Reading Reviews From Member: DitheringFool
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Review #1, by DitheringFoolMy Most Faithful: Unbreakable

28th July 2012:
Once again, you amazed us all (or me at least). The kiss scene was wonderfully done. I liked how you showed how manipulative Tom is getting through him attacking Anne as well as the Vow scene. I'm so glad you're using your skills to write this fanfiction.

Author's Response: Youre so sweet! You dont know how much your time and appreciation mean to me...I sure wouldn't be still writing if it weren't for your guys' reviews! I'm glad you liked it, more son (hopefully haha) stay tuned:)

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Review #2, by DitheringFoolWe Three Sisters: One rainy night in England

26th July 2012:
So to toss things up, I'll start off with the negative because it's short: The beginning is really confusing and I had no idea what was going on, nor their age range. I'm not really sure as to your ultimate goal, but then again, it is too early to judge.

Now for the positive: It (what was happening in the beginning) became clearer towards the end, which was good. I like how you described their family; I think it's very realistic and nicely done. Something else I like is how the beginning really caught my attention, and how there's stuff happening as soon as some one starts reading (I have so much trouble with that)

One final thought: I first read your story because I'm writing one just like it (although I'm starting earlier in their lives). Also, can you please review my story, The Sisters Three, because I would love some feedback.

I'm looking forward to chapter two and a twist.

Author's Response: I'm sorry to hear my start was confusing, i'll be sure to check on that and edit it. I'm glad it became more clear in the end and that it is enjoyable and when I have the time, I will be sure to give a review on your story. I'll add it to my favorites now and get to it when I can. thanks for the review.

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Review #3, by DitheringFoolBreath of fresh Air: A Smoky Start

25th July 2012:
So far, it's pretty neat. I would like to see something that makes it above average though, something that makes it stand out (I know, way easier said than done).

I like how you're telling the James/Lily interactions from a third person point of view and how they're not the main focus of the story.

I also like how you're using language to get your point across, you're not blunt and obvious. Congratulations on a good beginning, and may there be more to come.

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Review #4, by DitheringFoolMy Most Faithful: All But Perfect

23rd July 2012:
Wow. This chapter was absolutely amazing. I take back anything negative I have said about your story.

Author's Response: lmao well thanks! i appreciate that you liked it so much, reviews like these are what keep me writing:) More sooon

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