HELLO
BRILLIANT CHAPTER, I FELL OFF MY CHAIR. THIS IS AMAZING FUNNY STUFF.
when Nuts was in her cereal, was it crunch nut cornflakes??
and just to let you know, GO WIZ IS A FANTASTIC GAME AND YOU SHOULD NOT MAKE FUN OF IT. EVER. BE NICE.
i liked the coastal management stuff. its a bunch of fluff.
GOOD DAY, AND UPDTE SOON, MY LITTLE MUFFIN TRAY!
:D
that rhymed.

Author's Response: HELLO
THANK YOU CHILD. THIS IS SUCH A COOL REVIEW I FELL OF MY BED.
it was actually honey cheerios. becuase they are yummay.
Go wiz = shittiest game ever.
THANKS A BUNCH MY LITTLE LUNCH.
:D
lOony

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HOLY CRAP ON A STICK.
i say this for two reasons:
1) for the super fast update
2) for the epic chapter!!!
words cannot describe. this story gets better and better every chapter!!!
and btw i did not recieve my penguin for my last review. i expect two now. hurry up with those please.
but yeah. i love the whole albus punches james in the face thing. twas a good ending.
batteries, if microwaved, can often turn into giraffes. if the giraffe is microwaved further, it will gain cabbage like characteristics.

Author's Response: GO FISH SUCKS.
i say this for two reasons.
1) go fish sucks
2) go fish sucks
MUHAHAHA. THANKS FOR THE LOVELY REVIEW,FELLOW PIE FANATIC. WE SHOULD BE FRIENDS. DO YOU LIKE PINK ELEPHANTS?
you dont? coz i dont either.
MUHAHAHA. TAKE THAT, SUSAN.
oh.
im really glad you liked it,and thanks for the advice. i was actually JUST about to microwave a battery, and my giraffe pen has reached its full capacity.
cabbagesare my life.

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ok child, this was a fantastic and even more crazy than normal chapter, so i will forgive you for taking so long to update.
BUT if that ever happens again, i will steal your computer and update it myself. true story.
so yeah, the chapter. holy crap on a stck, that kid Halle is crazy. crazier than you. please tell her that drinking than many potions in 45 minutes isnt very good for you.
and the whole penguin thing at the end??? i want my penguin. i DEMAND my penguin. please mail it to me as soon as you can. if you dont, imma eat you and your house.
good day.

Author's Response: HALLE OD'D. HALLE OD'D.
shame. she was such a quiet girl.
THAT DOESNT EVEN MAKE ANY SENSE. THANKYOU YOU LOVELY PENGUINPOP. if you eat my house you'll either be fat or die.
CCHHHYEEAAAH.
i'll send YOU a penguin. you know why?
COZ YOUR FACE IS A PENGUIN.
ooohhh. burrnn.
next chapters already in the queue, kiddo. SUCKONDAT, dutta.
thanking you sincerely,
The Pie Society

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AWESOME!! love it, this story is fantastic. i really like how youve written it and i cant wait to find out what happens next! :D

Author's Response: Awe! You're a fabulous reviewer :D I'm gad you loved the chapter. I'll try to post ASAP.

~LoVe_Sirius

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ATTENHUT!
dude youre officially the weirdest child i knowl. thats quite an achievment. this chapter was a jumbly. i was really confused and befuddled but in the end i got it. cool story, its just a bunch of pansies and madness, but you are a penguin so what can i say?
and you must buy me a giraffe, prefessor who told you to so GO GET ME A GIRAFFE and make sure its green.
that will be all.

Author's Response: ATTENSHEEP.
YOUR FACE IS THE WIERDEST CHILD I KNOWL.
dont worry. your brain is advanced so there was some jumbling info so i thought you might get lost.

i will buy you a giraffe when you buy me a sheep. BUY IT. I COMMAND YOU. but make sure its rainbow. or made out of chocolate.

THAT WILL NEVER BE ALL.

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holy crap on a stick THAT WAS FREAKING AWESOME! IM SO PUMPED
best chapter ever man. youre seriously good at this writing stuff. very creative idea for the first task, cant wait to read more! update soon, child. soon.
oh and i know whats in the box! ITS A GIANT PIE. or perhaps its a rubber duck. hopefully a pie. theyre cool.
see ya. and read the book!

