I find Sir Thumbs cute, even though he's grumpy. ^.^ Also, first kiss! Yay!!! Kind of awkward though.. Why did you break away, Matt? :(Author's Response: I loved writing Sir Thumbs! He's so much fun. Aw, yes, their first kiss. Very sweet and awkward. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :) Report Review
Yay! Second chapter! I'm kind of leaving these reviews as a bookmark for myself, so don't mind them. Anyways, I see Lily is starting to notice Matt! ;) Off to the next chapter!Author's Response: She is indeed! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :) Report Review
Cool chapter! Really interesting so far! I plan to keep reading! :)Author's Response: I hope you continue to enjoy! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :) Report Review
No no no no no no no!!! NO! Now this is all I'm gonna be thinking of until the next chapter! Curse you, alcohol!!!
And Sirius, but only a little.
10/10 :(Author's Response: I curse Sirius the most. He's a downright fool in this chapter! Report Review
Amazing story! 10/10! Please update quickly, I've been waiting FOREVER for a new chapter! :DAuthor's Response: Aw, thank you very much hun! I'm sincerely very sorry for the long delay in getting the new chapter published. Work, classes and life take over from time to time. Will get the next one out asap. Report Review
Seems very interesting so far. I really love the characters, you've developed their personalities nicely. 10/10. Update soon! Report Review
Great second chapter, the different POVs keep things interesting. 10/10. :-) (I'm trying to keep my reviews shorter, they tend to get boring.)Author's Response: Haha. Reviews can never be boring! But thank you once again. Hope you continue to enjoy! Report Review
Looks very promising so far! I appreciate how it's written very light-heartedly, because I love a story that can make me laugh. I also like how it doesn't start with intense romance in the first chapter... Those can get annoying after a while. Writing from the POV of four girls from different houses is a great idea. I was thinking of doing something similar a while back: four siblings, each one from a different house, but it's easier to imagine the story than to write it. So to anyone who reads this, feel free to make a story out of that. Off to read the next chapter! 10/10.Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked the POV format :) I did it this way because loved the idea of all four girls having very little association with each other and slowly threading their lives together as the story progresses.
Four siblings is a great idea too! Family dynamics are often just as fun to explore as romance. (Which may be why there's no intense romance to kick things off here. I wanted the friendships and family bonds to be just as real a part of the story)
Thank you again for the lovely review! Report Review
Hello! I don't know if you come online anymore, but if you were able to reply to this review I would be really happy! I've read every chapter of How to tame a Marauder and The process of becoming tamed more than a couple of times (except maybe the sad moments, who wants to relive those?). It's my favorite fanfiction ever and better than most books I've read, and no matter how many Marauder stories I read this will always be the right one, Sirius and Laura belong together. I'll never get tired of this story, it makes me smile every time I read it. 10/10, 11 if I could. :)Author's Response: Hi! Yes I do come online, just not as much as I would like to. And I hope that this review response isn't too late! :) Anyway, thank you so much for giving me your feedback. To have you say my story is your favourite fanfiction is hugely flattering, and very encouraging to me because I'm in the process of working on three novels at once and need all the encouragement I can get! Hahaha. So thanks again, this has been a really lovely review for me to read.
cheers, Mel Report Review
Love this story! I'm giving you a 10/10 which is pretty rare coming from me, so post the next chapter as soon as possible!Author's Response: Goodness, thanks! I will, as soon as I finish the chapter I'm working on. It's already finished anyway. :) Report Review
I like your writing style. 10/10, so you better update soon! :)Author's Response: Thank you very much!!! I shall update very, very soon! :) Report Review
Ooh, suspense! Hi, I found your story today, and I just spent my Thursday night reading chapters 1 to 17. Please update quickly! And can there be another Jane/Regulus encounter soon? Please? Anyways, 10/10!Author's Response: Haha, I'll do my best to get a new chapter posted, but first, the holidays!
Thanks for reading, and reviewing! I'll see what I can do about that Regulus encounter for ya ;) Report Review
Woo! New chapter! Too bad Sirius and Thalia don't get to be together though... Oh well. Anyways, I just wanted to mention something I forgot to talk about in my last review, which is congratulations on remembering Mary Macdonald! I've read a bunch of Marauder stories, but this is only the second one that mentions her. I wonder if your story will include what happened in Snape's pensieve? (Lily saying that Mulciber used dark magic on Mary, and, when Snape called Lily a mudblood, her telling him that she only went to see him because Mary told her he had threatened to spend the night there). Anyways, before I get carried away, thanks for the quick update! Looking forward to the next chapter!Author's Response: Yeah I do planning on working the Mulciber in somehow I just have to plan the storyline :) Yeah Thalia and Sirius will get together eventually when though I'm still not sure about ;) Yeah I wanted to update before the queue closed for Christmas and then next chapter will probably be up at the beginning of January :) Report Review
Hi! I found your story while searching for some Sirius/OC fanfics. I'm a real sucker for those. :) Anyways, I wanted to let you know that I love your story, it's the first decent Marauder fanfic I've read in quite a while. Only problem is a few grammar mistakes (especially with the commas) but I really don't mind! I plan on continuing to read this story, so update soon! Keep it up!Author's Response: Ha thank you! Yeah I know I'm making grammar mistakes! I just have to find some time to correct it all :) Report Review
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