Aw this was so cute! You wrote Amy and Fred so beautifully, their kiss was so sweet. I would have had no idea that English wasn't your first language. Your spelling and grammar were perfect, which is actually more than I can say for most native speakers. Well done! :) xAuthor's Response: Thank you so so much. Your kind words really mean a lot to me :) Report Review
I love this story so far! Lya is brilliant, and so realistic. It's refreshing to have a girl character who just throws her hair up in a bun, doesn't bother with make-up and just wears lounge clothes... I don't understand girls (even thought I am one) I mean come on, seriously, who has the time or the energy that early in the morning? I certainly don't.
Totally shipping Lya/Al, just saying. I'm not very happy with the way Scorpius is keeping his relationship with Lya a secret... It just seems like Al and Lya are better suited to one another. That is, if he stops being a two-timing douchebag.
Anyway... This is brilliant so far! I can't wait to read on so keep updating :D x Report Review
...Aaaand I'm back, being a creep, as per usual.
Again. WHOA. It's like, damn, this guy can't get any better and then BOOM, you show up with some new story that drags me in my the hair and forces me to read.
I love Sterling so much. "How I adore your punishments, they bring the flames of purgatory out in your eyes." I was giggling to myself like a loser throughout. "We're the same age, but, you know, girls have cooties."
This is brilliant, please continue with it! I'm dying to know what direction you take this in. Yet again, adding to favourites. Well done :)Author's Response: I completely understand. I totally creeped out on you too...as long as we do it to each other, it should be fine :P
Haha, that statement made my laugh and blush at the same time! Geez, way to bring that from me ;)
Oh geez...you flatter me so! I will update as soon as I can :D Report Review
I have to say I really enjoyed this! It's such an unusual idea, to have a story told from the POV of a dementor. I'd never even considered it before, but you've pulled it off beautifully. I love the way even though it's told from a dementor's POV, it isn't heavy or depressing at all. In fact, I was snorting to myself over the jokes at the beginning.
I love that you took a shot with some thing that not a lot of people would try. It definitely paid off! Well done :)Author's Response: I'm so happy you enjoyed the story!! :) I had a lot of fun writing it and imagining what it would be like to actually be a dementor, much less one as pensive as dear old Derwent. Also happy you appreciated the jokes :P Thank you so much for reading and reviewing, your kind review is very appreciated!!! :) Report Review
Wow. This is probably one of my favourite one-shots of all time. They way you wrote James and how he was feeling was so amazing, and so TRUE. Like you have so many responsibilities and expectations and all these burdens; It just really hit a nerve for me. I was tearing up a little, to be honest. (I'm a sap)
Wonderful idea, brilliantly executed. Added to favourites for sure. 1000/10 :) Report Review
Wow, great chapter! Hermione's dress sounded gorgeous. I also loved Draco's chivalry, you don't see a lot of that nowadays and it just makes me fall in love with him a little (I know he's fictional, don't judge me)
That cliffhanger at the end was cruel. What happened? Is it blood or just spilt wine? Was there a fight? UGH, I need to know!
Update quickly, I'm dying to know what happens next! :) xAuthor's Response: I don't judge! lol I'm a bit in love with him too...
And you'll just have to wait and see what happened :) but lucky for you, the next chapter should be validated in the next day or so, so check back!
Thanks for the review! Report Review
Aww good ending... although I do feel awful for Xander :( The part where she kissed him and didn't feel any spark, it really reminded me of the Princess Diaries. If Rose won't have him, I'll take him! He's such a sweetheart.
Well done on the story all together, you're a very talented writer. I cant wait for the Scorose separate, I love a bit of action/mystery :DAuthor's Response: I'm glad that you liked the ending, and I felt bad for Xander too! You can have him if you want, as he is a sweetheart! The first chapter of it should be up in 2-3 weeks :D Thanks for the review,
-Kiana ;D Report Review
This is a really good start! I love Allie already, and I love your writing style too :) I know what the pain in her back is by the banner (which is stunning, by the way) so I'm a little nervous to see how things will play out... Update soon! 10/10Author's Response: Aw thanks! I'm really glad you're liking it!
Yeah, I'm a bit nervous for her myself! I appreciate your comments about Allie and my writing style and I hope you continue to read this when I post the next chapter! (Which will hopefully be soon!)
thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
-Amanda Report Review
I seriously believe I am the biggest creep ever because at this stage I legitimately have read everything you have posted. EVERYTHING. This is bordering on obsession. I just cannot get enough of your writing, your characters, your plot lines. Your descriptions of the scenes and the way your characters interact with each other make me feel like I'm actually there with them, and that is not an easy thing to achieve. You actually had me laughing my ass off on several occasions throughout this story- which I started reading about an hour ago and didn't stop until now.
You totally deserve all the reviews you can get, you are seriously one of the most talented writers I've come across. Added this to my favourites, please update as soon as you can. I'm not sure I can bear waiting too long for the next chapter! :O xAuthor's Response: Oh dear, if you're a creep, I'm the worst on this planet. I've already read everything you've written :/
WOAH! Okay, this is the best review that I've ever received. EVER. I'm literally smiling to myself like a weirdo, and my flatmate just asked me if I'm planning on murdering a small family or something, because I look so creepy.
