Hey! I saw your post on the forums, so here I am! You're a Harmony shipper, which is great because I am too! The was a very well written chapter; the descriptions, dialogue, and character (I've just lost the word) thingys were written very well. The way the characters act around each other- that's what I'm trying to say. Anyway, great job, and I'm looking forward to more! :)
HolyCricketAuthor's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you liked the chapter. I've been trying to focus a lot on the character development and the relationships and interactions between the characters so I'm happy that came through.
I have loads more chapters written (over 50 pages worth) but am just waiting on validation. If you'd like I can email them to you and you can catch up on the story in real time. I'd love to hear your opinions.
Thanks again for reading! Report Review
Only one word can describe this awesomeness:
Can't wait for more :DAuthor's Response: THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH :D
So so happy you liked it! More is coming as soon as possible! Report Review
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