dared.

I was tempted to leave my review to merely this one word. LOVED THE CHAPTER! EPIC! AAS USUAL! hmmm plotline huuuhhh, never called ME about it. pshh just saying! Clamax should be a word.

Author's Response: cheese.

i was tempted to leave my response to merely this one food type.

so i will.

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What an evil monster it is! Assignments do suck! I MIS THEEE! SPECTACULAR CHAPTER I FEEL SOO IN THE INNER LOOP CAUSE I WAS REREADING THIS CHAPTER! BOOOM! RECOGNISE! if only you wer j.r.r tolkein my life would be so much greater. Tis okay ill settle for you!

GREAT CHAPPTER! (suckkker for jealousy especially from prissy fan clubbers)

But you are aware of this. I suck at goodbyes! Farewell hobbit

Author's Response: ACK. SCHOOL. MONSTER. EVIL. PINK. WHY. YOU ARE ALWAYS IN THE LOOP. HAVE YOU READ OUR IMESSAGES LATELY? YOU. IN. DA. LOOP.
thanks ma dearie...GONNA START WATCHING CHUCK AGAIN!

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Hi there!!

THEY ARE CLICHES FOR A REASON! I felt like a gooey love hate fanfic and was so glad to find yours! Lovely Chapter!!!

Continue Writing

Author's Response: FIRST REVIEW! Than you so much hun! This review brought a huge smile to my face! :)

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AIDEEEN!! NO!

Why? Why would you do such a thing!

I wana see this develop! Im so pummmpppedd!

Please Update SOON!!!

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the thug life is a harsh one



HAHAHA YOU ARE AMAZING. REALLLY.

I love your story despite it being only 3 chapters in. I have some speculations as to Albus's past (goes along the lines of an affair between best friends) but Im hoping theress something deeper. I CANT WAIT!

Update soon!

Author's Response: I squealed so much when i read your review! Thank you so much! ^.^ i'm so glad you liked the story!

Hmm as for what happened to Albus - you may be right, you may not be ;)

I'll try to update as soon as possible! :) Thanks for the review!

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lovely chapter!
ALBUS HAS GOT A THINGG FOR SKY!

pshhh perceptive arent I?(sarcasm is harder to convey through text...hmm)

i love the title by the way!

continue writing!

Author's Response: Hi Loop!
It is quite possible that he may!
Thanks for being my first reviewer! (I'm new to the fanfic scene, so seriously, it's appreciated :) )
Nearly finished with chapter two :P Should be up in a few days or so

Ink x

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Holy crap.

I did not see that one coming. I LOVED THE JAMES AND AIMEE PART! I was excited...buttt MARK?!??!!? HOWWW???! I mean.urghh im so conflicted.


great chapter by the way!

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Hey!!

IM LOVING THE STORYLINE AND WHERE ITS HEADING! IM CURIOUS AS TO HOW THIS PANS OUT! I love the whole Con-artist/thief family thing going on! Im a sucker for that kinda stuff (i watch a lot of leverage,psych and white collar - basically tv alon those storylines!) im really excited! Im loving the characters so far and am reeaallly pumped!

Continue writing

Author's Response: I'm excited to write this! I was inspired by a novel that was about con-artists and thieves (art thieves to be exact) so I thought I'd write this. I'm a sucker for that kind of stuff as well (I like watching Suits though even though it's nothing like this).

I'm glad that you like the characters and I will indeed keep writing!

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This story is AMAZING!!!
Really INCREDIBLE!!

Im so pumped for the potters to make their appearance but LOVE the pace of the story. I dont think its slow AT ALL!! I LOVE HOW SHE IS REACTING!


Please CONTINUE WRITING!

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IM SOO CONFLICTED RIGHT NOW!

Great Chapter! I actually really love how you portray
her passion for flying throughout the whole story
(especially this chapter!)!

IM SO CONFLICTED RIGHT NOW! I DONT WANT
JOSHUA TO GET HURT! HE'S ADORABLE! but..but
ITS JAMES! arghh (im scared as to how invested I
am in Gwen's love life...)


haha great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!

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I WAS SOOO PUMPED WHEN I READ THE PSYCH QUOTE! AND WAS ABOUT GO ALL PSYCH ON YOU BUT THEN READ THE ENDING! SAD PART WAS I WAS WATCHING PSYCH AND REMEMBERED YOUR STORY AND LOOKED FOR THE RIGHT CHAPTER TO COMMENT ON. man im sad!

IT WAS BUGGING ME FOR DAYS CAUSE THE CAST THING SOUNDED SO FAMILIAR





okay i get if you didnt get any of that!


