Hey SunnyWitch,
SPACING EURGH I HATE IT WHEN THIS HAPPENS. UGH ARGH YEGH!
Otherwise, pretty good chapter. Apart from it being very depressing. Like almost every chapter since Chapter Five.
Cheers, Phoenix Quill :D
P.S. JALLOW RETURNS?!?!?!?! THIS IS MARVELOUS! THANK YOU!

Author's Response: Hey again!
Is it doing that again? I'll go and fix it up.
ARGH!
Thank you. Depressing writing is now my thing. At least for now.
It will get better. Probably.
Cheers, SW.
PS: It is amazing! I be so happy!


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No.This can't end. Don't let it end. DON'T!
Ahem...you don't know me, but I've been reading your story for a little bit. My friend showed me it, and I've been addicted for ages. So...DON'T LET IT END!
Rant over. Love your writing! And love Freddie. He's a really cool character!
Mwah!
Cheers, Phoenix Quill :D

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*Phoenix
Thank you for misspelling my name.
Jokes. But seriously...
IT'S A DIADEM. NOT A TIARA. D.I.A.D.E.M.
Is Willow, by any chance...Voldemort's secret child?!?
Or at least related.
I think maybe his daughter.
Makes it more dramatic.
I like drama.
ROSE.
WHY.
SHE GOT SECTUMSEPRA USED ON HER, DIDN'T SHE?
WHY?!?!?
WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT?!?!
FIX IT, PLEASE! :'(
Love, love, love it as always, and keep writing!
Cheers, Phoenix Quill :D
P.S. Metamorphagus. It's what Teddy is. And what Tonks was. :'(

Author's Response: Eep! Sorry about that, I'll fix it!
I know it's a diadem! Hermione was a bit tipsy at the time that she mentioned it... so yeah.
And nope. Nope, nope, nope, nope.
Related... maybe.
You'll find out in the next chapter, but it's going to have to wait until our first chapter of 'It's Complicated' is written and validated.
This chapter seriously validated STRAIGHT AWAY, I literally got no time in between like I usually do, to collect thoughts and write and stuff. Mostly, the validating time is my writing time.
I know what's happening in the next chapter, and the basics for another five or so chapters, but...
I can't just sit and write like you can, I need to do activities in between paragraphs. Or pages. Depending on my mood. So it takes a while.
Rose...
I'M NOT GIVING AWAY ALL MY SECRETS!
Jokes :p .
But no, not telling.
Fix it? Why?
Jokes. Again.
Maybe.
I think I'm a drama llama :( .
I know, this is from Willow's perspective, she'd never heard of it before, and she forgets things easily.
Thank you!
Cheers, SW.

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*sobs uncontrollably* ROSE! SCORPIUS! WHY?!?!
Sorry about that, I had an episode. They happen.
Lovin' Bella's point of view, it's nice to shake things up a little with different ways of seeing things.
THANK YOU FOR BRINGING RON, HERMIONE, HARRY, GINNY AND DRACO BACK INTO THE STORY. AND THANK YOU FOR OWNING DRACO. I MAY KISS YOU FOR THAT.
Muwah *kiss*
There you go. Your kiss. Now please don't turn into a frog, frogs aren't good at typing. Probably because of the webbed feet.
I really should stop being random, but can't be stuffed.
NATHAN'S NOT A LAMP! HURRAH! But returning home...so sad...*sniffle*
WHY CAN'T SHE GET HER MEMORY BACK? MAKE IT HAPPEN! PLEASE, I'M BEGGING YOU, GIVE WILLOW BACK HER WILLOWYNESS!
Love your story...except when it makes me sad. But even then, kind of.
Cheers, Phoenix Quill :D

Author's Response: *smiles like a person who gets enjoyment out of other people being shocked*
I know, I was sad too.
Bella has been neglected as a character. I mean, in my head I know exactly what's been happening with her, but I realised that I hadn't typed too much of that up..
Ahh, the 'rents. Always good for making things have more drama than they should.
I won't turn into a frog, don't worry.
I not a froggy sort of person.
More of a. DRAMA LLAMA!
Being at home... it isn't really being at home for Willow.
BECAUSE IT WON'T WORK WITH MY STORYLINE, THAT'S WHY!
Yet. Maybe.
You know.
Thank you!
Cheers, SW.

