This is seriously interesting, I can't wait for the nest chapter, I want her to meet James and Sirius! Love it so far, keep it up xx Report Review
Love love love looove. I adore this story, Thank you so much for the update, and keep on writing, I find Dom's character really different from a lot of other stories, including how I'm planning on writing er into my one (maybe you could check it out?) anyway, I seriously admire your writing, and can't wait for the next update xoxoAuthor's Response: aww thank you so much for your comment! and for favoriting me as an author btw! i'll be sure to check out your story as soon as the craziness that is my life calms down :) thanks again for reading and reviewing- i'm so glad you're enjoying this story! ~M Report Review
I don't care if it was a filler chapter. It was a beautiful chapter, I'm not sure if I'm PMSing right now, but I just adore this chapter for no reason whatsoever. Thank you very very much xoxoxoAuthor's Response: Aww, thanks, even if you are PMSing. :D But it is an emotional chapter, so I understand you. You're welcome. :) And, btw, more should come sooner rather than later, because I won't be as busy as I was in the past few months. ;) Report Review
YES YES YES!! WOOHOOO *does a little happy dance* can't wait for next chappy :D xoxoxo Report Review
This is great! I really really like it, and I want to read more now! I hope you put up another chapter up soon :) xx Report Review
omg hahahahahhahaha this is priceless! A FINGER HAHAHHAHAHAHA I *gasp* CAN'T *gasp* STOP *gasp* LAUGHING. Okay, I need to breath. Thanks for the chapter! (Even if it was short :P) xoxoAuthor's Response: Hehehehe, I must admit to a few evil chuckles when thinking this up. So glad you liked it ;) Report Review
I swear I love this chapter, I love the Leo/Scorpius bromance and how they became friends with Al and the spoons. I'LL NEVER LOOK AT SPOONS THE SAME WAY AGAIN :') Thanks so much for just being amazing and writing this story, I really appreciate it :)) Can I ask a favour? Would it be possible for you to check out my Next Gen story and tell me what you think? I'd love your feedback since you're such a great righter :D xoxo Report Review
OHMYMERLINISWEARIFYOUDON'TUPDATESOONIWILLGOONARAMPAGEANDEVERYONEWILLDIE! Asdfghjkl, I kinda hate her mum and that goergie person, and Nat is pissing me off, like seriously, I understand it would be hard for her but STILL! Like ohmg this is super aweesoome!Author's Response: AHH PLEASE DONT KILL ANYONE I DO NOT WANT TO BE RESPONSIBLE FOR MURDER! I'm thinking of putting the next chapter in the queue on Monday? Is Monday soon enough? I hope so! I understand that Tash is being very annoying. Sometimes when I write her I just wanna smack her over the head and tell her she's an idiot. Hopefully by the end of the story you won't be pissed off by her? I'm so glad you like the story though and thank you so much for reviewing :) -Rebecca Report Review
Oh Dear Merlin! WHAT?!?!?! HOW CAN THEY FREAKING SUSPECT HER? STUPID PEOPLE! STUPID PEOPLE EVERY-FREAKING-WHERE!!! ASDFGHJKL! Great chapter as always deary :) xxAuthor's Response: I KNOW!!! What is WRONG with them???!!! Thanks for your review hun! ♥ Report Review
This is so amazing, just.asdfghjkl so cool >.< 1000/1000 Report Review
I love this story so much. I honestly don't have a fave characyer so far but I really like Fred, Angie, Tyler (even though we no basically nothing about him 'cept the flashbacks) and Scorpy, 'cause Scorpy is the cutest thang >.< PLEASE CAN SHE GO TO THE PARTY PLEEEASE!! I adored the flashback and it just made me want to know more about what happened with her and Dom - it's really not fair how you're making us wait STILL for that explanation ;). I think Scorp always being there just not prominently is good, but maybe we could see him more often? (I really love him you see.) Can't wait for the next update!! BBWotter xoxo (Daughter of Earth has chapter three up by the way! :D) xxxAuthor's Response: Thanks! I love Tyler, too, and am really trying to get to him, though it's going to be a while, I can imagine. I'm glad to know that you love Scorp, haha, and I'm thankful for your suggestions! Oh, and I'm glad chapter three is up, I've been waiting!(: ~ Janelle(: Report Review
The book part was amazing, and the Lockhart stuff was brilliant! I love this story! Thanks for the update! I hope James gets in! xxAuthor's Response: The Lockhart banter was a sheer joy to write. As was that whole book section, actually. :) Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
You updated! YOU ACTUALLY FREAKING UPDATED! And Tash and Jamesie are such cuties! And omg the article, and Gryffin and Molly are amazing, can you keep them? Please update soon! I really want to see what her mum does, asdfghjkl I love this story! >.Author's Response: Ah I know! I'm so sorry it took so long to update. But yay! I'm glad you like Tash and James. And Gryffin and Molly are my babies. They will always be kept around. I'm thinking of posting the next chapter at the end of the week? Not sure yet but it'll definitely be out soon! Thanks so much for reviewing :) -Rebecca Report Review
' “Only if you want to be dead before you even make your thirties!” Remus said in exasperation. ' WHY WHY WHY WHY why? This made me tear up, too sad omg >.< I love this story, please keep on writing! xoxo Report Review
