I really enjoyed this, for me this is an example of a good story. It surprised me, it had that twist that many good stories have and I loved the way you expressed each character.
Now I must be honest but damn did it have to be a one-shot now my mind is just thinking of all the possibilities that the ending could lead to...
Argh you've done the worst cliffhanger ever...
*applause* Well done, all in all I enjoyed this lots ^-^Author's Response: Thank you! ♥ The original plan was just to view the situation through the other characters' eyes, but halfway through writing this one-shot the twist came to me, so I had to go back and add bits and change other bits... so I'm happy that it turned out well! XD
I'm sorry, but I just have to take those comments as compliments! I'm so glad that you felt intrigued enough by this one-shot to consider what would happen next. I'm afraid that for now, though, this is staying as a one-shot, although I -may- write another one-shot as a sequel... -maybe-. :)
Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed it! Report Review
HOMG OKAY SO I JUST READ YOUR STORY ABOUT THE WEREWOLVES AND HOMG I LOVED IT Asdfghjhgtrewsfgbhgwsfgn wsdfnbm rfgn mnrefgbm
PLEQASE TELL ME YOU ARE UPDATING THAT SOON
your writing is very good, although im not a very good critique (despite being fully british .__.) i loved it, the story just sucked me in as a friend of mine would say, like a black hole, I wasnt even aware of the time as I was reading.
I loved that.just wanted to say that...so um...yeah :D
SORRY ABOUT MY FANGIRLING XDAuthor's Response: Thank you! Unfortunately, this won't be updated in the near future as the story is currently on hiatus, but I'm so glad you liked it! I'm definitely planning on working on Waxing Gibbous, but unfortunately there simply aren't enough hours in the day. :(
It's no problem about the fangirling, and thank you again for reviewing! :) Report Review
So I finally came back :D.
RIGHT sorry being distracted review review...
I LOVED THIS, the concept and everything it was all good :D AND I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPPIE (so do it quickies yep?)
I think you developed a good characater with Autumn and the relationship she has with James is realistic and just *feels bomb...dies*
I cant even.
I should stop while I'm ahead...
I really should ;__;
None that I can see, which is a wonderful sign :D and don't brush it off BECAUSE YOU ARE *drumrol* TALENTED :D
Peace out :p Report Review
Why are you so talented?
That was really good, the fact that it is so short as well, makes it really give an impact and NONDIALOUGE ghez How do you do it, I think the idea of doing 5 oneshots is wonderful.
Keep writing Eilidh, you got the knack for it :P Report Review
Hahahaa, Oh my gosh I actually laughed while reading this, I think it is a very good original idea and I love the characters you chose to use.
Top marks for originality.
But in the next chapter or so, I think it would be a good idea to maybe, (just a little bit of advice, feel free to ignore me :)), to do the chapters from different points of view, or maybe a different character per character.
This will give you a chance to explore their thoughts and their feelings and go more into depth, while this was good, I feel you could've gone deeper.
I think I suck at this critism thingy...
Anyway, my main point is that I loved this and I will be watching out for it :D
-AmzAuthor's Response: I actually hoped for this to be funny, so thanks!
This is a one-shot, so no next chapter, but I might write a short story sequel! Maybe, who knows? :D
Thanks for the lovely review,
Keep reading! Report Review
arghh what are you talking about Eilidh this was bleeding awesome!honest.way better than mine at any rate... i could actually fel the love between them and the desperation. so good...dammit now i have to improve mine...Author's Response: Hey, thanks :) I'm so glad you liked it and that you took your time to review :)
I bet your is amazing, I'll have to read it soon :D Report Review
OMG I just loved it,
She has such a personality and isnt shallow at all which i loovee. And when I read it the image that comes to me is indefinately Rose from Titanic. Actually, the whole thing it reminds me so much of titanic and gosh I love that!
I doubt many people could pull that off, yet you did and just with 4 chapters you already have many reviews.
So keep keep up with the fabulaso work :D
.I'm now seriously worried about competiton T_T XD but nooo biggy
It was fabbo
Could try making it a bit longer (chapters?) but maybe that'll ruin the beauty of it?
either ways Im rambling. Again.
It was beautiful.Every bit as Romantic as Rose And Jack!!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so sorry it took so long to reply :(
Yeah, it is kinda like the Titanic... but without the ship and the water and the ice berg and the screams and the death and and and... ;p... but yeah, the whole romance thing :D
Yeah, my first chapters seem to be a little on the short side :/
Thanks again and I hope you read the next chapters :)
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