Ohmygosh. This almost made me cry.
I loved this. It was so - beautiful and sad? The wording, language, characterisations...
It flowed perfectly for me. It really did. I wish I could write like that!
It portrayed such realistic emotions.
Thank you for writing this (although it is very, very, very sad)!
Cheers, SW.

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NO!
WINKY?!?!?
HOW COULD YOU DO THAT TO ME?
Ugh. Now I'm depressed.
Ooops, sorry. Just read the part where you said keep hate to a minimum... Ahaha.
You don't cry?! (Jokes, I know you don't, but still!) I cry all the time when I'm writing sad bits :'( ...
Oh, and write MORE on this! It's being neglected. A lot. Siriusly.
Please, pretty please with a cherry on top (even if I do know you're busy with two other stories), keep writing :3?
Even if you need to neglect our story a tiny weeny bit, please?
But, anyway, ma two cents.
Cheers, SW.
PS: Yes.

Author's Response: Well, you took your sweet time reviewing.
I'm kidding. I love you for reviewing anyway, no matter how long you took.
I WAS DEPRESSED TOO. I COULDN'T SLEEP FOR A FEW HOURS.
Which was really productive.
Yeah, this is why I said that. To stop people like you being mean to poor little me.
I DON'T CRY. I DON'T KNOW WHY. I FEEL EMOTIONS. I'M NOT A ROBOT.
As cool as that would be.
A robot with personality.
With a capital Y.
Why? Because we're hot *Ramon sexy pose*
Yeah, I just did that.
No judgey.
I HAVE SELECTIVE WRITERS BLOCK. IT'S KILLING ME TO NEGLECT THIS, BUT I MUST.
I'm trying to keep writing, but it ain't flowing.
I don't wanna neglect any story at all. I'll try with this one, but sorry in advance in case it's fruitless.
Thanks for your two cents for a poor pauper. That will help me eat tonight.
Kidding again.
Cheers, Phoenix Quill :D
P.S. I think he looks cute. His personality is rotten. I hate his personality. His face, however...different story altogether.

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Gee, double BAM at the start, both Vera AND Georgia attacking them?
Ugh.
I hope they run themselves off a cliff.
Oh, and I'm starting to like Scorpius.
Poor guy! Why did he have to go and kiss Georgia?! If he hadn't, she wouldn't have caused him to be in the hospital wing!
Hmm... Deslinn! Now it gets more interesting!
Keep writing, LOVE IT!
Cheers, SW.

Author's Response: DOUBLE WHAMMY.
Both the evil ones attacking the main characters.
I could make them do that, but revenge will be served eventually. In a different way.
A more cunning way.
Yay! I'm glad you like Scorp now. He works so hard for approval.
He was suffering from classic 'male-bigheaded syndrome', in which a man does something to get a girl jealous which ends disastrously.
I agree. It was stupid. But she might have done it anyway. She was obsessed, man. Like, crazy obsessed.
Deslinn...the relationship even I didn't see coming. Who'da thunk it, eh?
I have no plans of stopping writing. Currently, I am severely paralyzed, and yet I am still writing.
I'm kidding. But seriously, I'M NEVER GONNA STOP WRITING.
I love it too! And you, for reviewing!
In a non weird way!
Cheers, Phoenix Quill :D

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I. Love. This. Story.
Read two chapters and I'm hooked already.
Regulus sounds like fun... but mysterious. I really don't have a clue about that.
And I love the relationships between Ellie and the Potters... Ginny Weasley is so... amazing/super/awesome.
And Chris... I have a feeling I'm going to like Chris, am I right?
Amazing chapter and story!
Cheers, SW.

Author's Response: *smiles uncontrollably*

I feel extremely pleased that you're hooked - I know I shouldn't, but I can't help it! It flatters me far too much for it to be a good thing!

Merlin... Ellie and the Potters... they're good fun to write.

And you're not gonna like Chris - you'll end up loving him (I kinda do) - provided I write him correctly!

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Hehe.. I like Aislinn... drench the hungover in water I say! Drench them!
I like Japhne, but you're going to have to do a LOT of convincing to make me like ScoRose.
Love Lopsy, and I'm happy for Rosie Posie, even though I still do not like Scorpius.
And darn... another cliffhanger... WHY?! WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME WHY?!
Vera... Hmm, I could think of several things I would like to say to her, to be honest. None of them without swearing.
Cheers, SW.

