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Review #1, by Danosycatwith7livesleftBittersweet: Bittersweet

15th December 2012:
I really enjoyed this, for me this is an example of a good story. It surprised me, it had that twist that many good stories have and I loved the way you expressed each character.
Now I must be honest but damn did it have to be a one-shot now my mind is just thinking of all the possibilities that the ending could lead to...
Argh you've done the worst cliffhanger ever...
*applause* Well done, all in all I enjoyed this lots ^-^

Author's Response: Thank you! ♥ The original plan was just to view the situation through the other characters' eyes, but halfway through writing this one-shot the twist came to me, so I had to go back and add bits and change other bits... so I'm happy that it turned out well! XD

I'm sorry, but I just have to take those comments as compliments! I'm so glad that you felt intrigued enough by this one-shot to consider what would happen next. I'm afraid that for now, though, this is staying as a one-shot, although I -may- write another one-shot as a sequel... -maybe-. :)

Thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed it!


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Review #2, by Danosycatwith7livesleftAutumn falling: Lesson 10

10th December 2012:
YO :P
So I finally came back :D.
RIGHT sorry being distracted review review...




I LOVED THIS, the concept and everything it was all good :D AND I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPPIE (so do it quickies yep?)

I think you developed a good characater with Autumn and the relationship she has with James is realistic and just *feels bomb...dies*
I cant even.
I should stop while I'm ahead...
I really should ;__;
ANYWAYS-
Negatives...
None that I can see, which is a wonderful sign :D and don't brush it off BECAUSE YOU ARE *drumrol* TALENTED :D

Peace out :p

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Review #3, by Danosycatwith7livesleftRegret: The Secret

25th November 2012:
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Why are you so talented?
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That was really good, the fact that it is so short as well, makes it really give an impact and NONDIALOUGE ghez How do you do it, I think the idea of doing 5 oneshots is wonderful.
Keep writing Eilidh, you got the knack for it :P

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Review #4, by Danosycatwith7livesleftWe are Villains: We are the Villains!

12th October 2012:
Hahahaa, Oh my gosh I actually laughed while reading this, I think it is a very good original idea and I love the characters you chose to use.
Top marks for originality.
But in the next chapter or so, I think it would be a good idea to maybe, (just a little bit of advice, feel free to ignore me :)), to do the chapters from different points of view, or maybe a different character per character.
This will give you a chance to explore their thoughts and their feelings and go more into depth, while this was good, I feel you could've gone deeper.
I think I suck at this critism thingy...
Anyway, my main point is that I loved this and I will be watching out for it :D
-Amz

Author's Response: I actually hoped for this to be funny, so thanks!
This is a one-shot, so no next chapter, but I might write a short story sequel! Maybe, who knows? :D

Thanks for the lovely review,
Keep reading!


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Review #5, by Danosycatwith7livesleftRun: Green Light

28th August 2012:
arghh what are you talking about Eilidh this was bleeding awesome!honest.way better than mine at any rate... i could actually fel the love between them and the desperation. so good...dammit now i have to improve mine...

Author's Response: Hey, thanks :) I'm so glad you liked it and that you took your time to review :)

I bet your is amazing, I'll have to read it soon :D


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Review #6, by Danosycatwith7livesleftLove Story: Weeping On The Staircase

16th August 2012:
OMG I just loved it,
She has such a personality and isnt shallow at all which i loovee. And when I read it the image that comes to me is indefinately Rose from Titanic. Actually, the whole thing it reminds me so much of titanic and gosh I love that!
I doubt many people could pull that off, yet you did and just with 4 chapters you already have many reviews.
So keep keep up with the fabulaso work :D
.I'm now seriously worried about competiton T_T XD but nooo biggy
It was fabbo
Could try making it a bit longer (chapters?) but maybe that'll ruin the beauty of it?
either ways Im rambling. Again.
It was beautiful.Every bit as Romantic as Rose And Jack!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so sorry it took so long to reply :(

Yeah, it is kinda like the Titanic... but without the ship and the water and the ice berg and the screams and the death and and and... ;p... but yeah, the whole romance thing :D

Yeah, my first chapters seem to be a little on the short side :/

Thanks again and I hope you read the next chapters :)



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