Author's Response: HOLY CRAP ON A STICK IM HONOURED!
dadodeedadodeeda
THATS SO SWEET, M'DEARIE. SAH SWEET. LIKE A LOLLIPOP.
and yes. how did you know, silly little seer. it was a pie/duck. well done, padawan ;)

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love love love it! this is a really great chapter and i hope you update it soon!

Author's Response: THANK YOU! I'm really delighted by your kindhearted review :D I will try to update soon :D

~LoVe_Sirius

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i can taste the crunchieness. i do not want a pony, but i thought i should let you know.
anyway. the story.
brilliant, nuttty, and the story of your life. i love it.
i like cake
HUT!
i like the random huts. reminds me of hobos.
moo imma beanstalk.
i suggest that you make an advanced referance. it would make the stiry that little bit more awesome. LUKE. I AM YOUR FATHER.
i suggest that streets should be filed water, and we can float down the street in a giant inflatable plastic bubble. we did that. we are awesome. who else can say they floated in a bubble.
CHOCOLATE BUBBLES AND BOOKMARKS FOR EVERYONE.
wow. whats that. its raining burgers. i must go put out a bucket in which to collect the birgers in. i hope they dont have pickles in them. i hate pickles. you can eat them for me.
keep writing your story, and may the force be with you.

Author's Response: MUNCH. CRUNCH. MUNCH.
THANKYOU for letting me know you do not want a pony. BUT HOW COULD YOU NOT? They GALLOP.
Tis the story of my life young one. OR IS IT?
YOU REMIND ME OF A HOBO. But an awesome one that plays the banjo.
I WILL MAKE AN ADVANCED REFERENCE. YAY.
LUKE I AM YOUR BANANANANANANANANANA.
I THINK THAT'S AN AWRSOME IDEA. WE CAN FLOAT IN THE BUBBLES AND MAKE PIE. AND CHOCOLATE.
I think it's finished raining burgers. It's raining canines and felines now.
EP. I don't like pickles. What a pickle.

MAY THE BANANA BE WITH YOU
Happy invasion day.
lOony

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YOU BROKE MY FACE!!!
mwahahaha i like this story its fun and yummay and exciting. put in a go fish referance.
this person sounds like you
hehe
BANANAAA
cabbage burger
keep writing :):):):):):):):)

Author's Response: IT IS A YUMMAY STORY. YAY.

I Will put in a go fish reference and refer to how ABSOLUTLEY crap that game is. Cough *for old people* cough.

BANANANANANANANANANA

Cameltoe.
Keep reading :):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)


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you, my firend, are a nutter. much like the one described in this story. except perhaps even nuttier, if thats even possible.
i love bananas and potassium. im sure i'll sleep better knowing that comforting fact.
keep up the cool story and i will go and play go fish now.

Author's Response: you, my friend have an advanced brain. it's a lovely brain, though.
im glad you could sleep better knowing that fact.
keep up the cool reviews and i will go play snakes and ladders ;)

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THE CHICKEN, PIE AND BEST FRIEND JOKE! I RECOGNISE IT FROM SOMEWHERE.WHERE IS IT NOW?? OH I DUNNO, BUT I'LL TELL YOU WHEN I DO.
BRILLIANT CHAPTER, AS PER USUAL. KEEP IT UP DEAR POODLE.
YOU MIGHT TURN INTO A GIANT TURNIP TOMORROW, JUST BEWARE. DONT SAY I DIDNT WARN YOU. BECAUSE I DID.
GOOD DAY, DEAR TURNIP.
SEE HOW I DID THAT? FIRST YOU WERE A POODLE, NOW YOURE A TURNIP. WHAT NEXT?
seriously bro, cool story (yeah i just said that) and continue.
and also, please tell me when you update, my advanced brain cannot keep up with the nuttiness that is your epic story.
bye byeee my noodle box.

Author's Response: GREAT JOKE, CORRECT? WHOEVER CAME UP WITH IT HAS A VERY ADVANCED BRAIN...
BRILLIANT REIVEW. AS PER USUAL. KEEP IT UP YOUNG BIBULUS BUBALIS.
turnip transformation already in process. but now you're an orc.
see, first a bibulis bubalis and now an orc. whatever shall you be next?
(psst. a pie)
WHO SAID THAT? wasn't me,
THANKS FOR THE REVIEW.
byebye my pizza pie (we'll meet soon)

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BANANA
W.O.W
amazing story, i love it. keep adding more, its awesome i love it. lettuce sandwich, penguin.
hello.
keep up the coolness :)

