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Review #1, by ElfoInfamous: A Few Of My Problems (And A Snitch Ain't One)

8th January 2013:
I TOTALLY LOVED THIS FIRST CHAPTER.
I liked how you started your story quite differently, with the list of the problems, and so I got this backstory of the main character. Keep writing!!

Author's Response: Aw, I'm so happy you liked it! I wanted Hazel to be a bit of an attention-grabber. I hope you enjoyed the other chapters as well :) Thanks so much for taking the time to review!

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Review #2, by ElfoEver After: YOUNGBLOOD

31st December 2012:
Another great chapter. I really like how you introduced Lorelei. Keep writing!!

Author's Response: Thanks, I've got another chapter to edit and then a life jumped out of the shadows and grabbed me so it might be a while. Don't worry, though. I'm still fully dedicated.

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Review #3, by ElfoEver After: Everybody Talks

31st December 2012:
Great chapter!! I really like this story so far. It seems like there's going to be a lot of drama and depth to the plot!!

Author's Response: So much depth. So many story lines. So little time. Thanks for the review. I'm glad you're liking it.

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Review #4, by ElfoAgainst the Odds: Hope

10th December 2012:
I kinda love how the storyline is moving slowly. Well its not really moving slowly that much. I like how she's taking her time to tell James, because in real life it wouldnt be so simple and easy.
Great chapter

10/10

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I know in real life things would be really complicated and would definitely take some time. If I were Violet, I'd probably flee the country rather than tell James. But we aren't the same person ;) Thank you for your review x

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Review #5, by ElfoHow Freaking Wonderful: The (kind of faulty but might just work) Plan

4th December 2012:
Great chapter! And hilarious ending! I can't wait to read James' reaction!!

Author's Response: Ahaha keep reading! Thanks for the great reviews!

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Review #6, by ElfoHow Freaking Wonderful: The Rest of the Cast

4th December 2012:
I really liked this - again! Great comedy and humour and stuff. Yeah.. it was great :P

Author's Response: Yippee! Gracias!

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Review #7, by ElfoHow Freaking Wonderful: Meet the OC

4th December 2012:
Great start. I really love Clara's character.

Author's Response: Thanks mate :D

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Review #8, by ElfoSeize the Day: Very Confused

25th November 2012:
Well, um, yeah, VERY confusing...
Anyway, yet again a great chapter and I'm looking forward to reading more...
I think I'll also check out your other stories?
10/10

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Review #9, by ElfoSeize the Day: Absolutely Furious

25th November 2012:
Oh dear. Um, well. SO MUCH GOING ON.
I love you writing style and I love the plot and I loved this chapter so keep on writing.

10/10

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Review #10, by ElfoSeize the Day: Total Innocence

25th November 2012:
Wow, okay. Well, another great chapter.. It's getting more well kind of confusing, (with the what-will-Lana-do-about-Albus-and-Alex)... So I guess I'll just have to read on...
Keep writing :)
10/10

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Review #11, by ElfoSeize the Day: Utter Stupidity

25th November 2012:
I really like this story so far. It's gone straight into the action and I can tell it's going to have a twisty, confusing plot?
Anyway, hope you carry on writing and updating!

10/10

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Review #12, by ElfoMissing: Me

4th November 2012:
I LOVED IT.
I'm not really sure if the twins were indeed telling the truth about Al, because what Tori told them in the last chapter was a lie, so maybe this is too?
Yeah...
ANYWAY.

10/10

Author's Response: Hey:)
Thank you for all your lovely reviews, they are much appreciated!!!
I'm so glad you like the different point of views of Charlie and Tori-they are both very different characters which makes them really fun to write.
As for whether we will find out whether the twins were telling the truth about Albus, well...I guess we'll have to find out!!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!!!


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Review #13, by ElfoMissing: Tori

4th November 2012:
Again, it was awesome! I really love how your story has one chapter in Charlie's perspective and the next about Tori. Keep writing!

10/10

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Review #14, by ElfoMissing: Me

4th November 2012:
I really, really, really, really LOVED IT, AGAIN!

10/10

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Review #15, by ElfoAgainst the Odds: Umbrella

27th October 2012:
I really, really liked it!
I also loved the fast update!!
Keep writing and update sooon!!!

10/10

Author's Response: Aw chucks... thanks for reviewing! :) x

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Review #16, by ElfoThe Trouble With Life is...: Problem #10

25th October 2012:
Great chapter, kinda sad a little, but great x'D

10/10

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks!

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Review #17, by ElfoThe Trouble With Life is...: Problem #9 and #9.5

25th October 2012:
Aaaw :''(
That ending was so sad...
Even so, it was VERY well written (as usual :P)

10/10

Author's Response: it was sad,,, but thanks for the positive review!

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Review #18, by ElfoThe Trouble With Life is...: Problem #8

25th October 2012:
Great chapter!
I don't know what to say really about the whole 'what James told Alex thing'... so yeah xD

10/10

Author's Response: Thanks! Love your reviews!

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Review #19, by ElfoThe Trouble With Life is...: Problem #7

25th October 2012:
I really, really loved that chapter. It's a pretty funny interrogation from the Weasley's I have to say, (I think they will win the bet also...)

10/10

Author's Response: Thanks! I liked writing this chapter!

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Review #20, by ElfoThe Trouble With Life is...: Problem #5

25th October 2012:
Great chapter! I really loved it!

10/10

Author's Response: Great! Thanks for reviewing!


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Review #21, by ElfoThe Trouble With Life is...: Problem #4

25th October 2012:
And yet again, another great, great chapter. I loved it a lot! And I loved seeing James' point of view...

10/10

Author's Response: Thanks! I like writing in James' point of view too!


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Review #22, by ElfoThe Trouble With Life is...: Problem #3

25th October 2012:
LOVED IT. Yet again...

10/10

Author's Response: Great! Thanks for all the reviews!

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Review #23, by ElfoThe Trouble With Life is...: Problelm #2 + #2.5

25th October 2012:
Oh dear...
Confusing :P
Still a great chapter though xD

10/10

Author's Response: It was confusing, sorry, it was a pretty early chapter! Thanks though!

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Review #24, by ElfoThe Trouble With Life is...: Problem #1

25th October 2012:
I think that was a really great first chapter! I liked the way you first introduced it with 'no back story' but then you kinda gave one a bit later on...

10/10

Author's Response: haha, thanks, i know it kinda contradicts itself, but that's the character for you! Thanks for the review!

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Review #25, by ElfoAgainst the Odds: Lean On Me

10th October 2012:
I really loved this update!! I really hope you start updating more SOON!
I really liked how Violet is friends with James now, it's really sweet and how Lily know's about most things, (not about the daddy though :')
Please update, update, update!!

Author's Response: Haha sorry this took so long to reply to, but at least Lily knows who the father is now! Thanks for reviewing! :) x

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