Reading Reviews From Member: Gwenevere_Prewett
  
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Review #1, by Gwenevere_Prewett Harry, Ginny, & Their Love Story: Absense Makes The Heart Grow Fonder

22nd June 2013:
Hello I really like the story, but I find this chapter a bit boy/girl stereotype stuff which I think is a bit old fashioned. I've really enjoyed the rest but also they wouldn't be swimming in a pond at christmas in Britain too cold! Sorry to be negative there, I've liked the story so far! :)

Author's Response: Eh, those are earlier chapters, I haven't rewritten those yet (;
And no problem about the criticism, I appreciate it, I need it when I rewrite it :) and it was constructive, so no problems there (;
Thank you so much!
-HarryandGinnyForEver


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Review #2, by Gwenevere_Prewett 19 years: Year 2: Surprises

16th June 2013:
loving Gin and Oliver! Obviously it's sad but we all know Harry and Gin get together in the end! Really liking this story so far, moves quickly and I like that, interesting ideas I haven't read before on here, keep it up :)

Author's Response: I'm glad to hear that! Yes, that is true - they've still got some figuring out to do, though. I'm so happy to hear that you like the story, and that it has some original ideas. Than you so much for reading and reviewing, I really appreciate it :)

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Review #3, by Gwenevere_Prewett Falling In Love.: Discussion With A Red Head.

15th January 2013:
Hello there, On the forum page I am Gwen_Prewett feel free to contact me about beta :) - really like the story by the way, I read it the other day

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm sorry, I haven't had much time to contact you, but I'll try to get on it, if you still need a Beta, once I finish school, which is next Thursday.
~Magicalis Writer


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Review #4, by Gwenevere_Prewett Harry Potter and the Chinese Book: Finding the Future

2nd November 2012:
Hi Bill, thanks for the story I did really enjoy it, I really liked that you didn't skate over finding Hermione's parents like other stories do but I did find at finds that you seem to run away with your description. I'd recommend prioritising it, like don't need a full description of each meal or a diner, its the extraordinary in HP I always find I want to emerge myself in. also thanks for making an effort with the British colloquialisms, so many writers ruin stories for me because of american slang which just doesn't suit HP. my only real qualm is that I don't like the whole marriage stuff, but that's my personal preference. I think it's so sweet you wrote it for your son though and love that you stick to the canon,

thanks for writing - write more!

Author's Response: Gwenevere,

I have never written fiction, much less dialog, and in retrospect I agree, there are scenes and I think even some chapters that an editor would knock back a bit. Sometimes what was driving the prose was what I was learning to do.

I got a lot of help on British English from HPFF readers and I hope when I finish this current edit the Americanisms won't be "cringe worthy" as one reader called them.

Thanks for taking the time to review, I appreciate your response.

Bill



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Review #5, by Gwenevere_Prewett The Scars of Adventure : Prologue and Chapter One: More Trouble than it's Worth

6th September 2012:
Hello there thanks for reading! Please leave reviews :)

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