AAASSSDDDFFFGGGHHHJJJKKKLLL WHY WHHY WHYYY??? I LOVE AND HATE THIS CHAPTER SO MUCH WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME?? omg im THIS close to tears :'( Thanks for the amazing chappy and I reaally hope you update soon :D xxAuthor's Response: NO BECAUSE LIKE YOU JUST MADE MY DAY TWICE IN THE SPACE OF TWO MINUTES. DUDE YOU ARE SO AWESOME. Thank you so much for this review! I'm so glad that you loved it and I'm so glad that you hated it too! ^_^ Dude you're the best. Thanks again! :) xx Report Review
OKAY WHY DOESN'T THIS CHAPTER HAVE MORE REVIEWS?? IT WAS BEAUTIFUL AND THE LAST BIT IS SCARY AND NOW I'M MOVING ON TO CHAPPY 14 'CAUSE I BLOODY ADORE THIS STORY TO PIECES!!!Author's Response: I bloody adore you to pieces, you seriously make my day every time, thank you so much! :) Please leave a review 'cause it just got validated and I'm not sure about it and your opinion is valuable to me! Thank you thank you thank you for this review! ^_^ xx Report Review
I actually can't believe I haven't read this before!! I've seen it before, true, but AI never paid it much attention (sorry!) and today, I decided to check it out, AND IT'S UNBELIEVABLY GOOD! It's amazing, and I can't wait for you to write more :D A story hasn't quite captured my attention like this in such a long time! xxAuthor's Response: You can't believe the number of times that's happened with me to (like, seriously!) so I'm not going to blame you. I'm just very, very glad you decided to check this out and liked it and THANKS SO MUCH! Next chapter is currently being written, and I hope to post it sometime this month (fingers X'ed!) Cheers, -Akansha. Report Review
AWH!! YES YES YES YEEES!! *does a little- no MASSIVE- happy dance in the corner*Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the chapter!! Thanks for reading :) Report Review
Well crap... that's my basic reaction to that last word, I really can't say anything else except that I really like this story :) x Report Review
Aaawh! So cute! >.< I adore this okay? I have this small fetish for Fred II so this basically made my day :P xxAuthor's Response: Aw thanks! I'm glad you liked it, I had a lot of fun writing it :) Report Review
I really adore this story, I can't help but want to learn more! Ugh, now you've put Tyler into the mix I can't help but be impatient! You're a really gifted writer, and you're plot is carried out very well! Tyler sound wonderful, and for all the other chapter.well I love them! I love this whole story...oh I've mentioned that before. anyway, keep on writing and don't be discouraged at all! Can't wait for the next chapter! The party's gonna happen then right? Please say yes! :D I would really like it if you would check out my stories, it would be great to have such a really talented writer look at them, and give me an honest opinion. Thanks a billion for this chapter, and I'll try to review more frequently! :D xxAuthor's Response: Thanks so much! I loved hearing that you enjoy my story so much! I have to say I admire you, however, for your story 'Daughter of Earth'. I love it. I appreciate the comments and admiration you have for my story, and the party may or may not happen;D . You'll just have to wait and see! Thanks! ~ Janelle Report Review
This gave me real insight into James and Dorothy's relationship, so thanks a lot for writing it :) To be honest with you, it didn't really make my opinion of James any better, I still adore him, but, ugh, I dunno... I liked the Leaky Cauldron scene though, it was cute :) It felt like three friends together joking around like it should be really. Right now, I'm just dying for some Fred Weasley *wink wink giggles girlishly* The chapter is excellently written as usual ;) Can I ask for a favour? Could you possibly take a look at my three stories? It would be really great to get such an amazing author's opinion on them Adore you forever more xoxo 1000/1000Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I was so sure that people were going to end up hating Dorothy or James or both.ugh. I don't know. And don't worry, Freddie will be back soon :) And yes, I will definitely check out your stuff! I'm flattered that you think so highly of my writing. :) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Report Review
