OMG WHY? WHY? WHY MUST IT END LIKE THIS?
Don't get me wrong, it did end in happily ever afters, it's just why did people have to die? I expected Fred and Penny to make it last! Not break up and get re-married (twice in Fred's case)! But I guess I can't really complain, it's more realistic that way!
Thanks Ellie, for creating a wonderful world from the eyes of Summer Lancaster (or is it Potter instead?)! x Report Review
Okay, I'm going to point this out as it's really bugging me. Some of the words have been replaced with other words. Like "ass" has been replaced to "eyebrow", "face" has been replaced to "purse", "eyes" has been replaced to "puppies", "girls" to "bunny rabbits", "boys" to "frogs", "wand" to "banana" and "voice" to "underwears".
I first thought it was my fault and maybe I changed it like that, but I can't find out how I could have. I noticed like 2-3 chapters ago and checked the reviews, but no one had commented on it. Now I don't know if this is some sort of joke I'm missing on or not. I'm really sorry for pointing this out, because I feel like a total female dog for doing so, but I just thought you should know.
Besides that, I'm really enjoying your story so far! I really love each and every character, and Russel? Turns out there's more to him than that meets the eye. I really can't wait for more Georgie/James action soon. 10/10
P.S - Sorry if I sounded really mean and all! Report Review
OMG is this real? Has it finally finished? I'm crying. I'm honestly crying.
I've got to admit, when I first started reading this story, I just thought it would be 51 chapters of intense angst, romance, and a whole heck of drama. What I did not expect was Todd sodding Williams and deatheaters escaping, and the whole Katie curse thingy. This is probably the most originaly plot I have ever read! And I don't normally review stories (check if you want) and tell them that, so take that as a compliment!
Grace, you created such a magnificent story and developed unique traits for each and every character (canon or not), and for that, I thank you. And thank God it was a happily ever after ending, or else, I would have had a rant in this review!
So to end it, I'll miss reading this story everynight and I'll miss reluctantly going to bed and wondering what happens next and planning the unfortunate death of Todd sodding Williams!
Thank you Grace! x
P.S - What's up with Fred and Sabriel? I see romance in the air. What would it be? Er - Frabriel or Sabred?
P.S - I'm now going to check if there is a sequel (fingers crossed there is)! Report Review
Oh no! It's the end! :( This is the only fanfiction I have read that has made bawl my eyes out! Beautifully written and lovely storyline! I'll honestly miss Gracie and James, but more importantly Jill. I'll miss her complaining about her fiance/husband! You wrote a brilliant story, and I can't thank you enough for the tears! XxAuthor's Response: Thank you for the lovely review Lumos Nox! I'm honoured that you cried during my story and I miss them too. It's strange not having them to go back to. Thanks again
-AC Report Review
Oh gosh, gotta love Spence. She's all like 'so what? My boyfriend's a wizard, we sometimes go to the loo together and never come out. That's just how we roll.' And where's Freddy? My gorgeous Freddy! Jess, you must update soon! Not that I'm forcing you or anything, I actually don't have that power. I just really love this story, it's soo soo addicting! SO UPDATE SOON.
-VICKY! Report Review
Ok, I really love the plot you have going on here! It's really unique and completly unexpected.
I really like the fact that both Millie and Sirius are in denial, LIKE SERIOUSLY? JUST ADMIT IT ALREADY! Sirius, we know you have a crush on Millie and Millie we know you're developing a crush on dear Padfoot!
I enjoy the way they interact with each other! I can actually imagine the Marauders being like that during their time at Hogwarts, which makes this all the more belieavable!
I can't wait to read more of this! xoAuthor's Response: Plot? There's a plot? Haha - sometimes I have trouble with this story's plot, or it's complete lack thereof!
And they can't admit their feelings for each other! These are both seriously private characters, and it's only the second chapter. Where's the fun in that?
And thank Merlin the Marauders worked out okay! Report Review
Hey, it's Vicky from the review tag! :)
I really love the beginning of your story, you made sure to include the facts from Teddy's life, by using it to build up the story and end it!
I think the relationship between Teddy and Victoire is absolutely adorable. The way Teddy acts, you can tell that he's in love with her. The chipanzee smile, green hair, and noticing every single feature about her!
The awkwardness between the two was expected and a little cute. I'm very surprised that Teddy didn't know that Victoire liked him back, with the way she was acting and everything, it was quite obvious!
I don't ever read one-shots, but I seriously enjoyed this. It had just the right amount of fluff but not too fluffy. I was grinning madly when they both agreed that it was a date. The tension to lead up was unbearable!
I'm glad I read this! I read your other work before and it was amazing! You're a really brilliant writer, keep it up! xoAuthor's Response: Sup! Thank you for reviewing!
The beginning of this story was the hardest thing to write, so I'm really happy you liked it so much!
