I love the twist with Louis! That's gotta make for one hell of an awkward conversation between them! I am dying to find out who the mystery person is. I feel like because of the quote "emotional range of a teaspoon" and knowing Louis's family tree so well, it's a Weasley, but I can't work out who!
And I'll admit, I still have hope for her and Fred. Just that this is you making it more interesting, and less simple. Adding a bit of drama to their journey and all.Author's Response: The twist just kind of popped out of thin air and I was like 'that'll work!'. I'll be revealing the mystery persons identity a little more each chapter (knowing me, I'll probably accidentally give it away in the next chapter!) Thank you so much for reviewing and keep reading :) Report Review
I have FINALLY caught up with this story. I have had so many sleepless nights thanks to this story. Thank you for it. Now when I re read the books, I know that I will be using this back story for Remus. I love it. From the school years, to the relationship with Tonks. I can even forgive you for the use of silver. Molly's words to him in this chapter made me cry.
I hope love when you switch forward to Ted. I rather like his story. But I don't want it to be purely his story that you are telling, because that means you would have had to write about the Lupins deaths. One of the saddest out of the whole war, and I am not looking forward to reading about their deaths when they are main characters. I will have a box of tissues at the ready, needless to say.
Thank you xAuthor's Response: aw thank you! and let me just say that that scene where they die...it will be SOOO hard to write, but i hope it will be worth the box of kleenex! Report Review
FRED! Ok, i may love her single, but Fred is working so hard to get her! And its James best mate, just think of the trouble that would cause! You NEED to put more up ASAP! There is a reason I don't read WIP... I am way too impatient. But for this, I'll learn, Because it is brilliant!Author's Response: A lot of people seem to want her to end up with Fred, and I don't disagree, they would be very good together, but would it not be too obvious? Just saying :) But there is no way on earth she is ending up with James! I promise you that! I actually have started a new story, have serious writers block for this one! But I shall persevere and get my act together, and try to update some time this week :) Please keep your eyes peeled! And maybe you could even try my new one 'The Year I Tried To Teach Albus Potter To Dance', extremely long title but c'est la vie, nothing else fitted :) Thank you thank you thank you, a million zillion thank yous for reviewing, it seriously means SO much to me! I am so grateful, you have no idea! It really gives me MOTIVATION :D *Queue inspirational music* THANKS AGAIN! Report Review
I am falling in love with Fred. You can keep Louis, I just want him as a best friend. And I loved the commentary. Very Lee Jordan. I'm actually happy they didn't win, it would have been a little cheesy. Brilliant writing!!! :)Author's Response: I tried to keep the commentary Lee Jordan-esque, but I wanted it to have some of Louis's personality too! And thank you! I thought it would have been very cheesy if they won too !! Report Review
Hahahah, I LOVE IT SO MUCH!!! I just adore Jade. But I don't see her with any of those guys. I just love her single and angry :DAuthor's Response: Thank you for leaving reviews :) I almost had heart failure when it said I had 5 reviews!!! You have no idea how much I love you right now :) Report Review
I can't wait for the match! I love how Rose isn't afraid of her, makes sense after having Hermione as a mother!Author's Response: Exactly! I think Hermione probably drilled into her children to treat everyone the same, pureblood, half-blood or muggle born Report Review
I love it!!! The idea of their being racism about purebloods now is so realistic! And I love seeing people out of the usual houses. Really really great :)Author's Response: Thank you :) Yeah, I thought the whole 'purebloods are evil' would probably happen so yeah, that happened :) Report Review
Reading this last review made me cry. I felt like a right tosser, I can tell you. Anyway, this story is amazing. It is one of the first I read, and it is still my favourite. Thank you so much for taking the time out of your life to finish it. I love Jane. I love how real she is. One of my favourite moments is when she Obliverates Lou and Amanda. It is so real, and so mature of her. It shows so much of her person. I usually hate Epilogues, but yours is perfect. Thank you so so much xxAuthor's Response: Awww. You're not a tosser. Writing it made me cry. Stupidly, really.
I know some people didn't like the Epilogue, but in my opinion I've been working on this story for years and sharing it with so many of you that I thought you deserved to know what happened to everyone. From my mind to yours. I'm happy you enjoyed it and thank you for jumping on board and taking time to read it. Report Review
I loved the ending! I found your story today, and have ignored everything else to read it. Usually, fan fictions are let down in the every last few sentences. THIS IS GOLDEN!! Like, perfect, true and utterly wonderful. Finish another story, please? I'm too impatient to read WIP stories sorry. Though for you, I am tempted to try.Author's Response: Really? Thank you so much, that's very sweet of you :)
But golden? Seriously... wow. Perfect? Don't make me blush!
But seriously, that is lovely of you. And I do have another story finished, it's a Louis/OC and I wouldn't say it was my best work (it was a bit of a rushed job) but do have a look if you're interested :)
Thanks so much for the lovely review! Report Review
I absolutely love this story!! The characters are amazing, I can't wait to find out what Brendan was doing. And to read the epic revealment when everyone finds out Hufflepuff is using a girl!!! Please update this soon, xxAuthor's Response: Thanks so much for the amazing reviwew! I'm glad you like it so much, I'll work on updating it soon! Report Review
I love this!! It is so well thought out, and gives reason. I loved when you quoted how she herself had long given in to insanity. I always loved Bellatrix and this is the perfect explanation to her addiction of "Crucio". Report Review
I am finally up to date. I NEED you to put the next one up. For 3 days this will be my life. The game sounded so intense! I wish I could have watched it. I loved that they played when injured, very right considering it was James last match. I'm hoping at the party that whatever Bink didn't want James to know comes out. I'm sure it will be good!Author's Response: It really would have been intense if it were made into a movie, wouldn't it? You'll definitely find out about Bink. So many secrets. Thanks so much for the review! Report Review
Thank you so much for finally putting Lily on the team! I'm so happy that you're not going to waste that amazing personality you made up for her :)Author's Response: Of course I'm not going to waste it :) I absolutely love Lily. She's a great influence for James. Thanks so much! Hope you like the rest of the story! Report Review
I love your writing so much! Sorry, I'm a lazy sod so I haven't written a review yet. Javery are perfect, an I'm so ha0py they are finally together. I'm hoping you have written more involving Lily. She is the best :) Thanks for your amazing story xAuthor's Response: Look here, lazy sod! Just kidding. I'm really glad you had an opportunity to sign on and tell me what you think :) I appreciate it! There are lots more Lily parts coming up! Thanks for the review! Report Review
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