OMG! This story is wonderfully heartfelt, i was like totally absorbed in it. this is awesome! I can't wait to read the forsaken ones. Report Review
I think this is a really well written out mystery and I really liked how you made a new cross of banshee and vampire, was it? Although I thought it the story was a bit messy at times.
9 1/2 out of 10
Michelle Report Review
This is so good I honestly think you could mail it off to a publisher and get it made into a movie!!!
Please, please update quickly!!Author's Response: Haha, thanks! If only that could happen. ;) Report Review
this really good... so are lily and james married in the epilogue??
Someone named Sirius Black just captured my heart! God sake, the way you describe him is awesome!!
i wish i could write my story like that...
Michelle Report Review
i really really like this sentence: She was somewhat ashamed to admit it, but coffee had become her life-raft; she could no longer swim unaided through the day without drowning in ocean of yawns and blurring eyes.
overall, good job! I favorited this story Report Review
Since I already left a review for the epilogue, i couldn't leave another review there, but just remembered that 'she's beautiful' is exactly what Dad said when he first saw me. you really captured my heart with those two simple words: she's beautiful. it's so plain, yet so emotional at the same time.
-MichelleAuthor's Response: Aww, I'm so glad that you could get some sort of relation out of it! Thank you so much for all of your beautiful words you've expressed to me today! They really do mean so much!
Thank you, again, for the lovely review! I really do appreciate it! :) Report Review
This story is so good, I finished it in two hours without stopping. Ahh! I can't wait to read the sequel! (If there is one)
GREAT GREAT GREAT JOB!
-MichelleAuthor's Response: Oh goodness! Thank you so, so much! I'm so very glad you enjoyed it so much! :) I hope you enjoy "Unraveling Secrets" (the sequel) just as much!
Thank you again for the lovely review! I really do appreciate it! :) Report Review
I know this is the third time I'm posting in two days, but I just thought of an idea and I was hoping you'd be able to fit it into the story. Can you make Hermione pregnant?
Sorry but I don't have much time so I didn't review it, cause I switched on my laptop specially to suggest this before forgot it.
MichelleAuthor's Response: lolol You don't have to apologize for posting another review. xD I really appreciate all the reviews that I get and I'm perfectly content with them! :D &&Hmm, I'm not sure if I could put that idea in the story because I've already planned everything out for the rest of this story. : It'd be hard for me to change everything, so I'm really sorry. Maybe I'll put that idea in another story but not this one. Sorry but thank you for the suggestion. If you have any questions about me or story/writing, please go to my author's page and leave me a question, I'll answer them for you.
-Annie Report Review
I have eight favourites and out of those favourites, your story is my absolute favourite. I can't believe I never knew about it! My friend also on HPFF told me about it. I am very pleased to say that after I read six chapters, the story is brilliant. I can totally see the trouble between Draco and Hermione! (They will fall in love, afterwards, right?)
-MichelleAuthor's Response: Michelle,
I'm so honored that you enjoy my story! :) Thank you so much! I'm really glad you like the story and I'll try my best to improve my writing. Thank you. :)
-Annie Report Review
I dont understand why u dont like this chapter! I think its fantastic with James and all that. and the part where James thinks using recipes is cheating... so hilarious!!!Author's Response: Aw thanks :)
I don't know, I'm not happy with a lot of the chapters because they seem so cliche to me I guess.
I kinda hate cliches :p
But thank you for liking this chapter and reviewing :D Report Review
I can already see it's going to be a good, fairytale story from the first few paragraphs. This is the first time I read this story, and I already feel enchanted to continue reading from the beginning. But one thing I want to know: Is there a sequel? Or have you uploaded any other stories? I would just love to read any of your stories.
-MichelleAuthor's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you like it so far. No, there is no sequel - and I'm not quite finished with this story just yet. I've still got a few chapters left to write, but you're only on chapter one so you have a while before you get there, anyway. :) As for my other stories, yes, I have lots! Just click on my name at the top of the story where it says 'Toujours Padfoot' - that's my author page, where you can find my other stories.
Thanks for reading!! Report Review
really interesting story, i'm interested to see how it will turn out between draco and hermione!
-Michelle Report Review
I simply cannot wait for the following chapters! When will they be out? This is just so exciting! I love especially when the story debuts new characters, in this case, Belle and Alrek.
- MichelleAuthor's Response: Aww you've just made my entire week! The 6th chapter is in the queue, and has been for four days, so it should be out tonight or tomorrow! Belle and Alrek both play very huge parts in this story, so I hope they both continue to interest you!
Thank you again for this lovely review ♥
Jami Report Review
There is just one word to describe this story - WOW! Report Review
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