love it so much...Does Liam not like her anymore? Because that seems to be what is happening between them.

Author's Response: thank you! more liam/ivy in the next chapter which will be out soon!
x


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Review #15, by jamesandlily_foreverThe Scientific Method: Part One

19th January 2013:
Haha I love that the numbers go on forever, and how they aren't going to tell her because it is hilarious! Brilliant idea!

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Review #16, by jamesandlily_foreverEvolution: The Winner Takes it All?

16th January 2013:
I actually enjoyed this! I was really afraid that she would fall for Malfoy, but now that she hasn't and has given her the bat-bogey hex it was brilliant!

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Review #17, by jamesandlily_foreverGoodbye James, Hello Derek: 23: All Good Things Must Come to an End

13th January 2013:
I love this chapter! Haha that is brilliant that Lily knew the whole time!

Author's Response: Glad to hear! I always wrote Lily with this ending in mind! :)

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Review #18, by jamesandlily_foreverGoodbye James, Hello Derek: 22: Parting is Such Sweet Sorrow

4th January 2013:
So sad, I can't believe he is reading, but I thought maybe Peter told Lily what was going on she she took off right after Sirius checked the map and meets James in the Great Hall right before he leaves... That would be a very interesting chapter!

Author's Response: Yeah, I don't think anyone could have guessed that James would leave. Your predictions about what will happen next are pretty good. We'll just have to wait and see what happens. Thanks for reviewing and sharing!

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Review #19, by jamesandlily_foreverjoined at the hip: Chapter 2

2nd January 2013:
I love this idea that Lily and James are stuck together! Maybe you should have James help her out, and be really nice to her. Then she would change her attitude towards her.

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Review #20, by jamesandlily_foreverGoodbye James, Hello Derek: 21: Why Do Today What You Can Put Off Until Next Year?

1st January 2013:
I really enjoyed this chapter, but it didn't really have anything to do with the rest of the story. It wasn't really needed for the whole outline...Unless James knew that the next day he would tell Lily.

Author's Response: This chapter was mostly just to show James stewing about telling Lily the truth. Think of it more as a filler. I had to show the passage of time somehow. Don't worry, this is the last filler chapter of the story. And I'm glad you still enjoyed it anyway!

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Review #21, by jamesandlily_foreverMarauders, and Fruitcake, and House Elves, Oh My!: Collisions and Bubotuber Pus

31st December 2012:
I really liked it although the first chapter was much better than the second.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, and yes I completely agree about the first chapter being better. The second one was almost like a filler chapter; it's only role was to get us to the characters' seventh year and nothing too great happened so it was difficult to make it as good as the first one lol.

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Review #22, by jamesandlily_foreverThe Quidditch Match: The Quidditch Final

31st December 2012:
That was an interesting, and having James hit by both bludgers and shrugging it off was a good touch. I think that you did a great job with James pretending to be asleep, because that sounds like something he would do. I can't wait to read more

Author's Response: Thank you so so much for leaving a review! I'm glad you thought I did a good job of James :) I always worry!!

Thanks again :D
Lauren


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