Author's Response: Drenching was to wake them. Potion was to cure them. I liked the idea of drenching them.
Why do I need to convince you? They're a cute couple! And I love love love Japhne!
I LOVE LOPSY. I NEED A T-SHIRT OR SOMETHING FOR THE LOPSY FAN CLUB.
Rosie Posie will not be happy you called her that. She hates it. Trust me.
Why don't you like Scorpius? He's a little...too boyish, but I think he's cute.
I HAVE A SICK ADDICTION. I NEED HELP.
Vera needs a stern talking to. But she'd have to be restrained. I can't tell you what I'd say, because my answer would be reported, and I don't want that to happen. It would have a lot of asterixes.
Cheers, Phoenix Quill :D

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Hmmm... I must try throwing a party next time I punch one of my friends...
I'm joking. They'll just punch me back and then we'll be cool.
But I think I'd throw the party anyway. Because I like parties.
I still don't think I like Scorpius. Siriusly, the guy went out with Georgia - GEORGIA - while he liked Rose! Geez, what the heck is wrong with him?!
I agree with the waterslide thing, though.
Nice chapter, good that they're all cool again (sorry, I'm liking the word 'cool' at the minute), and etc.
Keep writing, enjoyed it - as always!
Cheers, SW.

Author's Response: I like parties too. You'll see evidence in later chapters.
Scorpius. Didn't. Go. Out. With. Georgia.
He used her to make Rose jealous.
It worked, too.
It's classic male tactics.
I want waterslides to replace stairs worldwide. Even regular slides would be great.
S'all cool now, sis. S'all cool.
Cheers, Phoenix Quill :D

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I don't like this chapter.
End of review.
Kidding. I'm still going to review, but I'm upset now :'( .
I like Lulu. I want Lulu. Lulu is now mine.
Lulu... that's a funny name, isn't it?
When you say it out loud it doesn't even sound like a name. More like gibberish.
I. Hate. Vera.
She's a cow. I can't say worse than that in a review.
Though, to be honest, if I were James, I'd suspend Rose too.
She needs to make it up with them.
And Scorpius.
With... cookies? Cookies always make things better.
COOKIE MONSTER.
Anyway, I'm rambling on too much, so I'm going to stop now. But siriusly, fix this.
Cheers, SW.

Author's Response: I don't like this chapter either.
End of reply.
Also kidding. And I am also upset.
No, Lulu is mine. Mine only. I own her. Get your own Pygmy Puff.
Lulu is not a funny name. It's a cute name. It's short for Lucinda. But this Lulu is not short for anything. It's just Lulu.
I. Hate. Vera. More.
I would say worse, but people would be angry, and I don't like people being angry. So I shall say this...she is a big cow with air for brains!
I do agree with James. She does need to be punished. But praised also. For punching Vera.
She will make it up to them! By Chapter Six, using a mix of alcohol, manipulation and snogging, she will make it up to everyone.
Snogging is only for one person though.
COOKIES ARE GREAT COMFORT FOOD.
Trust me. One can never have enough cookies.
I love the Cookie Monster. He was my favourite character on Sesame Street.
Maybe because I loved cookies as much as him.
I'm also rambling now. I will fix this, don't worry!
Cheers, Phoenix Quill :D

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Shock horror! Lily is a Seer!
Joking. I'm talking about Rose snapping. Ob...viously.
Because of a dream? Siriusly? Why Rose, why?!
Please don't regret making her punch Vera though. I liked that bit.
I loved the reappearance of the dreaded rock cake. If you don't mind, I might steal that, seeing as you stole my idea with the whole 'he will stab you with a fork if you go near his food' in the last chapter.
Ok, so you used James for that, and I used Fred, but still.
I want my rock cakes.
DOES GEORGIA LIKE SCORPIUS?!?!?!?!
It cannot be!
I won't hurt you for making Rose a horrible person in this chapter, but only because I liked the part about Vera getting bashed.
Cheers, SW.

Author's Response: No, Lily is not a Seer, but at least one of our esteemed bunch of lovable characters is... dun, dun, dun! *dramatic music*.
I HATED making Rosie do this. She was already tense from all the weird emotions, and besides, she's fifteen. Hello, hormones? I enjoyed punching Vera. She had it coming.
I have a love of rock cakes. Not to eat, though. Although I did find a site with a recipe for them...ehh. Sorry if I have unintentionally stolen anything from anyone without you or me knowing. Trust me, I try to be original, but sometimes, my 'ideas' are really me remembering something on a subconscious level that I read, heard, saw, etc. So sorry if I accidentally copied you, or anyone for that matter.
Georgia, Georgia, Georgia...what can be said that hasn't been said? Psychotic, insane, in desperately love with Scorpius...and yes, that is true. But it's partly the whole 'wanting what she can't have' thing.
Thank you for not hurting me, I like being safe. Very very much. Almost as much as I like Belgian Chocolate, hot chocolate, Freddo Frogs...this list has a lot of chocolate on it. I'm such a pig. Aanyway, thanks thanks thanks a trillion for reviewing, and also for reading my strange impulses that I somehow convert into readable stories!
Cheers, Phoenix Quill :D
P.S. You can have your rock cakes. Don't eat them, however tempted you might be. It will hurt you, possibly for quite a few years.

