JAMES IS NOT NICE. NOT NICE, NOT NICE, HE'S MEAN!! ARGH!!!
Okay, now that I've gotten that out of my system, I really like this story. Lilly and Albus Potter, the squib and the gay. Then James is just...grr... let's not talk about him.
I think the family should not accept Albus so he, Lilly and Scorpius run away and to muggle Lonbdon. Then, six months later, Lilly can be famous across the globe, and her family will regret isolating her but she'll be like "eff off you wizarding failures" and stalk out.
Scorpius and Al can get married. James will be involved in a terrible accident that either kills him, deforms his face or takes away his magic. Anything really, as long as it's PAINFUL.
Maybe Lilly can be a popstar or something? Carter should be magical, though probably not a wizard. Maybe he too is a squib?
So yeah. Basically, this is awesome and if you don't continue it I will throw a unilion through your bedroom window.
ByeeeAuthor's Response: Wow. Hello. XD
Yes James is really mean. There's a point to this, and he has his reasons, but I'm not going to explain it yet.
As lovely and fluffy as that story is, I don't think it's going to be happening. A story is not a story without drama and some unsatisfying endings. However, I don't see any reason that somethings you've mentioned won't come true. (What I'm not going to tell you though, because I'm an evil tease.)
Thank you so much! I highly doubt this story will ever abandon me as the amount of character it leaves screaming inside my head would then be unwilling to ever be quiet, and I doubt I could live without writing it.
Thank you for the lovely review! :D Report Review
This is so cute! You're a fantasic author... are you going to continue? I think she should stay with her aunt for a day before Petunia tells Harry but he thinks Lilly is a squib and lets her stay with her great aunt. Then, suddenly she'll be eleven and BAM Hogwarts acceptance letter. Alternatively, she might go to Beauxbatons and be selected to compete in the Tri-Wizard tournament. That would be hilarious :)
She's so sweet and innocent. I don't know what's crawled up James' butt but he's a right tosser in this story. Hopefully Lilly will be magical and save his life, prompting him to have a long and heartfelt discussion with her that results in him admitting to being an idiot. That would make me VEEERRY happy :) Report Review
This is hilarious :)
I'd write more but you've kept me up for ages! Why are you so darned talented? Report Review
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