This story is HILARIOUS! Your summary made me curious, and once I'd read the first chapter, I was stuck. I LOVE this different version of Al - he's always the good guy in all of the other stories. The chapters in his POV are my favorites. He's awesome.Author's Response: Aw, thank you ♥ I really did want to make a different version of Al - he's always the quiet, sensitive one, so I thought I'd shake things up a bit. Thanks for the lovely review! Report Review
I absolutely LOVE this story! I love the character developments, the relationship developments... Everything! There's a lot happening in the story, and you can easily see how the characters are changing and growing. It's great.
So, with that being said, please update soon? :)Author's Response: ahaha, thank you! i really like to think that the story has improved since the beginning, development-wise, so that is always lovely to hear :D thank you so much for such a lovely review! and the next chapter has just come out :D
ellie :) xx Report Review
This story is really sweet! I've been reading it for a while and I really like it.
I'm kind of hoping for Joshua to show a psyco side or something, because he just seems too damn perfect! And also, I'm hoping that Kat's pregancy turns out to be fake.
Anyways, I really like this story and the characters. I'm looking forward to read what happens :)Author's Response: Thanks ^^
Haha, we'll see, we'll see d:
Thank you for reviewing (: Report Review
I've recently discovered this story, and it's already become one of my absolute favorites! I'm usually not a big fan of James Potter Jr acting like James Potter Sr, but you manage to give Jr a personality of his own. In this story, he's not just a douche who torments a girl; he actually has a personality.
I'm not sure if I'm able to express what I want, but it's late and I'm tired. What I want you to know is that your story is awesome and that you should keep your good work up!Author's Response: Squeee, thank you! I've tried really hard to give James II his own quirky personality - in fics, he always seems to be the arrogant womanizer or brooding angstmuffin, but I personally see him as a slightly awkward, sweeter version of James I, who maybe learns from his mistakes a bit more quickly. I love writing him. And I'm so glad that you like him! Ahhh, thank you so much. What I want you to know is that you're awesome! :D Report Review
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