Geez, okay...this review...damn girl, you're amazing!
Jack Report Review
Oh my god, not to be over dramatic or anything, but this story is the bomb! The description was what pulled me in at first, but your fantastic writing and storyline made me stay. I adored your ending and how everyone was happy at last. I'm so sad to see this story finished, and I really hope you continue with lots of stories so I can continue reading your work :)Author's Response: Hello!
Thank you so much for reviewing! It makes me so happy when I see that someone has reviewed my story, and I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I had a great time writing it, so it's nice to know that it was worth the time it took.
I have so many ideas for other stories, but as usual when I'm feeling creative, real life decides to get in the way and I don't have much time to actually write. Hopefully I'll get the chance to get something down on paper soon, though!
Thanks again for the review!
nott theodore :) Report Review
Awww I think I need a tissue! Damn soapman333, you good. You REAAAL good. Totally loved Lily's character in this.
A+, 10/10, added to favouritesAuthor's Response: *blushes* thanks :D! I'm very grateful for both of your reviews, they're very helpful and flattering! Wow, thanks again.
soapman333 Report Review
That was really cute, even if everything did move a bit fast! I was kind of getting whiplash trying to keep up with what they were doing next... However James' adorableness (is that a word?) totally made up for it. Plus, my name is Rachel so yaaay :D Overall really good! Well done! XAuthor's Response: Yeah...I tried to mimic how crazy impatient/ADD James is by my writing style. I like to think that James is constantly trying to find something to keep himself busy or something. Oh! I'm glad your name is Rachel! We need more of those in the world (that didn't make sense. Don't think too hard about it). Thanks :D
This response was pointless. I really appreciate the review! Report Review
I'm really loving this fic! I don't think the dialogue is monotonous at all; in fact I think it's very fluid, and the way the characters interact is very genuine. Added to my favourites, hope you update soon!
10/10 :DAuthor's Response: Hi there, and thank you :)
It's a relief to hear that. I want the dialogue to be realistic and to help move the story along, but I don't want the back and forth to weigh it down. I trust you'll point it out if it ever starts to bore you in future chapters :)
I'm flattered that you liked this enough to add it to your favorites! Chapter four will be up next Sunday, right on schedule. Thanks so much for your very sweet review!
-Amanda Report Review
I don't really have much to say except for great chapter! I hope you update soon :D x Report Review
This is a great start to your story :) However a day is a little soon to be showing signs of pregnancy! I really love Ava, I think she's adorable. Hope you update soon! :D xAuthor's Response: Ahh! Hello :) Thanks for reviewing, because I really like 'Against the Odds'! *is happy* I know a day is a little too soon, so I will change that as soon as I can. I'm glad you like Ava :D Love you x Report Review
This is a really good start! Already you have me interested about the characters and whats going to happen to them. I'm curious as to how Natasha will get to go to Hogwarts (assuming she does go to Hogwarts) when she has to tour the world.
Your writing was really easy to read, and actually really funny at some parts. Especially, ""The winner is flammable for Christs sake! She is a hazard!”"- I actually giggled out loud!
Overall a brilliant first chapter, 10/10 x Report Review
Can you review your own fic?Author's Response: I guess so... Report Review
I can't wait to find out what Willow will be like when she's older. I love next generation stories, espcially ones involving some kind of secret, and this ticks all the boxes! I love your writing, please update ASAP :) x Report Review
Oh my gosh "And for the first time in a week, Lily and James found themselves laughing." this just make me unbelievably sad because I know it would probably be the last time they laughed before they died... My heart is now broken, I hope you are very happy.
10/10Author's Response: Thank you very much for reviewing! I am both pleased that this piece moved you so much, yet sad because, lets face it, broken hearts aren't fun! I suggest reading some humor or fluff asap! :P Report Review
"And then Chase interrupted Bray.
With his fist."
Oh my god, I love that! Report Review
You have no need to be nervous, this was a really good start! I love the way you wrote Draco, how he didn't immediately like a muggle, because that would be unrealistic for a Malfoy. Olivia is adorable, too. Please update as soon as possible (: xAuthor's Response: Thank you for such a nice review :)
I've been awful at updating this. I've had so much on my plate this past year - it's been beyond hetic. I've finally got time to look at my drafts of the other chapters and work on them. Hopefully I'll have the next chapter up soon.
Thank you again!
xxx Report Review
Really cute and nicely written! :D Report Review
I really like this, can't wait to read on! :DAuthor's Response: Thank you! (: Report Review
Such an unusual idea, I love it :D I also love your writing, it's so fluid and very easy to read! Can't wait to read on, please update quickly xAuthor's Response: s;aldkfasldk You have no idea how happy this review makes me! Thank you so so much :D I'm about to go and do some planning now so hopefully I start writing a new chapter soon :)
ps. Thank you sooo much for favouriting me as an author ♥ Report Review
This is a really good idea, and a wonderful start! Although maybe you could include some spaces every so often so it's a little easier to read? Either way, I loved it and added to my favourites :DAuthor's Response: YAY FAVOURITES! And yeah, I know what you mean about the favourites :) I'll get onto it ASAP :)) Thanks so much for the review!
BBWotter :) xx Report Review
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