So cute! I adored it, and Freddie's character was just as I'd expect him to be. Well written!(:Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it, I had a lot of fun writing it :) Thanks for reviewing. Report Review
Update soon! Please! I love it! Report Review
Okay. This story is amazing. Please, update soon! I absolutely love this story. It's magnificent.Author's Response: Thank you :D Report Review
This is amazing. You are an amazing writer, and to see that you love my story 'The life of Anni Powells' so much makes me so happy. This story is truly amazing, and I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon!Author's Response: EEEP! Thankssomuch! You are so amazing, I love your story to bits and just asdfghjkl thaaanks!! Chapter three will, hopefully, be up soon, so keep your fingers crossed ;) xx Report Review
That was such a cliffy. I really want to know what happens when they're out clubbing! It's awesome so far, and I can't wait for more!(: ~ LilyLou Report Review
Okay, I LOVE it. It's truly amazing so far. But I'm a bit confused: who's the guy with the murky green eyes? It's not Nott, who had the blue eyes, right? Haha sorry. But really, this is amazing and I'll be following its progress! More soon, please?! ~LilyLouAuthor's Response: Hello LilyLou, thank you so much, I hope you like what is too come. Ah yes, sorry about that, I had to change the colour of Nott's eyes to match my face claim, because I am pedantic like that so where it says 'murky green' in the last chapter, it should be 'serene green'. I've just updates The Cup so that it makes sense, sorry about that. The next chapter is about one third done so hopefully it should be updates soon.
Thank you so much for this lovely review and I hope you continue to enjoy this story,
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The entire story, I've been waiting for that scene. And Alas! It an amazing story so far, I absolutely love it. ~ LilyLou Report Review
I love it so far. It's too cute. I think the ONLY thing that bothers me is the fact Albus has a car... But other than that, it's fantastic and I LOVE it. Can't wait for more! ~ LilyLouAuthor's Response: Thank you so much!! And yeah I added the car detail because I wanted to convey that Al is basically living the life. You'll see. I'm really glad you like it! Be sure to keep readin and reviewing. The support means everything to me! Report Review
Hey, I for one, am from Pennsylvania! Haha I dont care about what you said, but I must agree it sucks there's so many hills and curves. Haha. Anywho! I love this story so far, and it's such an awesome plot. I love the snippets of the book at the beginning of each chapter. It's an awesome bit that I look forward to each chapter! Well done! ~ LilyLou Report Review
This is an amazing story. I love it so much. It's so funny and sweet and I love James' character. What would be really cool, or maybe just super funny, is if you made a spin off or one-shot about Molly and Griffin. I absolutely love those two and laughed so hard when she said she stole his wand and locked him in the shrieking shack. This is a good story, and please update soon!!!(: ~LilyLou Report Review
It's so good. I love her personality so far, and I love how you introduced so many people on the spot. I can't wait for more, and thanks for reviewing my story, "The Life of Anni Powells" and telling me to read this, because it is amazing. Well done! ~LilyLou Report Review
I laughed a few times while reading this. It's really good, but I'd like to see just a wee bit more detail in some parts. Other than that, though, it's really good! ~LilyLouAuthor's Response: Thanks, it hard to put detail in with such a stretched plot, thank you for the review!! Report Review
Okay, so my name is Janelle. I was like 'Ohmigod, a story with my name in it?! It's awesome!' Because Janelle is rather uncommon. I'm a Ravenclaw too, so I thought it was funny. I also am a motormouth. Anywho, I thought this was really funny and awesome. I can't wait to move onto the next chapter(: ~ LilyLou Report Review
I LOVE it. Spencer's character reminds me much of myself... I tend to word vomit quite often. You make her character so surreal and I really do like Freddy's character. You make him exactly the way I picture him myself when I'm writing about him. I hope Robyn's character will come around and Spencer and her will stop fighting, but I do love the fact you put the argument in the story. Until then, I hope to see more chapters soon. It's wonderful so far!
~ LilyLou Report Review
I can honestly say that's adorable. I love how you make Albus care so much about her. It's sweet. And something tells me Daniel knew she was going to kiss him because of how he knew basically everything else was going to happen. ~ Lily LouAuthor's Response: Isn't it?! I couldn't stop smiling when I was writing it. It was one of the main scenes I had planned out from the very beginning and I was so excited when I finally got to that part. It's really a turning point in their relationship.