Author's Response: Thank you very, very much!
Hello to you too. And I shall keep adding more seeing as I am on holidays woot!
Peace Out :)

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HI HEDWIG PIE
i like pie. i may or may not have mentioned this previously. but im sure you know that
watermelons are shiny. shiny.
i would like to take this oppurtunity to thank you for not putting any jokes about brains of the advanced type and card tricks in your story.
i liked this chapter. t'was magnificent. continue with this fabulous work and please write a new chapter not. yup i mean now. go Go GO GO
hehehehehehhehehe PINEAPPLE COCONUT COCOPOPS
have an enjoyable day dear friend :):):)
pie

Author's Response: HI SHEETHAL (LIAR, YOU'RE NOT SHEETHAL. OR ARE YOU?
you're not)
i like pie as well, but so do you, as we're both part of the secret pie society. sometimes, apples taste like mangoes. jokes of the advanced kind will be coming your way, as will some trolls (AKA, JODEBUT). i will put up more soon, thanks for reviewing you lovely skrillex, and have an enjoyable weekend full of pie and grandmas.
BANANA

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you know how your story is about nutters? are you sure youre not talking about yourslef?? hehe just kidding
cabbage
but i really really love this chapter, im so glad you can write stories cuz then i get to read them :) keep up the constant pie references, and also the ducks. ducks are cool.
BANANA
good day

Author's Response: HOW DID YOU KNOW I WAS TALKING ABOUT MYSELF?
and i'm not a cabbage. you're a pancake.
ducks are cool, as are you, keep reviewing and i'll keep writing!
DON'T YOU WORRY, CHILD.

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this story is just amazing!! but oh my gosh major cliffhanger!! you have to update soon, i have to know more
this is a great story, im so glad i read the entire thing. it's very addictive.
please update soon!
:)

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this is great stuff!
and yeah, i have a question: where is the next chapter? this has been out for ages, silversnitch, and i need the next one!
and indeed, i am staying awesome. have no fear.

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oooh i love it!
i like how its from james's point of view, that makes it different.
keep it up please!!!

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ahh this is pure gold.
if there were more craazay people out there (like me!) then the world would be just that tiny bit more epic.
keep up the crazy awesomeness :)

Author's Response: :D Thank you! I will try to keep cranking out this nonsense
:)

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ooh this sounds promising! please continue with this story, it has a great beginning and i'l like to see how it build up. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reading my first chapter of Chasing April. I am glad you liked it and look forward to writing more.
Thanks for reviewing, i appreciate it :)

~LoVe_Sirius

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hey silversnitch!!
update already!
this is good, i like it:)
do more over the summer please please
i think i might know you.

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HELLOO HEDWID PIE
YOU ARE A PIE
I LIKE YOUR NEW CHAPTER
PLEASE WRITE MORE
RIGHT NOW
NOW I TELL YOU NOWWW

Author's Response: I AM RESPONDING LIKE YOU TOLD ME TO
YOU ARE A PIE
I LIKE PIE
AND LITTLE CHILDREN FREAK ME OUT
YOGABERRRY!

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woww this is such an excellent story! i love the idea for lindy, great character personality. i like the relationships that you've built up between the main characters, cant wait to read more! :)

Author's Response: Awe thank you Sheethall :)
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I hope there will be more :) I've got a few chapters written but am unsure : / Thanks again for reading and reviewing :)

~LoVe_Sirius

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please write more. this is good
i like pie too
we should meet sometime ;)
you my friend, are a pineapple.
enjoy being a pineapple.

Author's Response: we should meet sometime :) how bout tomorrow, before school? i'll see you with the pink elephants...
I SHALL WRITE MORE, AS LONG AS YOU KEEP REVIEWING!

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first pies and ducks, now bubbles. what next?
but it is good, i like the randomness of the story.
good job, bro. you are a pie.

Author's Response: who knows. perhaps...SUGAR?
you're reviews are good, i like their randomness.
COME JOIN ME, MA HIPSTA SISTA
ciao, my black brother

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BANANA
this chapter was goood. i liked it.
i enjoyed particularly your constant references to pies and rubber ducks. and the pies. i like pies.
continue with the awesome writing,
from a rubber duck ;)

Author's Response: BANANA
ma brain is too advanced
im glad you like the references to the rubber ducks and the pies. i like pies.
CONTINUE WITH THE AWESOME REVIEWS
from a honey tree ;)

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