I completely agree with the last review :)
I started reading this 2 days ago and the only reason I didn't finish it in 12 hours is because uni keeps on getting in the way ;D
This is a brilliant story, from every point of view (though I must admit I'm a grammatic-obsessed jolting know-it-all every time I see 'it's's instead of 'its's and such, but it's forgivable because of the splendid-ness of the story).
I loved basically everything about the plot, the characters and how incredibly realistic all of this is (if we don't consider the whole magic thing, of course).
This is one of those stories which make you doubt about your own "creatures", when you think 'Aw, I will never be able to compare to that', but in a good way, really.
If only I could, I would 'favourite' Clash three, maybe four (read 'forty') times.
I don't know why, but when Aggy said "Screw it" I knew what was about to happen, lovely scene.
I don't know who else wrote they can't wait for her post-first time freak out, well I can't wait for it as well! The angsty parts are written in such a brilliantly funny way, it's amazing.
I felt sad, I laughed out loud, literally (my flatmates must think I'ce gone crazy), I really got into this story, and it's a rare thing with fanfiction.
If I had to mention one anti-stereotype, completely Mary Stu/Gary Stu-free story in this fandom, it would be definately be Clash.
I absolutely love Aidan and Dom together, as well as Fred and Evelyn; obviously useless to mention how addicting are James and Aggy and the whole Sword subplot.
Bloody talented, you are.
Finaly, hope you update soon :D
PS agree with the reviewer below saying that a pregnant Agatha would be kind of a disappointment because of the over-using fanfiction writers make of this plot, but you're the author so you're the one to decide :D
oh and PPS I love the witty fights between Aggy and James! And the unexpectedly funny moments (too many to list them!)! And the house elf!
PPPS (I swear, it's the last one) I'm not English, so despite my obsession over grammar, I might have made some mistake here and there, I apologize :)
Extraordinary fanfic, update s'il vous plaît ;) Report Review
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