asdfghjkl i cant wait for the next chapter! this is sooo good! i dont want Hermione and Blaise to kiss, nooo!
No faults with this chapter, and im eagerly awaiting the next one! xxAuthor's Response: Thank you! I just finished the next chapter, so it should be up soon!! :) Report Review
OMG, this chapter is so good!
psht, Ron, typical Ron to ask her that type of bloody question while Hermione's in hospital, oblivious to his surroundings, much like book Ron! Woo!
no faults with this chapter! please update soon! i want to know what happened at Malfoy Manor! xx Report Review
ohh, there are many hints in this chapter! :O
cant wait for the next one! No faults in this! xxAuthor's Response: I'm glad you liked it. I had a lot of fun with this chapter. And it's so exciting now that I know where I'm going with it. I'm almost finished with the next chapter, so it should be up soon.
Thanks so much for reading! Report Review
NOO, OMG, SHE CUT HIM OFF, GODDAMN HERMIONE! aha, this was an epic chapter, and i was squirming in my chair waiting for something like that (^^) to happen, in my mind, i was chanting ''kiss! kiss! kiss!'' buuut a great author never does the expected!
Once again, no faults! cant wait for the next chapter! xx Report Review
i was the only one? *mouthhangsopenandblushes* woahh!
wow, just, there dresses, (if i imagined them correctly) are amazing, so beautiful! I cant wait to see the boys reaction to the dresses!
Cant wait to find out what animal it is either!
No faults in this one! Brilliant chapter! cant wait for the next one! xx Report Review
i had to leave my details on a review on this chapter, as i had already reviewed on the last chapter, you can contact me on slightobession(at)hotmail(dot)com
This is a really good chapter, a shame it ends how it ends... Report Review
OMG! I STARTED READING THIS, THIS MORNING, I'VE BEEN HELL WITH THIS STORY! i've cried, ( a lot) been happy, angry and annoyed, BUT FINALLY HE IS ALIVE! fudge yea
you dont know how happy this made me! Just make sure it isnt another 2 years before you update!
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yay! im so glad he finally admited his feelings! woo! this chapter's so good, and im looking forward to the next one! No faults, just a few minor spelling errors, thats all :)
Looking forward to the next chapter! xx Report Review
Aww yay, Hermione's parents are in the story! woo! Loved this chapter! I used to lovee Loonry Toons! xxAuthor's Response: Yaay looney toons (: And ahaha yes the parents are in the story! Thank you for reviewing SlightObsession, and I hope you continue reading. Im really glad you enjoyed the chapter (: Report Review
ERM, WELL, i dont know.a chipmunk? squirrel? they dont growl...erm. A lion? no, they dont have a bushy tail. A panther? A hairy panther? A wolf? A cheetah? I REALLY WANA GET IT RIGHT! erm...a persian cat? ahh hippogirff! Good chapter btw ;) loved it! xxAuthor's Response: YOU'VE GUESSED IT... (and hippogriffs have beaks ;) ) but I cant say what it is until I reveal it :) I shall mention you when I do the next chapter on the animagus probably 2 chapters from now :) well done and im glad you liked it ! xx Report Review
This is such a cute chapter, and dayum, Hermione's fiesty in this one! Good story so far! and i'd just thought i'd leave a review, 'cause i know how awful it feels not to have a review on a chapter :')
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Hi! This chapter is brilliant, cant wait for the next one! Couldnt find any flaws in this!
You should carry the darker one on! i would sure read it!
Until the next chapter!Author's Response: Next one should be up in a day or so as its already written :D! I hope you enjoy the next chapter even though it's not a direct part of the story :) Report Review
This is a really good chapter, one thing, i dont think Hermione would have 'bangs', a fringe maybe, but not bangs, so maybe if you could edit that, thats all :)Author's Response: Yeah, that's how I mean that. I knew bangs wasn't the word I was looking for, but I could not remember what I was trying to say for the life of me! lol Thank you. (: Report Review
oh, Hermione's turning into a badass ;) Im glad you've written Hermione as a strong character, not weak. Some of the stories i have read, make her seem really weak, and thats not her. I cant wait for the next chapter, please upadate soon! Author's Response: Thank you! I have another chapter waiting to be validated ;) Thanks for reading!!! Report Review
OMG, DO YOU KNOW HOW HAPPY I WAS WHEN I SAW THE UPDATE? i was at school, at lunch time, and i did a dance, yes a dance in the middle of the hall, then i sat down, and started fangirling because one of my favourite stories had updated!
