I really loved that! This us going to be so interesting, and it flows really well.

Author's Response: Thank you so much :)

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This is really great. Very interesting first chapter, although it did jump to action rather quickly.

Author's Response: Well, I know... :( I suppose I wanted to get on with the switch part sooner rather than later, because that's basically the point of the story :D

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AH! Oh that one made me so frustrated with everything ever. That was a really great chapter.

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He will definitely try and break them up. Maybe not directly, but he will.

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Loved it. That's literally all I have for you.

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I know! I agree with your author's note, this entire chapter made me sad. I can't wait for some happy, but it was one of my favorite chapters.

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I love the tension between Elle and Sirius! She thinks he has it easy, when in reality, they are in the same boat. Love it!

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That was so sweet! I've always loved Remus as a character.

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I liked it again, obviously, but I think the fight was a bit forced. She's very impulsive, so that could be one of the reasons she was sorted into Gryffindor. Thank you again for this story.

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I'm conflicted on whether or not I want the game to be longer! It's a cool concept anyway.

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Loved this one! The game was a little confusing at first, but the last paragraph definitely cleared it up.

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I'm excited! This seems to be going in a nice direction.

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AW ok sorry, but Laney has friends! I'm happy.

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I genuinely laughed at the ending. Another really good chapter.

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Thank you! I'm enjoying this too much for my own good.

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Lovely! I'm into it!

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I really love the chapter title. It was really innovative!

Author's Response: Thanks! I enjoy trying to find unique chapter titles!

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I am really hoping she's not pregnant!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! The next chapter will be up soon!

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Love this so much! Thank you for the feelings! :)

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I really really like this story. I just feel like Maisy isn't in the right house. I know we don't know exactly what's going on in her life right now, but with self-dialogue, it might be able to be shown to the readers. So basically like Maisy talking to herself. I do, however think that this is how Lily would react I always pictured her as frantic and very protective. I really like this though!

Author's Response: Thank you, appreciated :) x

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Ah! Scary ending already? I am so happy to see another Sirius/OC writer, because I really love OC's with Sirius. The only tiny thing I have to say was that at the beginning you used a lot of, "surprisingly", or, "she mircaulously learned French." But I guess you did move through five years, so it makes sense.
Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Me too! I love Sirius/OC's, they're practically all I read! :D

Younger children learn languages rather quickly, though I did rush through it a bit...I was trying to squash sixteen years in there without making the story seem too slow. :P

Thanks for reviewing!

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The last little part about James never being home, and the baby made me tear up! It's a little short for my taste, but I still loved it.

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This was just absolutely amazing! I usually like stories a bit longer, but this was a great read over the span of two days.
you're great!

Author's Response: Really glad that you liked it! Thanks for the comments, I really appreciate it :D

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I can't even describe my feels

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. . . . . . .I am basically in love
Seriously, already hurting my feels is not okay
This si what, the sixth chapter?

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