Ok so I hope you are getting all of your reviews, because being the oh-so-creepy stalker person that I am, I read some of your most recent ones. I have to say, they would really boost your confidence. Like a lot. Anyway, on to the point. So I very literally JUST left you a review for chapter 26 (I can not believe you are going to leave us hanging like that) and after reading your reviews and visiting your author's page (I'm not creepy, I promise) I have come to a decision. I am going to leave you a new review every day, because I know for a fact that you have been on this website recently to update your various other stories that I can't wait to read. So, yeah, you're an amazing author and I wish I could write half as well as you do. I love all of the characters, except for Sarah, as I mentioned in my previous review. Gosh I hope you read this. I really do. By the time I write a review for every chapter I have a feeling that you will know me quite well. I'm a little crazy. No, scratch that, I am not crazy, I am creatively insane (feel free to use that in one of your amazing stories, although I would love some credit if you choose to do so.) I can honestly say that I think I would be best friends with all of these people. Like BEST FRIENDS. Especially Artemis. Because, as I previously stated, I am creatively insane. I am probably boring you to tears right now... that or entertaining the shit out of you. Probably the first, although I'd like to think it's the latter. At this point I'm avoiding sleep. I like sleep, honestly, but I don't like FALLING asleep. See? Me and Artemis have something in common: we don't like falling. Ok, so I shall leave you now. See you tomorrow!
Toodles! (I just love that word)
(for your information, if you couldn't tell from my very manly review, I'm a GIRL. Yes, I have a boy name, though Jo is just a nickname I'm trying out (my name is Jordan, shhh), deal with it.) ;D Report Review
I LOVE YOU SO MUCH LIKE YOU HAVE NO IDEA LIKE I AM COMPLETELY OBSESSED WITH THIS STORY. YOU ARE AMAZING. I LOVE EVERY SINGLE CHARACTER (except for Sarah, of course.) UPDATE NOW. LIKE, ASAP. PRONTO. IMMEDIATELY.
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(Oh, and Tiffany reminds me of myself, like a lot. Sarcasm is not only a way of life, it is MY way of life. I lovelovelove her.) Report Review
You're a really good writer. This was a lot more depressing than I thought it would be, but it was really cute. Jett and Aria's relationship seemed a bit rushed in the beginning, and some parts (that I can't think of right now) confused me, but I liked it. If you wrote a book, I'd read it (as long as it wasn't non-fiction or historical fiction, gosh I can't stand those). In fact, you should write a book. It would probably take you a long time, but I think you could be really successful if you had a good idea.Author's Response: Thank you! That means a lot to me. Yeah, the story did turn out a lot more depressing than I intended it to be, but what can you do? Hmm, yeah, there are definitely things that I need to improve about this story (especially at the beginning), just because I'm a much better writer now. I'm not too terribly happy with the beginning bits of the story, to be honest. Maybe I'll write a book someday :) Thanks for the review! Report Review
Very cute story. I really like it. You should continue it.Author's Response: Thank you and I plan to (believe it or not!). I actually just sat down on my laptop and said "You are going to write a chapter. Right now."
Thank you again and check back soon for a chapter :) Report Review
I'm so confused. Why does he keep saying "5 days to go"? And what would they have to be cured of? And why is James mad at Sirius? Why are all of them mad at Sirius? Report Review
I love the story so far, but Blaise's character is really so disgustingly despicable. I love the story, like I said, but it's very realistic. Report Review
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