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*sobs* I didn't get a Firebolt...
I'm excited for Irus... please make that happen. I'll hate you if that doesn't happen. Kidding. Maybe.
Albus is ma favourite now, I think. Or Lopsy. Or... all of them?
I don't think I can choose!
Maybe Daphne and James should get together!
(Maybe means they definitely should. Just a point.)
Japhne? Or Dames? Or Jam - nie? Or Daphmes? Or... ok, you get the picture.
Keep writing, love it!
Cheers, SW.

Author's Response: I'm sorry to hear that. If it makes you feel better, either did I *dissolves into sobs louder than a dragon snoring* :'(
I'm excited for Irus too, but there will be spanners. Oh, many, many spanners.
I LOVE LOPSY. AND ALBUS. AND JAMES. AND FRED. AND SCORPIUS. AND ROXANNE. In fact, I love everyo - hang on, I don't love everyone. I don't love Vera. Or Georgia. Grrr.
Yeah, that's my ultimate plan, to have Japhne, Irus, Scorose and one other...which will remain a mystery. And if you'd been listening - LIKE YOU SHOULD - then you would have known that Daphne/James is Japhne. PAY ATTENTION NEXT TIME.
I have no intentions of ever stopping writing. Even when I die. I will be a zombie author. So don't worry about that one. Unless when I am a zombie author, I write you bad poetry and then eat your brains. Okay, maybe worry a little.
Cheers, Phoenix Quill :D
P.S. Did you steal your final line from me? I SAID CHEERS FIRST, CHEERS STEALER. Kidding...I think. >:O

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Ok, finally got round to reviewing this!
Geez, I'm lazy, aren't I?
Anyway, good start to it! I don't think I like Scorpius much in this chapter, to be honest, but we'll see how it progresses.
Hate Vera. Please, let Vera be maimed or seriously injured.
Apart from her, I like your characters! Lily's my favourite.
Good background information about the family, her parents, and you know. I always pictured Dom like that, too.
Maybe you should ( if you haven't already ) have a scene between the parents, showing the whole rivalry thing?
Just had a thought, would the Maurauder's Map still work if a lot of the castle had to be rebuilt?
Keep writing, enjoyed it a lot!

Cheers, SW.

Author's Response: I don't like Scorp in this one either, but it was necessary. I really hate Vera. She will be punished. I do like Lily, especially in future chapters. She's so bloody wise for a thirteen year old!
I had to do a bit of...RESEARCH. I know, MEGA GASP. I've found out Wiki is my bestie, and it tells me a lot. There may be a scene at the station for Christmas...maybe. The Map would still work, since the castle was made completely the same as before the War. The professors and headmistress used magic to restore it, which meant everything went back to how it used to be. Thanks for the review!
Cheers, Phoenix Quill :D

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I'm so proud of you - over four thousand words! Well done!
I love Evelyn!
Anymore information on Sarah's pregnancy? You know, I haven't heard about that for a while.
Love it as always, SW.

Author's Response: I know, this one is huge! I love Evelyn too, she is possibly my most favourite character, except for Taylor. Next chapter will have pregnancy stuff, don't you worry.
Cheers, Phoenix Quill :D

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Awww, so touched that you mentioned me!
Looking forward to the next chapter, maybe some more background information about Albus? Maybe Golye - sorry, Duncan - as well?
I reckon I'd be Evelyn, and if I were, I'd spy on you.
Mwahahahaha.
Anyway, love it as usual, keep writing!
Cheers, SunnyWitch

Author's Response: No probs for mentioning you. Chapter 10 doesn't have much background on Albus or Duncan, but it does introduce two new characters. Chapter 11 will have Albus info and maybe Duncan. I've decided I like Evelyn, just because she's so quick to spot things. Love you so much for reviewing!
Cheers, Phoenix Quill

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Ok...
Love the plot and characters, but it's really hard to read, courtesy of punctuation and spelling errors. I know a few people have picked up on that, and I noticed that you used your age as as excuse, but I'm fourteen and I found it hard to get past.
I love Skye. Skye is definitely my favourite.
But if you could just fix up the spelling and things, that would be great!
Cheers, SW

Author's Response: okay thank you and punctuation has never been my strong point and i will work on that. Thank you for the review it means a lot to see that somebody actually read this chapter so Thanks :)

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How about, for a ship name, Starlor? Because, you know, Scorpius/Scorpio is the name of a star constellation?
Just my thoughts!

Author's Response: That's a really good idea! Thanks for that!
Cheers, Phoenix Quill :D

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