Thanks for reading! Report Review
Wow. You use mega a lot, lol. She's so awkward it cracks me up. Honestly. And you made Fletcher and the other Slytherins a bit awkward as well, to be honest. I loved it. And Oi... haha. It was really good(: ~ Lily LouAuthor's Response: I might have to do a cheeky edit and tone down the mega, heee. I'd envisioned it as a sort of personal quirk Flora has but it just got bloody annoying. thank you for reading! ♥ Report Review
Awww, that's so cute. I love this story so far. I haven't really ever thought of Scorpius' character to be socially awkward, and it's a different way of thinking, but I like it. It'll take some getting used to, lol. But I like how you make Flora's character, and I love your writing style. It's really good so far and I can't wait to read the rest!(: ~Lily LouAuthor's Response: welcome to the story! :3 I must confess I've got a bit of an entrenched headcanon when it comes to Scorpius, and he is pretty socially awkward in my mind, heee. It's really interesting to see the contrasts between all the characterisations of him on this site.
thank you very much, and I hope you enjoy it! (and when you start getting to the darker bits later, please don't hate me...) ♥ Report Review
I love your writing. You make her seem so crazy, and put some serious thought into her personality. Although, I'm not quite happy with how she treats Lorei... no matter(: It's still amazing and I hope you continue writing this! I'll be following if you do(:Author's Response: :O.wow
hmmm maybe ill improve on that, she does have issues poor girl though XD
I will be updating...soon I hope XD
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Okay. I have to say I LOVE this Jily story. It is so adorable and hilarious. I love the Sirius you throw in. He's such an important character in their lives naturally and I just admire it. You play out their characters so well, and I really enjoy Alice's character. !
I love it so far.
~ LilyLou Report Review
Holy. Quaffles. I LOVE this story! It's so hilarious! I love how you make Berry (or Baby, whichever you prefer) so ... what's the word? Crazy. You make her character come alive and it's just so funny. Your writing is very detailed and... well, like I said, funny. I can't get over it, Lol. Well, I hope the rest of the story is as hilarious! Oh, and, I see some feelings starting to come from Albus a bit...? Haha, well, I love it(: ~Lily Lou Report Review
This story is over the top amazing. I love everything about it... except the part where James and Aria are being difficult. As a reader, it makes me anxious and I want to know if they end up together. As a writer, I absolutely love how difficult and awkward their relationship is! It's awesome :oAuthor's Response: Aww, thank yoouu ♥ Ahaha, yeah, I know what you mean about that small caveat. But I'm glad you can appreciate it all the same! Thanks so much for the review! Hopefully you enjoy the rest as well! Report Review
I LOVE IT! Omg, this is a Regulus Black ship, sorry to state the obvious lol, and I love it! I actually happen to be writing a Regulus/OC story too, and I'm glad to find another story that is something that speaks well towards Regulus, you know? The only Regulus ones I can ever find are through Sirius's eyes. Anywho, It's good so far! Maybe you should check out mine and compare Regulus to my Regulus verision(: I cant wait to read more!Author's Response: Thanks! I'll have to check yours out!
WildCat Report Review
This story was above all amazing. I don't believe I have ever read anything more hilarious, thrilling, mind bobbling, and touching. It was perfect and I enjoyed every word, syllable, and sentence. It made me cry, laugh, and hyperventate (from laughing so hard). It was absolutey heart warming and just absolutely perfect. I can't wait to read the next book! Which I am moving on to, just as soon as I finish posting this. You have an amazing gift for writing and it is astonishing. I love how you incorperated Darren and Damon into the story, which, above all, were my two favorite characters. Especially Darren. I loved Stephen as well, may I add. Anywho, just wanted to let you know how in love I am and was with this story and it has topped even famously published books that I have read. ~Lily Lou Author's Response: I just. Wow. I can't even. I wish I could convey how thankful I am that you feel this strongly and chose to share that with me.
Honestly, I love this story and these characters more than anything. I basically grew up with them while I was writing this in high school, and that someone else feels that they were as great as I think they are, well, I just can't really explain how wonderful that feels for me. So there really is nothing I can say other than thank you so much! Report Review
I really enjoy the adjectives and detailed descriptions you used to describe everything around, and I love the format of the writing (it's a lot like mine). Please, more!!Author's Response: Thank you so very much :) I am formatting chapter two at this moment, however I do have exams coming up so it may not be finished until next week, or if I type fast, tonight. Report Review
I love this chapter. I love how you make Sirius so comfortable with the situation. I also have to admit I laughed my ass off at the part where he shouted something about Snape having a crush on Remus. Absolutely fucking hilarious. I also enjoy the bit of Jily you threw in! Report Review
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