Yay! Another chapter from you! :D This was very well played out between what happened to Harry and Ginny. Not too dramatic, because I can't stand it. You really balance the anxiety of Ginny's feelings and displayed Harry well too as to talking to Ginny. :)

And I definitely love how you didn't end it with a sappy romancy kiss that mostly everyone does now a days. smh.

Again wonderful job and I look forward to your next update. ^_^


-Asphodel

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Another lovely chapter. ♥ Please write more. I should have checked earlier to see that you have updated, but there were other things. Anyways, look forward to your update. :D

-Asphodel

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Oh please! How could you be so unsure! I'd love to write a romance this bloody good!

And unlike many authors, this is what I call romance, hun.

I'm so glad you updated. ♥ I plan on writing my H/Hr fic and it's because of you... so while Hermione blames Harry, I'm blaming you. :')

Keep up the great work, and look forward to your next chapter.


-Asphodel

Author's Response: Oh geez, you're making me blush. It's incredibly humbling knowing I inspired you to write a fic. Like, wow, when I started writing this I had no idea the response I would get from you guys would be so overwhelming and ugh I know I say it a lot but I really do love each and every one of you. When you get your fic up, definitely let me know as I would love to read it!!
Thank you a million times for your kind words. I cannot find a well-enough combination of my own to express my gratitude :) I am writing the next chapter right now, should be up soon! I'm so happy you're enjoying this fic!

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While I hate cliff-hangers, I like this one. I expected Albus to call her back, but no he let her continue on ahead... speechless, as you say. ;)

Awesome Chappie! - Whoohoo! XD


-Asphodel

Author's Response: thank you so much Asphodel!!! :D
I didnt think it was in Al's character to call her back..poor fellow was overwhelmed!!! please do continue to read and review!!! I hope you like the other chapters as well :D
xoxo ;)

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Hehe Logan sounds like a very cute brother lol. :P

Lovely chapter again and I really like the way how you display the anger between Layla and Al.


-Asphodel

Author's Response: I love Logan!! A very important person in Layla's life, you'll be seeing more of him in the coming chappies...If I had a brother, I wished he would be like Logan ;)
xoxo ;)

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Amazing, ♥

Lovely, wittingly funny and I truly love the sarcasm here. :D


-Asphodel

Author's Response: Thank you!! ^_^
xoxo ;)

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Bravo! *applauds* bravo for another great chapter. let me just say that I have completely ran out of good words to say, but that doesn't mean I won't stop repeating them. ;P

Again, you really have made this story enjoyable and even romantic without it being ghastly romantic.

Because I've read failed next-gen fics and romance with that has made me lost faith in this particular genre, but you are really helping me find hope in the world of writing and imagination.

Thank you for sharing your talent, and I'm off to read more. ♥

-Asphodel

Author's Response: *bows* thank you, thank you!!! :D I'm happy that you're gaining hope in the genre, even more happy (not to mention proud), that it's because of me ;) Personally, I love the next-gen...so many characters and so many different views on them!! And I was going for the subtle romance, because I happen to be mildly allergic to sickly sweet romance as well (though I might enjoy some occasionally)...Anyways, thanks for reviewing, and keep reading!!
xoxo ;)

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Lmfao! :P Wow, this was really good. I'm liking this, honestly. You're surely changing my views on next generation fiction, because whenever I read one, there were numerous spelling errors and grammar (which I can't say that I don't make myself, but at least I try.) The writers tend to make the characters like how they themselves would act and not as an individual living person.

I'm really liking this so far, and whenever I reach the ending, I hope to read more from you, because this was simply great, my friend. :)

And you need more reviews, I should say. ;)
Are you on the HPFF forums... if not you should. ^_^

-Asphodel.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! :D I'm not on the HPFF forums :( haven't gotten around to that yet...but will join soon...thanks for the review!!
xoxo ;)

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Another wonderfully written chapter, my friend, and very funny too I might add. ;P

The way you write is very unique and different from other next-generation writers I've came across and I can say that I really appreciate that.

Moving on. ^_^


-Asphodel

Author's Response: Thank you!! :D
xoxo ;)

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Wow, you're a lovely writer. I mean, this is amazing so far. You did an awesome job putting emotions and describing the scenery. Great detailing and not too much. I don't notice any errors, which a big plus for you. :P

Keep up the great work. ;)


-Asphodel

Author's Response: thanks Alishya!!!
xoxo ;)

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This was b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l.

Not even that. This is beyond words of comprehension. There should be another language or better term for this story... I just... speechless. 10/10

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Hey Me again. :D

Stll in love with your story when I read it on Wattpad. ♥

Your wonderful stories needs banners. If you want, I can make em for ya. ;)

Faving!