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'Eloise, Nathan isn't a lamp, is he?'
That line is classic. I wish my brother were a lamp...
THANK YOU, FIFI, FOR TELLING WILLOW EVERYTHING. YOU ARE A HERO IN MY EYES.
Rose, you clever clever girl, you! Don't let Scorp get you down!
And speaking of the man...WHAT. JUST...WHAT. WHAT HAPPENED THERE. WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT. WHY. WHAT. HOW. WHO. CONFUSED. MIND BOGGLED. TURNING INTO SCRAMBLED EGGS...BLARGHAGARBLE...
Ahem...sorry about that. Think I was attacked by Nargles. Bloody things are everywhere, aren't they...uh oh, here the come again!
Okay, they're gone now. I killed them. It's safe.
Loved it, as always!
Cheers, Phoenix Quill :D

Author's Response: I don't want my brother to be a lamp... it's not much fun yelling at a lamp.
Fifi's one of my favourite characters. Siriusly, I mean, she's completely crazy, but it a totally different way to Willow. You just haven't seen much of that side of her yet.
Rose... is clever. But sometimes (maybe this is a Spoiler?) too clever.
And... yah. Scorpius... not going to even.
I wasn't expecting that either, to be honest, it just fit in with my storyline too well.
Nargles... they are annoying, aren't they?!
Thanks :3
Cheers, SW.

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THE LION DEN.
Seriously, what more do I have to say?
A lot? *sigh* Okay...
I love love love love love all of your characters, and I hate whoever is making Willow 'pregnant'.
FRED YOU LOVABLE IDIOT. DIDN'T YOUR FATHER TEACH YOU ABOUT THESE THINGS?
I'm basically in love with all of these people. In a non weird way... *cough cough*
Yup-puh, that's it. Don't stop popping your 'p's, it's so adorable! Once again, non weird way *cough cough cough*
Cheers, Phoenix Quill :D

Author's Response: I like the Lion Den. It's home. It sounds better than Gryffindor Tower. Maybe. I don't know.
Probably not.
My characters... I don't know what happened with them, but I think they're all crazy. Sigh.
Fred is an idiot. But he can be sweet.
Skeeter, you will learn to hate Skeeter.
*cough cough* so am I, in a non-weird knid of way.
Lol... adorable... not the way I would have described it... :P
Cheers, thanks for reviewing, SW.

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Okay. I did steal stabbing with a fork from you. Sorry. D:
I thought, since you're being nice and reviewing mine, I shall review yours!
I'm slightly surprised the Hat didn't place Willow in Slytherin. I guess he gets threatened daily?
Bella, you naughty girl. Keeping a secret that big for that long?
James...DO SOMETHING! DON'T JUST FLIRT, I KNOW YOU LIKE HER!!!
I like it A LOT but because I'm lazy, this is how long this review is going to be. Just remember, I'm watching you...all of you...
MAKE JALLOW HAPPEN.
Cheers, Phoenix Quill

Author's Response: I forgive you... I'm going to steal your rock cakes. :P
And awww, that's sweet :3 !
Yep... umm, little bit of background info on the Hat, she's tried quite a few times to steal it. She hasn't been successful so far, but she once almost did get it to the Astronomy Tower. The Hat's cries were heard by Filch...
Bella had her reasons. Not good ones, but still.
James, James, James. Sigh.
And don't worry about being lazy, I think I win that prize ( laziest reviewer of all time ).
Jallow.
Cheers, SW.

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NO! BAD AUTHOR! HOW COULD YOU LET THIS HAPPEN! REPENT! REPENT, VILE DEMON WRITER!
Just kidding...maybe. But seriously, how could you let this happen to Willow? She's too...Willowy! You have to give her back her memory!
Can't wait for more chapters when the holidays are over!
Phoenix Quill :D
P.S. DIE SKEETER DIE! >:O

Author's Response: Awww... I'm sorry. Really, I am, but honestly, it wouldn't be half as interesting without these sorts of problems.
And that remains to be seen! ;)
I'm looking forward to it too, and I think you'll like the next chapter. well, some bits.
I also reckon I've been neglecting the whole 'Bella is pregnant' issue. So need to write more on that.
Cheers, SW.

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NO! BAD AUTHOR! I SAID MORE JALLOW ACTION, NOT TEAR THEM APART! HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO ME?!?!?!
Apart from that, good chapter. Veritaserum was good, but where did you get it?
Oh, and I love your characters.
BAD AUTHOR! DON'T MAKE ME HURT YOU! FIX YOUR WRONGS
Phoenix Quill D:

Author's Response: Sorry... I didn't know this was going to happen, it just did!
Veritaserum: I mentioned that, Albus stole it from Slughorn's supply.
Thanks!
I can't fix it, there is my plot to think about here!
Cheers, SW.

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You have spacing issues... :'(. I hate it when this happens, because it makes it so much harder to read.
Cody Creevey...Dennis' son? I assume, because Colin died in the Battle for Hogwarts. HRB, very nice, and I must say, the flirting between James and Willow must come to something. Let's have some Jallow action! And, nice whisker curse. Gotta love a curse.
Love your story as always!
Phoenix Quill :D

Author's Response: I hate my spacing issues *sniffles*! Thanks for pointing it out, it's now fixed but the edited version is validating still.
Yep, definitely Dennis' kid.
Not going to give anything away, but the next chapter has some stuff on James and Willow, but it might not be quite what you were expecting.
Thanks, SW.

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