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Review #1, by Jacelyn83Eyes in the Dark ~ Voices in Dreams: Chapter 2

10th November 2013:
This is great, makes me want to read more. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it up :) ~ Jacelyn

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Review #2, by Jacelyn83Eyes in the Dark ~ Voices in Dreams: Chapter 1

10th November 2013:
This is intriguing! Great job... on to the next chapter. :)

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Review #3, by Jacelyn83Still Fighting It: Everything Changes

14th November 2012:
Great stuff. Please write more soon.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it! I actually have 17 chapters already written, so updates will be pretty frequent, it just depends on validation time :)

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Review #4, by Jacelyn83Still Fighting It: Life Goes On

14th November 2012:
Euuuaeadah! (Frustrated cliffhanger-induced noise.)

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Review #5, by Jacelyn83Still Fighting It: You've Gotta Be Kidding Me

14th November 2012:
This. Is. Awesome! I can't wait to read the rest. Sorry for short review, but I'm off to read Chapter Two.. :)

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Review #6, by Jacelyn83Two Is Better Then One: Restricted section

14th November 2012:
Gr (Please multiply these r's for as many times as you can be bothered to).
"Ooooh, cliffy!" basically sums it up. This story has been pretty good, liking the plot so far. Can't wait to see what happens next~Jacelyn

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate you reviewing :D

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Review #7, by Jacelyn83Joining Forces: First impressions

11th November 2012:
Cool story, this Anemone is intriguing. Nice way of introducing the characters.
A few grammatical errors (I'm so picky) mainly with speech marks i.e. "Hello I'm Grace" there should be a period/comma in there. Anyway.
Great work. I'd be grateful if you could read my story and leave a review? Be as ruthless as you like, I'm always up for some constructive criticism.
~Jacelyn =)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I knew there would be some mistakes as I didn't get anyone to proof read it. Will try to improve them. Anemone is my favourite character at the minute because she has the biggest back story so far, the others have their own parts also but Anemone is the first one to hit the light.
I am attempting to plan what happens to them at the minute as it is proving to be challenging to write about four main characters each with different ways of life.
I hope you will continue to read this one when I update and please read my others. and I would love to read and review yours.
Gab.


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