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OMG! Haha! You posted on here! :D That's awesome. I'm totally faving this. ^_^ ♥

Love the story and the series.

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Well, I'm glad my reviews are making you happy, because you deserve them. ;)

Yeah, I'm back again, since I thought I reviewed this chappie but I didn't. (I'm a being a pest I know, sorry. -_-) Lol :P

Still love this chapter, - five stars, 2 thumbs up, 10/10.

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This was great. Love the bit of the rhythm and going a bit in depth of what Draco was feeling of the night of Dumbledore's Death and the reign of Voldemort. And especially the end, I really liked it. :)

Forgive me for this probably horrible review. I couldn't find nothing wrong with it. ^_^

Continue the great work. ;)


From the review tag,


-Asphodel

Author's Response: Hello! And don't worry! I love reading and responding to reviews - they're all wonderful!

I'm glad that you enjoyed the rhythm - I never really thought of it having a rhythm, but I guess it kinda does!

And I'm also happy to hear that you thought that Draco was written well! And thank you for liking the end! I'm a sucker for happy endings, and I have a soft spot for Draco, so I couldn't help myself!

I'm so flattered that you felt that you couldn't find anything wrong with it! Truly, very flattered indeed!

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Beautiful! *applauding* absolutely beautiful.

Kudos to you for writing a story where you're able to maintain the personalities of the characters, explore the aspects of the general idea of the plot without losing balance, and just really able to keep readers hanging.

Even though I urge you to update soon, take your sweet time. There's nothing like a good story with time and patience. ;)


-Asphodel

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You. Need. More. Reviews.

Especially for this very awesome fiction here. This, my fellow author, is a work of art.

Keep up the great work.

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You know what I also love about your story... is the interesting chapter titles and summaries (which I suck at.) I need to learn from you more my friend, and great job on this lovely chapter.


-Asphodel

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You must be proud of yourself... for this to be your very first fan fic, this was very well written and I'm really enjoying this.

Look forward to your updates

-Asphodel

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Another wonderful chapter.

I'm usually no fan of OC's but I really like Alexis here and your character actually is a character - with personality and background instead of just adding on a random person for unknown reasons like some other immature writers.

I eagerly await to read more of your story.

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Hey it's me again, thinking that you deserve more reviews than this. :)

You have really gripped me when I first started reading this, and I knew from then on that this was a winner.

I love your writing style and descriptive imagination which I believe I couldn't achieve.

Keep up the great work my friend.


-Asphodel

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Again, another awesome chapter. I'm really glad once more to have read your story.

Wonderfully paced, really in character, you really inspiring me here.

I look forward to reading more from you.


-Asphodel

Author's Response: You have no idea how much your reviews made my day today! I was starting to question some things after some other reviews that were left and yours just brightened everything up!! Thank you so much!!

Oh and don't worry...I have many more chapters finished and will be posting them as fast as validation and real life will allow. (One of my biggest pet peeves on here has been finding a great story and that I discover halfway through has been abandoned!)

Thanks again!!

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Wow... Just wow...

I was brought here to read your story by a request you made at TDA. And I was so eager to read a story of Harry/Snape encounter whether if it was mentor or guardian.

I'm very glad that I clicked on the link because so far this is amazing.

To ease your worries, I'd say you really justified the characters with their emotions. It's beyond perfect, my fellow writer.

And as a fan of Harry/Severus mentor/guardian/family fics, you became my favorite author now.

I wished this story was complete so that I can enjoy more of your chapters.

But sadly not. Don't worry though, I'll be waiting patiently for your updates.


Thanks for this very lovely fic and the banner fits it so nicely.

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OMG! You do not know how long I've been looking for a good Harry/Hermione story.

While I remain loyal to the canon ship, I was a Harmony shipper first before JK Rowling switch the tables on us.

Thank you so much for this lovely fic. This was more than you keeping to character... it was like developing Harry and Hermione - and even the rest of the characters into new people!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much! I really do honestly worry about how believable I'm making them, not only as characters but as the characters we already know, 'Harry' and 'Hermione'. So your development compliment: thank you so much.

I'm so incredibly happy you like it! It is truly my pleasure.

(me too, i shipped them from the beginning!)

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This was very good. I loved the sense of evilness. (Yeah I'ma bit creepy - forgive me.) I enjoyed the description of Voldemort's need to kill and the last moment of the muggle to panic and fear.

Happy writing!

From the review above ^

-Asphodel

Author's Response: No need to worry - I guess I'm a little bit creepy too, judging by the fact that I have written such a story... : D
I'm glad that you like this fanfiction and thanks for the nice words! :)
-Kristen

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