Reading Reviews From Member: ShadowedErised
  
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Review #1, by ShadowedErisedHer Eyes: I promise

2nd August 2012:
I loved it. Seeing the desperation in Narcissa through Draco's eyes really made it all the more haunting. They way she was breaking down so undeniably noticeable by someone so close to her. I also really liked how you portrayed Narcissa as a mother. I've read too many where she comes off as cold both in public and to Draco. This was very well written and organised. Good job!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review :) yes, I really wanted to show the relationship between Draco and Narcissa and the toll the Dark Lord's decision had made on the family. Thanks again for reviewing :)

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Review #2, by ShadowedErisedThe Boy That Didn't Matter: The Boy That Didn't Matter

18th July 2012:
I loved this. I'm an absolute sucker for stories like this and it was perfect. I even got a bit teary-eyed in the beginning. Wonderful story, awesome job~

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