Teddy and Victoire are pretty adorable, aren't they? Especially Teddy. I love Teddy.
When it comes to the ladies, Teddy is a complete noob!
And not a one-shots fan? Wow! Well done on stepping out of your comfort zone! And I'm totally chuffed that it was an enjoyable experience!
And yes! I read your review for the first chapter of my first fic! So wonderful! And thank you so much! You're too kind! Report Review
I honestly cried when I saw that you'd updated. I'm still crying because this chapter was amazing! Can I please have Fred for my self please? OH AND JAMES PLEASE? THE CUTIEPIE! He's adorable! And Aggy's dad is seriously amazing, like seriously how easy is the name 'James'?
Keep up the brilliant work! xo Report Review
Hello it's Vicky from the review tag :)
I really enjoyed the beginning of this story, I love the plot and everything, it's so brilliant.
I loved the way you portrayed Lily. Normally you'd expect her to be this goody-two-shoes kind of girl who does everything by the rule, but she forgot her best friend's birthday. I MEAN WHO DOES THAT? She certainly doesn't get better than that, does she?
Millie sounds like the perfect friend. I would get mad at my bestfriend if she forgot mine (as I would constantly remind them months before), but she didn't. She's so cool-headed and everything, unlike Lily.
The relationship between Lily and James is so different, in a good way. I expected James, known prankster, to fall in love with quiet bookworm Lily in a cliche'd way. I'm so happy you added your own twist to it, making it completly original!
“Honey, even you can’t get me Batman.” is definetly my favourite quote from this chapter. It's so funny, and it just shows how much fun Millie and Lily have.
So Sirius and Millie dated? I have to continue reading now! ADDED TO FAVOURITES! It's so interesting that I have to see what happens next.
Normally I don't read Mauraders Eras and so I had no idea what to expect. I'm glad I did though, because this was amazing!
Keep up the good work.
-Vicky.Author's Response: Hola!
Thanks for liking it already! And calling it brilliant!
And I really wanted Lily to be like that. I've always thought of Lily this way. I think she matures and softens a little around the edges a little later on in the story of her life. But seriously, I know. I'd kill my best friend if they forgot my birthday.
Millie is pretty chill when it comes to Lily. I think she understands her quite well, and so knows that Lily didn't do it on purpose or anything - and Lily does try to make up for it.
Well, there is that cliche (sort of) but it isn't Lily and James' cliche!
The Batman quote is also one of my faves for the entire story. I rewrote this chapter about three times, and that line survived all three re-writes, because I love it so much!
And Sirius and Millie didn't date... Sirius is just an idiot. And thank you for favouriting! So much love for you right now!
Well, thank you for stepping out of your comfort zone (I know how hard that can be)! And I'm so happy that you enjoyed is so much! Report Review
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Are you sure this is the first time you've written from Draco's perspective?
I really enjoyed reading this! You did such a great job at making the backstory both belivable and realistic. The way you protrayed Draco and his family was amazing, It makes sense that he would have prefered his mother over his father, and that the way Lucius had treated them was nothing surprising.
I understand how he suddenly becomes 'Mr-Nice-Guy' as he's was never a kind guy, considering he endured a lot of pain. But now he's getting a chance to redeem himself, I guess he's just trying to turn his live around for himself and his mother.
I love the whole story since the war for the trio. I like how you included the parts of what JK Rowling had said had happened before the epilogue. I think it's really important to stick with the book, but also be a bit creative with it.
Although sometimes I had to re-read the sentences to fully understand it, overall I think you did a really great job.Author's Response: Ha, yeah I am pretty sure it's my first time. However I do love Tom Felton, so I guess I pay a lot of attention to the way he acts in the film. Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you liked it! Report Review
Absolutely interesting! I'm hooked, please continue :) bwt, it's vicky xoAuthor's Response: Oh Hey Hun, Thanks for the review!! I've just put up the next chapter for validation! XOXO
P.S. Can you make me Chapter images and a panner!?!? Pretty please XOXO Report Review
WOW this is really brilliant ;D & I hope you don't mind me asking, but who's the lovely boy on the banner? xoAuthor's Response: Wow thank you so much! Haha I don't mind you asking at all. That is Hunter Parrish ;) Report Review
Omg! Was Kat with Braydar? I never liked Kat to begin with anyway (that was a lie, I loved her in the beginning) And I bet Jade gave Deuce the sti! Maybe that's what she was planning to do! Or why she was trying not to get involved with him! Where the hell is Braydar! I miss him :( also I love Tristan and Chase ofc! And I'm still waiting for Clo and Deuce to end up together, although that maybe her hard now considering the sti! Ohmygod!! It was Victoria (if it is, then I will be a bit dissapointed as my name is also Victoria xD) wasn't it? She gave Deuce the sti! I can't believe it! I only started to read your story yesterday and I love it already! I can't wait for the next one! :D xo Report Review
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