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this was incredibly entertaining and very gripping. I love how you describe Lily--you can tell she's related to the twins and Ginny :) And Rose is the perfect mix of her parents--brilliantly smart but going along with crazy ideas for the ride and complaining at the same time. So yeah- this was a great story and I really enjoyed it.
~M

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LOVE! and I'm really hoping you update soon!
~M

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I love this! this is such a great story. Your main character is awesome, and I can't wait to read the next chapter. The only thing is, I think you went through all the weasleys super fast and that left me with a bit of a weasley overload for about a paragraph. Other than that though, I love this!
~M

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wow. this seriously gave me the chills. it made me so sad but i loved it. and yes, i did tear up. i love how you make it sound so ginny-esque. like i can almost hear her saying all of this.
seriously, this was amazing.
~M

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updateupdateupdate! i want to know what happens net! :) i love this story and im really enjoying reading about your characters. i do hope you update this soon!
~M

Author's Response: oh i wish i could update soon!
i've got so many complications (exams, sports, and school-related-turn-in-your-laptop things) that are gonna prevent me from updating for a long time :( :( i'm so sorry! all is explained better in an updated version of chapter 10.
thanks for reading!
xoxo
Jils

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i just stumbled on to this story, and I'm so glad that i did! you're a great writer, and you're very skilled with words. I'm enjoying reading this story so far :)
Your main character reminds me quite a bit of the main character from my story, Werewolf's Trace--who happens to be Dominique Weasley, ironically. Anywho, I really do like this story and I love the way you've written Ella. I look forward to reading more!
~M

Author's Response: Thanks for the lovely review! Dom sends her greetings to her alter ego
xoxo
Jilly

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I like where this is going so far, though Malfoy and Hermione feel pretty out of character. It's not necessarily a bad thing though- just an observation. However, one thing that I noticed that you might want to fix- when you have Draco thinking to himself, you have him refer to himself as Malfoy, rather than as Draco. I'm not sure if that was intentional, but it felt a bit odd. On the whole though, this story is intriguing, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter (in spite of my bias against Draco/Hermione stories).
~M

Author's Response: This was one of my very first chapters ever written and I didn't really know where I wanted to go with it, so I just kind of wrote it. I will be going back later and changing quite a few things in the first few chapters so they stay as close to canon as possible. Read some of my later chapters and I think you'll like it a little better. :) I'm glad you find it intriguing even though you don't like Draco/Hermione, it makes me happy! :) Thanks for the review xx
~MadiMalfoy

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this is absolutely beautiful. i usually am not a huge fan of rose/scorpius but you wrote this so well that i'm just in love with it. i love that this is from Ron's point of view- I rarely see that, and it was incredibly refreshing.
So yeah, I just absolutely love this and I look forward to reading more of your writing!
~M

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i'm speechlessly in love with this. seriously- this is such a great piece of writing and i can just see the conflict within pansy and the calmness and possible confusion within susan. you write them both so well, and so alive and so beautiful and raw. i don't even know how to begin telling you how much i adore this story. :)
~M

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This was super cute, and I really enjoyed this! I love how you show Tonks as super clumsy, rather than just telling it. And I love the way Remus is reacting- you have both of them very in character.
Also the part about Tonks in muggle school made me chuckle- i wish one of my classmates had started changing their nose halfway through class :)
~M

Author's Response: Hey!

I'm really glad that you're enjoying, as this story is probably my favourite to write, mainly because of Tonks. I'm also glad that I'm showing rather than telling as I have had issues with that in the past.

I enjoyed weaving bits about Tonks' past, as I imagined it would be like that. And yay Remus is in character.

Thanks for this great review,

-Kiana

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really wishing i could throw something at scorpius right now for that curveball! i'm curious as to who his new gf is though. overall, i like this chapter, and i'm glad things are working out for al and bee :)
~M

Author's Response: Hehe :3 I feel the same ;) Please keep reading and reviewing :D

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the end made me laugh. This was a great story. At first it felt like a cookie cutter james/pregnant oc story, but the parts about the pregnancy charm, and the ending definitely made this a unique piece.
Side note: I was surprised by the last name of your OC--I don't recall any death eater with that last name.
I do like this story though- it was a cute, light-hearted piece with a feel-good ending :)
~M

Author's Response: Hey! It's nice to come after two days of no HPFF and find your gorgeous review waiting for me. :)
I know the beginning and some parts of the story do sound like "cookie cutter James/pregnant oc" story. I actually wrote this silly little story to prove that an author can write a james/OC pregnancy story so differently. =]
Well, I think I've mentioned that Venus' mom was a death eater no one knew and Rowling didn't tell us all the names, you know. Besides, her father wasn't a Death Eater so her mother's surname must've changed obviously. =]
Anyways thanks for leaving such a lovely review for me! :D

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I love tonks, so anything from her perspective is totally up my alley. this was a great read, and i'm looking forward to reading more. i love how you managed to work with canon so well, and show things (in my opinion) very accurately from Tonks' point of view. One thing that I noticed though- some moments, you make it sound a lot like Tonks from the series, and some moments her thoughts feel slightly out of character. Nothing to stress about too much, but if you did go back to edit, maybe having less 'muggle' slang (like wannabe, and who on earth, etc). Just food for thought though- feel free to disregard! Overall, a great read, and I look forward to reading more!
~M

Author's Response: Haha I love Tonks too, so I'm so glad that you liked it! Haha I'm glad it worked with canon, as that's the thing I was most worried about. Ooh I'll definitely go and check out the muggle slang, but I assumed she would know some from her dad. Oh well, I'll review it anyway!