GREAT CHAPTER BY THE WAY. I AM A SUCKER FOR JEALOUSY

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In parker's defence I personally have a COMPLETELY RATIONAL (borderline insane)
thing (NOT FEAR. PSHH OF COURSE NOT) Of guinea pigs. I mean i like the name but something about them gets me all suspicious.

ignore my randomness.

Great Chapter!!! Continue writing

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This was an AMAZING STORY! So interesting and I LOOVED How you wrote Tori (especially her last emotional chapter)!!!

Im So Proud (okay thats weird right? Me being proud?) NONetheless I AM!!!


Well Done

Author's Response: Thank you so much! And I just want to say. thanks for being one of my best, most consistent reviewers! It was always so fun to read your reviews and I'm glad you're proud of me! Am I blushing? I think I am!

Courtney:)

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VIRTUAL COOKIES SOUND AMAZING!!!
as does your fanfic! I hadnt started reading a new fanfic in a while and am super pumped for this story! Well done (SERIOUSLY COOL STORYLINE) and UPDATE SOON

Author's Response: VIRTUAL COOKIES FOR YOU :D
Thank you so much for the compliment - it means a lot! :) And as for the update - it might take a while as exams are coming up but i'll try to put up a new chapter as soon as possible :)

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IT IS NOT POSSIBLE FOR ONE TO MISS ANYONE LIKE I AM MISINNNG YOU!!! RE-READIND YOUR FANFICS IS LIKE HAVING THE DOSE OF CURRY n CHELTO THAT I NEEED AND DEPEND ON FOR SURVIVAL! AMAZING CHAPTER!





WATCH CHUCK

Author's Response: I THANK THE MY AMAZING MACQUARIE ATTENDING FRIEND!

I WATCH CHUCK; THE NIT BANG JUST NEEDS TO GIVE IT TO MEE :D

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Holy crap! That was amazing!!! Im Speechless

Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much!
Courtney:)

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I LOVEEE YOUR WRITING! YOUR INCREDIBLY TALENTED!!! IM SO GLAD YOUR BACK! THANKYOU FOR INCLUDING THE REALISTIC-NESS OF SAND!!
IM EXCITED FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!



P.S
loved the waking up to scorpius part!!

Author's Response: THANKS C: SAND IS QUITE SCRATCHY AND IS NOT COMFORTABLE IN KNICKERS, I HOPE THAT IF NOTHING ELSE, PEOPLE WILL TAKE AWAY THIS FROM THE CHAPTER.

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AW I LOVE JAMES BONDINGGG SESSSION - ONE SENTENCE AND STILL EPIC! I SAVOURED EVERY BIT OF YOUUU THAT WAS IN THIS CHAPTER AS CREEEPY AS IT SOUNDS...


CONTINUUE

Author's Response: YOU ARE SO HIGH RIGHT NOW, GO TO SLEEP CHILD.

THAT SOUNDS INCREDIBLY CREEPY, BUT THATS JUST WHAT YOU DO.

SHAAALL

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I LOVEE THIS FANFICCC!!! ITS SOO DIFFERENT AND AMAZINGGG!!

I have one minor request/ LONGING!

Please make tori come back! I WANNNA SE IT GO DOOOWN

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm really glad you're enjoying it!
Courtney:)

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Me again!

aw I LOVE DEREKK!

Author's Response: I think I've somehow unintentionally made him lovable. Woops. Oh well, still glad you like him anyway. Thanks for all of your reviews, seriously you are completely fantastic!

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Aw! LOvinggg the FANFIC!
Seriously.CONTINUEEE WRITINGG!!

Author's Response: Alright. Pinkie swear I will.

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IVE JUST BEEN REREADING PARTS OF THE FANFIC! Aw I miss it and you (in a non-creepy way)!

PLEASE UPDATE SOONn!

Author's Response: Oh wow. I'm sorry I've been gone for so long. Now I feel bad.
Thanks so much for the review.
:) Lots of love and thanks for being so patient!

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AW.

I LOVED THE BEGINNING!!! It wasss so godd! KEEEP WRITINNNGG!! cant wait!!

Author's Response: Aww thank you so much it means a lot to me that you like it so much.
Thank you for reviewing.
TheGirlOnFirexx

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Nice Chapter! MENTION OF JAMESSS!
AWWW THIS IS GONNA BE INTERESTINGGG! IM PUMPED!


Continue writing! Update soon!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for sticking with it! I think the next chapter might have tryouts in it so . . . YOU MIGHT GET TO MEET JAMES :D

thanks for the review love xx

-Sankavi ^_^

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URGH SOOO HARD TO DECIDE?!?!?! SOOO CONFLICTED!!



Oh amazing chapter by the way...psshh that was sort of a given. IM NERVOUS

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