Hmmm...this is very interesting. I'm excited to see where Peter goes from here.
I really like your storyline and your writing style, but I'm a bit disappointed in the length of the last few chapters. They're so short; especially this one.
All in all it's pretty good stuff. Keep up the good work. Report Review
I love this story as a whole, but this chapter...:sigh:...this chapter was absolutely lovely! Must be going now...time to read more!Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! Your review made my day :) Report Review
I'm really enjoying your story so far! I like the way you have written all of the characters. I can't wait to read more! Please don't make us wait forever! Report Review
Wow. Just wow. I love this story! I love the way in which you write your caracters and scenes. I'm disappointed with Sirius's thick-headedness. I mean, really?!? How daft can you be? I really feel for both of them. I cannot wait to read more! Please update soon! And so help me, Merlin, if you abandon this story I will Avada Kedavra you through the computer screen! Okay, that was uncalled for, but it truly would break my heart. Keep up the amazing work. You're very talented.Author's Response: Awh thank you so much! I'm so flattered and blah blah blah. You know what I'm going to say ;D. Sirius was just shocked is all... DONT AVADA YOUR COMPUTER SCREEN! WE NEED THAT! Thank you so much for the review and yoru amazing compliments. It really means a lot to me. Report Review
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