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Review #1, by SabrielleBroken Heart Beat: Stride

21st October 2015:
You're a strong writer and the premise of this story is good, but Hermione is a Gryffindor - not a Hufflepuff. Even if she is heartbroken, she would never act so mouselike, especially around Malfoy! As a woman, you can be sad and have a spine ;) It's your story so of course you can write her as you please, but it'd be cool if you could keep her in character a little bit.

Author's Response: As a woman with both a spine and depression, the two don't go hand in hand. There's a big difference between being sad and actually being depressed.
But thanks for your input.

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