OMR this chapter was SOO good, i started laughing so hard at Hermione's 'dream'. Ahh, im so glad you updated, and hopefully it wont be too long till the next chapter! Thankyoouu Report Review
This is a really sad chapter :( When Draco said he loved here, i was like 'yay' and did a little jiggly dance, and then she way like 'youre lying' and i just bummed out, but im looking forward to the next chapter. Didnt see any flaws in this one,
untill next chapter! x
SlightObession xAuthor's Response: I do the little dance all the tim lol, my parents think im mad :p I do hope the next chapter (which im validating as soon as my random one shot comes through) will bring back the happy dance! im glad you enjoyed the chapter though and im glad you didn't see any flaws in it :D xx Report Review
I found this story yesterday, and i've just finished it, this story has had me hooked, i just...eurgh, YOU CHEEKY DEVIL YOU!, you made him the bad guy, im literally crying now, because i honestly thought he was good in this, with the way he was acting, and what he was saying to Hermione, BUT NO, it was a lie :( i dont know what to do with myself now, as it is such a good story line. Im keeping my fingers crossed, like someone else said, that it is not Draco, that he is under the imperious curse, or that someone has take poly juice to be home, ahh, i really hope you update soon, as i NEED to know what is going to happen, otherwise it will drive me insane! Thankyou for a brilliant, surprising yet sad chapter Report Review
This is a really good chapter, and i think i know what is up with Hermione, is it that she wanted to spend christmas with Draco?
I was hoping there would be more of the 'Here there be dragons' part in this from the necklace, but this is a really good chapter, cant wait for the next one!
SlightObessionAuthor's Response: Thanks! And as for what's up with Hermione, you'll find out in the next chapter! :) Report Review
How can you end it like that?:( you could have done so much more, i had so much more of this story in my head, so much more, ahh, would you mind if i took over this story? i would give all credit to you, but theres so much more that could be done, please contact me somehow,Author's Response: How can I get in touch with you? Report Review
wow, this is a brilliant way to end the story.
This chapter is so good, and it ended really nicely, im soo glad it wasnt a cliche ending, and not to soppy at all. I have loved the story from the beginning, and its sad to see it end, will there be any one-shots from this, i think it would be an awesome idea, maybe one of how Draco felt when he was being controlled?
Thankyou! Author's Response: Ahh thank you! I'm really glad you liked the ending, endings have never been my strong point so it's nice to know you enjoyed it. I've actually been looking for some new writing ideas so there's a good chance I'll do one that relates. Thanks for the idea and the review :D Report Review
awhh, this is such a cute chapter Report Review
Hello, i've reviewed this story before, but its just so good!
I want to talk to you about something, and i cant find your page on hpff forum, and i REAALLY want to ask you something, so can you find me, and send me a message, thankyou xxAuthor's Response: Heyy (:
Well I don't really use the forums actually, I havent made a page yet. You can either message me on tda if you have an account- Im under FeltonLewis there as well. Or you could email me at hpff_feltonlewis(at)hotmail(dot)com
Ill reply asap! (:
Thank you xx Report Review
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OMG, i've just finished reading TOR for the fifth time, and i remembered you had these, so these are keeping your stories alive. im so glad you have done these, and i remember the little bits like 'saving your best friends life' from the original story!Author's Response: People still read TOR, yayyy ^^
Thank you so so much :') Report Review
it seems like its only me, but im slightly confused into how Draco got in that condition? could you please explain to me how he got like that? Report Review
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