I can't even...why do I put myself through this. In My Head nearly broke me, BUT THIS! Why? Why? Why? I am crying. It's worse than In My Head by 1000, this is too sad but I know I'll carry on reading becuse I love this and I love you. Thank you so much xxAuthor's Response: I don't know. Why do you? :P Oops. I'm sorry... erm... here, have a cyber cookie and cyber tissue and cyber hug from me. I didn't mean to make you sad :( I just wanted to write a story. You're welcome :) Report Review
NO NO NO NO I WANTED HER TO TELL HIM.but then it would've ruined his b-day so maybe not :) I love love luuurve this story and thanks for the update :) xAuthor's Response: It might have ruined his birthday but who knows what his reaction would have been like. Thanks again for reading and reviewing!! -Potterfan310 Soph Report Review
JAMES SIRIUS POTTER! WHO IN THE NAME OF MERLIN DO YOU THINK YOU ARE? I HATE YOU SO MUCH RIGHT NOW JUST UUUGH!!! Freddie you are amazing as always, and Hope, you GO girl! I've missed this :') Thanks so much for the upload, this story is so perf...I can't even...omg xoxo Report Review
AAASSSDDDFFFGGGHHHJJJKKKLLL WHY WHHY WHYYY??? I LOVE AND HATE THIS CHAPTER SO MUCH WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME?? omg im THIS close to tears :'( Thanks for the amazing chappy and I reaally hope you update soon :D xxAuthor's Response: NO BECAUSE LIKE YOU JUST MADE MY DAY TWICE IN THE SPACE OF TWO MINUTES. DUDE YOU ARE SO AWESOME. Thank you so much for this review! I'm so glad that you loved it and I'm so glad that you hated it too! ^_^ Dude you're the best. Thanks again! :) xx Report Review
OKAY WHY DOESN'T THIS CHAPTER HAVE MORE REVIEWS?? IT WAS BEAUTIFUL AND THE LAST BIT IS SCARY AND NOW I'M MOVING ON TO CHAPPY 14 'CAUSE I BLOODY ADORE THIS STORY TO PIECES!!!Author's Response: I bloody adore you to pieces, you seriously make my day every time, thank you so much! :) Please leave a review 'cause it just got validated and I'm not sure about it and your opinion is valuable to me! Thank you thank you thank you for this review! ^_^ xx Report Review
I actually can't believe I haven't read this before!! I've seen it before, true, but AI never paid it much attention (sorry!) and today, I decided to check it out, AND IT'S UNBELIEVABLY GOOD! It's amazing, and I can't wait for you to write more :D A story hasn't quite captured my attention like this in such a long time! xxAuthor's Response: You can't believe the number of times that's happened with me to (like, seriously!) so I'm not going to blame you. I'm just very, very glad you decided to check this out and liked it and THANKS SO MUCH! Next chapter is currently being written, and I hope to post it sometime this month (fingers X'ed!) Cheers, -Akansha. Report Review
AWH!! YES YES YES YEEES!! *does a little- no MASSIVE- happy dance in the corner*Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the chapter!! Thanks for reading :) Report Review
Well crap... that's my basic reaction to that last word, I really can't say anything else except that I really like this story :) x Report Review
Aaawh! So cute! >.< I adore this okay? I have this small fetish for Fred II so this basically made my day :P xxAuthor's Response: Aw thanks! I'm glad you liked it, I had a lot of fun writing it :) Report Review
I really adore this story, I can't help but want to learn more! Ugh, now you've put Tyler into the mix I can't help but be impatient! You're a really gifted writer, and you're plot is carried out very well! Tyler sound wonderful, and for all the other chapter.well I love them! I love this whole story...oh I've mentioned that before. anyway, keep on writing and don't be discouraged at all! Can't wait for the next chapter! The party's gonna happen then right? Please say yes! :D I would really like it if you would check out my stories, it would be great to have such a really talented writer look at them, and give me an honest opinion. Thanks a billion for this chapter, and I'll try to review more frequently! :D xxAuthor's Response: Thanks so much! I loved hearing that you enjoy my story so much! I have to say I admire you, however, for your story 'Daughter of Earth'. I love it. I appreciate the comments and admiration you have for my story, and the party may or may not happen;D . You'll just have to wait and see! Thanks! ~ Janelle Report Review
This gave me real insight into James and Dorothy's relationship, so thanks a lot for writing it :) To be honest with you, it didn't really make my opinion of James any better, I still adore him, but, ugh, I dunno... I liked the Leaky Cauldron scene though, it was cute :) It felt like three friends together joking around like it should be really. Right now, I'm just dying for some Fred Weasley *wink wink giggles girlishly* The chapter is excellently written as usual ;) Can I ask for a favour? Could you possibly take a look at my three stories? It would be really great to get such an amazing author's opinion on them Adore you forever more xoxo 1000/1000Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I was so sure that people were going to end up hating Dorothy or James or both.ugh. I don't know. And don't worry, Freddie will be back soon :) And yes, I will definitely check out your stuff! I'm flattered that you think so highly of my writing. :) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Report Review
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