Oh, wonderful. The imagery was amazing, it painted a picture in my head, and bought tears to my eyes.Author's Response: WittyandCreative,
Hello there! Thank you for reviewing my story, and I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I'm sorry that I made you cry, but at the same time, I feel pleased that I was able to evoke such a strong emotion upon you. So thank you. Thank you so much. Your words are encouraging to such an amature writer like me, striving for improvements.
thank you for reading and reviewing.
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Oh god, is it Harry? Like the other reviewer said, everything points to him. And I was thinking when he kissed her, he slipped the paper in her pocket or something. As soon as Draco said the invisible thing, my mind went to his cloak.
I just had a realisation! What if Harry kill Ron because he got together with Skylar once and was jealous? Or he saw them having drinks together and got jealous of them? Unless, plot twist, Draco knows Harry had the invisibility cloak and tried to point the evidence to him, and maybe he slid the note in her pocket, then pulled it out to draw her attention to it because he wanted her to think it was Harry. Because he didn't seem at all curious to read it, if it were me, I'd be curious even if it weren't meant for me.
Anyway, I'm just over-analysing I guess. Please hurry with the next chapter, it's so interesting, oh my god.Author's Response: You have given this alot of thought, and I like that. :) That is a very good motive for Harry. BUT I'm not saying whether or not he's the killer. You will have to see. Thanks for the review. :) Report Review
Just, this is so powerful.
It's beautiful.Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you thought so. Report Review
I really like the idea. I can't wait until the next chapter. The descriptions in this are so good, it's like you painted a picture in my head :)Author's Response: Aww thanks! Glad you like it, will be putting the next chapter in for validation late on today!
Thanks a bunch xxx Report Review
Oh, wow. This chapter, just wow. So intense, just incredible. Report Review
It's just such a sweet story. I really do love it very much, it's one of my absolute favourites. Report Review
I was so excited when I saw you updated! I just love this story so much. I was fangirling the entire chapter, it was really good.Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm still bemused as to why people seem to like the story so much! I will try to update as soon as possible!
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I'm loving the story so far :) Report Review
Update, update, update, update, update, update (X infinity) I really would like to read a new chapter! IT'S JUST SO AMAZING! Report Review
I know I've already said this, but I would appreciate it if you wrote more of this amazing story that I absolutely love. Also I think you're a great author :)Author's Response: I've been having trouble with my laptop so it may take awhile!
Why do I love this story so much? :) Report Review
At first I thought it was Ginny who killed Ron, you know, because she's the person you'd never expect. Now that you mention it was a male...Author's Response: Now that's a good guess. But I did say it was a male. :) Report Review
Please update soon. I am in love with this story!Author's Response: Thanks, I try! I've been very busy with school and homework and school and swimming and school... Well, you get the point! Anyway, I do my best to update soon! ;)
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