i have some constructive criticism for you...i love the concept of this story however you are repeating things too often, such as draco being the onlynone that knows and a few other things, also you said that she doesn't talk to draco in school and that she is a nobody so it shouldn't b that difficult for her to spy...also all she has done the whole first day is talk to draco. just some things to think about when writing in the future. i have not read any of your other stories nor do i know when this was written but i look forward to reading it all the same Report Review
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