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Review #1, by sunnyday2Cheating the Bet: Ordinary Miracle

7th August 2012:
This is fantastic. Even after not reading in a while, you just slip right back into the story.

It's so sweet what James did! I like that side of the Potter siblings, kind and caring rather than just the arrogant famous Potter brothers.

So relived that Alice finally declared her love, even if it was an accident. Maybe this'll mean she can stop denying herself and Albus something, or maybe it'll just cause more drama ... ?

I can't wait to find out! Another amazing chapter, keep it up!

-sunnyday2

Author's Response: Thanks much. Just wait and see... :)

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Review #2, by sunnyday2The Name of the Game: Confessions to Mr. Cuddles

2nd August 2012:
Aw, I love all the sweet happy moments you have in the story, and having James become a stag to secretly help Lily, I liked it. Haven't read about that before.
Another great chapter, it's a very original story, which is difficult to do considering the hundreds of James/Lily stories there are.

Thanks for writing, I can't wait to find out what happens next!

Author's Response: Thank you so much :) every review, whether good or bad, helps me keep going and yours especially has :D

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Review #3, by sunnyday2Don't You Remember: Here Without You

27th July 2012:
I sense a Romeo ~ Juliet theme appearing here. If you carry that out, finish Rose and Scorpius like Romeo and Juliet, I will find you, and I will kill you.

Please dont take me seriously, of course I would never.
But if that does happen, I will be the ghost of what Scorpius is now. You will have made me fall in love with these people that you created, then you would have killed them. Please don't do that.

Author's Response: *Raises hands in innocence* I surrender!

Oh honey don't worry, I'm not that cruel. They will survive. Thank you for reading and reviewing!


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Review #4, by sunnyday2Rumor Has It: The Way It Ends

23rd July 2012:
No. No. No. No. No. No!
Why do you do this to us readers?! Why do you do this to Rose, to Scorpius? How could you!

Don't take this the wrong way. Your story is, fantastic, brilliant, funny, smart, everything a story should be, and that last twist was really clever, I never saw anything like it coming. Why did you have to do that?

Okay, I shall take myself out of the story and try to give you a useful opinion. I love your story, it is my favorite so far, and I think I'm learning a lot by just reading your writing. I love the relationship between Rose and Scorpius, how it isn't story-book perfect but realistic, and very lovable.

The plot, well, I see no faults and I can't wait to read what happens next.

I only want to point out one thing, and please don't be insulted, but there are a few spelling and grammar mistakes in the story. I know there will always be some, I always have mistakes in my writing too, but they were kind of distracting me from the incredible story.

Thank you so much for writing this.

~sunnyday2

Author's Response: Ironically, I'm going through this story right now to try and weed out as much of the mistakes as I can. I'm not insulted in the slightest! I understand how distracting those minor mistakes can get after a while. Thank you for bringing it to my attention! I'm glad you've liked it so hard. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

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Review #5, by sunnyday2Cheating the Bet: Why Can't We Be Friends?

22nd July 2012:
This story is absolutely amazing. I love the way you made Albus into more of a charming James Potter-like character, unlike how many people think he's a boring Percy-like boy.
The way you describe everything is really, natural. It makes it so easy to imagine all the characters (though the photos help too).
I can't wait to see how the story unravels, please keep writing!

-sunnyday2

note: I've tried to post this before but it said that it didn't work, sorry if you get two of these!

Author's Response: Thanks so much. Yeah, some of the stories about Albus were a little weird, but I kinda like him being over confident. And I only got one review :)

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Review #6, by sunnyday2The Name of the Game: The Joy of Fuzzy Socks

22nd July 2012:
I hope you keep writing! I love this story, it's a completely different style to any other Marauders stories I've read. At first, I didn't like it but I got used to the way you write and now I love it. I can't wait to find out what happens!

-sunnyday2

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I've got a lot planned, I hope you're pleased with what's to come :)

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Review #7, by sunnyday2We Gryffies: Cuckoo Bananas

12th July 2012:
Just wanted to say that I'm brand new here so excuse me if I don't really know how to write a review, anyway.

I really, really love your story. I love the plot, how the characters are not so stereotypical and how they interact. Please don't tell me you've given up on the story!!!

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