Reading Reviews From Member: WaterLily
  
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Review #1, by WaterLilyNot For The World: Not For The World

25th October 2013:
Fabulous! The stream of consciousness in second person truly enhances the story, and it's so rare to see stories out of order - but you made each snippet seem so significant, and so closely mirroring Lily's real thought process. Please write more stories, you have talent!

~WaterLily :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! This is a great review - thank you! I'm glad you liked it, and I will try to write more, but this one did take me absolutely ages. I think I started writing it in February! Thanks for reviewing!

- Gred x


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Review #2, by WaterLilyThe Girl With the Broken Smile: And She Will Be Loved

4th November 2012:
That was so beautifully written. :O You did an amazing job with the parallels between James' and Severus' points of view, and your writing style is beautiful. Please keep writing, you've created one of my favorite stories in the fewest words.

~WaterLily :)

Author's Response: Wow, thanks. This review really means a lot to me. I get all warm and fuzzy inside when my work touches someone like this, especially because I know what it feels like to read a story that just... stays with you forever. I hope my story was like this for you, I really liked writing it and I'm overjoyed that someone loves it enough to leave a review like you left. Thanks for reading and reviewing, and I'm so glad it was one of your favorite stories.

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Review #3, by WaterLilyThe Con: Chapter Eight

7th October 2012:
I absolutely love this story! It's so original and captivating - I couldn't get it off my mind even though there was a long wait between updates. I'm so glad James found out what was going on, it was awful thinking about how horrible Lily's situation was getting with James thinking of her like that. You've really written a piece of work that sticks in the reader's head. Please keep writing, I can't wait for the rest!

~WaterLily :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy to hear that it's something that stays on your mind. It means a lot to hear that because it's what I strive to do when I write. I hope you like what I'm doing with the rest of the story. Thanks again for the review!

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Review #4, by WaterLilyBehind Enemy Lines: Plans Into Action

5th October 2012:
This is a great idea! It's refreshing to see new ways Lily and James fell in love, and this one is definitely both original and believable. Your writing style is amazing as well - the words flow and have a touch of humor that actually makes me smile while reading it. Also, your characterization is absolutely perfect. Please update soon, I can't wait for the next chapter!

~WaterLily :)

Author's Response: Wow, wow, wow,. Thank you so much! This made me so happy to read this because characterization, plot, flow ect. were my main concerns about this story!
Thank you!!


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Review #5, by WaterLilyAt The Risk Of...: Chapter 2. Including The Masses

31st July 2012:
I really love the idea of this fanfiction. A truth-telling, emotion-taking virus throughout the school will definitely make things interesting at Hogwarts. Also, the Sardines game sounds like it'll be really fun to read about, so I'm excited for that. Great writing so far, and please update soon! :D

~WaterLily :)

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Review #6, by WaterLilyBack in Their Day: Sorting Things Out

25th July 2012:
This is the best time-travel fanfic I've ever read.

You've captured the reaction of the Marauders and Lily Potter's hesitance with saying anything in her predicament perfectly. Great work, and I can't wait for more chapters!

~WaterLily :)

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