Thanks for the great review, and I hope you carry on reading!

-Kiana

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i think this is the first albus knocking up an OC fic I've read, and I really like how it's going. You're a great writer, and I really like your protagonist. She's well written, and i love how she's not apologetic about her faults. Overall, a great piece of writing that I really enjoyed! I look forward to seeing what happens next!
~M
ps- ravenclaw review tag- team bronze!

Author's Response: Thank you so much and I'm glad that you like the MC even though she seems like such a difficult person. I'm happy that you enjoyed it and thank you for reviewing!

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This was absolutely brilliant. i love that you include mini snapshots of each person mentioned--it really helps create a mental image in my mind about whats going on. i really do love this- i think you capture Narcissa and her friends and family really well. It's very believable and I love the little details about Andromeda (who i absolutely adore). Overall, a brilliant piece of writing. :)
~M

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loving where this is headed so far! your characters are awesome, though i do hope harry doesn't raise his kid to be that much of a brat :) i can't wait to read the next chapter!
~M

Author's Response: Thank you, thank you so much. My characters are my babies, even James, but he wasn't raised to be a brat by Harry- it was his own choice. :)
Have a great day,
-Akansha.

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I like this so far, and I'm interested to see where this is headed. it's very different from other Next Gen/OC stories. I look forward to reading the next chapter!
~M

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This is absolutely beautiful. You make Luna come to life, and the relationship between her and Rolf is so believable in this, it's amazing. I love the way you make this piece so much more than just a fluffy one-shot- you make it feel so real and believable and tangible. This is probably one of the best one-shots I've read, and I do look forward to reading more of your writing!
~M

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy you liked it! Rolf and Luna are such a cute couple in my head!canon and maybe I'll explore them more at some future date :)

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wow. this was breathtakingly beautiful, and i absolutely loved it. seriously, this gave me chills reading it. you are such an amazing writer, and i'm in love with this piece. I have no suggestions to offer because I think this is perfect, as is. You describe Petunia and Lily's relationship so well. I love that you say that Harry is like Lily--I think that this is a perspective that only Petunia, as Lily's sister, can see. I'm just in love with this story- I think it's amazing.
~M

Author's Response: Woo Team Bronze!
Wow, this was such an awesome review- you're way too nice to me! :P I can't thank you enough for all your wonderful compliments, they really make me grin!
I'm so glad that you picked up on the Petunia-thinking-Harry-looks-like Lily aspect- Harry is so often compared to his father, but I really wanted to try and write the idea that Petunia would notice how he looked like Lily.
Thanks again, so so much!

-Bethany

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I like where this is going, and I'm intrigued so far. However, I am curious as to the characters--who are Lee and Angeline (sounds like a mixture of Next-Gen and Hogwarts-era students--my mind went to Lee Jordan and Angelina Johnson). If I were you I would try to maybe explain a little bit more about what's going on--the whole thing feels slightly rushed. Feel free to disregard my suggestions though, and I do look forward to reading more!
~M

Author's Response: Thank you! The thinking along the Lee and Angeline thing is George might have named a second son after Lee Jordan (so in a way, you were right), and someone told me Angeline was Percy's daughter (now I know his daughters are Molly and Lucy).
Thanks again
-Krissy

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wow. just wow. i'm literally speechless. this was so brilliantly written, i honestly have no words to describe how much i love this. you got into his head so brilliantly and it just made me feel so bad for Voldemort. I don't even know how to begin telling you how much I love this.
~M

Author's Response: Wow, I made some speechless? I don't think I've done that before :D Eek I'm so glad that you loved it and thought I got into his head, as Voldemort is such an intiguing character I wasn't sure if I completely pulled it off! Thank you for this brilliant review :D

-Kiana

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omg LOVE! i love the banter between albus and bee- it's super cute and the whole burger thing was very ravenclaw-esque of her (imho). this was seriously super cute and i'm so glad you updated!
also, the chapter dedication made my day :)
~M
ps- those longer chapters that i mentioned are now up :)

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though i like the idea behind this, i feel as though you could definitely refine it a bit more to make it a little more plausible-sounding. I do like where this is going though, and I am looking forward to seeing what you come up with next!
~M

Author's Response: Hello!

First off, thanks so much for the compliments, it makes me SO happy. I got another review that made me see how un-realistic this sounded and am going to go back and change it very soon. Well, thanks again, this really made my day!

-Krissy

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LOVE this story! this was so brilliantly written! i love how you wove in pieces of their relationship a little at a time, and painted this vivid picture of words so it was almost like i could see Dominique and her coffee. This was seriously a brilliantly written story, and I really enjoyed reading it.
~M

Author's Response: Aww thankyou so much for such a brilliant review! I'm usually catastrophic at structuring, so it's great to hear that it worked in this, and that you could really imagine Dominique :) This really made me smile!

-Bethany

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omg, ths was amazing. seriously, i LOVE how you portrayed fleur and bill- this was so perfect. it felt so right and you had them completely in character. in the words of ron, this was 'bloody brilliant'.
~M

Author's Response: Aw thank you for leaving such an amazing review! I'm so glad that you loved my portrayal of them, as I really love this ship and wanted to do them proud! Wub thank you so much :D

-Kiana

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