FREDDIE I LOVE YOU, SUCH A GENTLEMAN INSISTING YOU PAY! *swoon* heheh I adore you, it is official, I don't know what I would do without this story to keep me going. xoxoxAuthor's Response: I love reading your reviews. You stroke my ego, and I appreciate that SOOO much. :D I adore you as well!!! Chapter 8 will be placed in the queue right after I finish typing this response. Report Review
Awh! I missed this story ^.^ hehe Update soon? xoxo Report Review
YES YES YES! I'm on Team Al here. Can't help it. He's amazing. I like James and all, but I prefer Al for her, especially after he treated her at Hogwarts, anyway, I approve of this turn of events, keep going! ;) 1000/1000 xxAuthor's Response: Thank you. :) Yes, James isn't so bad himself, he had a lot on his mind back then, and Al and him are similar in a lot of ways, because, after all, they are brothers. But it's simple, really. James isn't suited for Tatum. But maybe Al is. ;) Report Review
I love this story to bloody pieces. It's the best next Gen one that I've read in aaages! I actually bothered to review, so that's saying something ;) This story is really well written, the plot's really interesting, I don't hate James, he annoys my but I still like him most of the time, BUT, I adore Fred to bits, he's just supermegafoxyawesomehot. Basically, thanks to you, I have developed a fetish for Fred Weasley. ;) Keep on writing, I loved the girls night, and I wonder what's going on with Tabitha, can't wait for the next chappy! 1000/1000 xxAuthor's Response: You have no idea how happy I am to hear that you don't hate James. Like seriously, I am so happy. One of my main goals was to make every "bad guy" likeable. SO THANK YOU SO MUCH. :D And the Fred Weasley fetish? Heh...anytime. ;) I'm so glad you liked it and bothered to review! Report Review
Well crap! James I will love you forever and ever but please listen to Vivian. And Vi, JUST TELL HIM! 1000/1000 Report Review
YOU'D BETTER UPDATE SOON! I MEAN IT! :)) This is sooo cool! I love it, it's absolutely heart-breaking it truly is :'(. I really need to read more so please update soon! :D xx 1000/1000Author's Response: I'm thinking about uploading the second chapter right now! ;) right after answering these reviews. Thanks! Report Review
OH MY GAWD!! HOLY CRAPPITY MERLIN!!!AAA-AAA-AAA-AAA-AAA-AAAGHASDFGHJKLLDCXN oh my golly gosh oh my gosh, bloody hell, A FREAKIONG ENGAGEMENT RING!!! *hyperventilates then dies in a corner* 1000/1000Author's Response: muahahahahahahaha :p Glad you liked it! :D Thanks for the review! :) Report Review
Missed this story :') I'm so glad you updated! I really enjoyed it, it was seriously intense! I wonder why Alexei was looking amused? hmmm... You're an amazing writer, keep it up! :D 1000/1000 xxAuthor's Response: BBWotter, 1000/1000?? That's a lot! ;) Thanks so much, I'm glad you're still checking to make sure this story hasn't fallen into the abyss! :) Thanks so much for reading/reviewing, I'll try to get the next chapter up before I fall off the map during finals! ;D KBD Report Review
Oh my gosh that Albus part nearly killed me :'( but tbh I didn't really like the last James moments, I think it would've been nice if he just held her :) I think this story is brilliant though :D xxAuthor's Response: Oh I know I know XD It just killed me to write the last part, but it had to be written! Chapter three will be up soon! And thank you for the review, they honestly mean the world to me! Report Review
oh my gawd I KNEW IT!! I did okay? I knew it would be a Wotter, and for some reason, James just popped into my mind and just tadah!! hehe Drama drama drama intense intense intense, love this story to little tiny minuscule bits! Oh and I love you for creating it! :D xx 1000/1000Author's Response: And I love you for your enthusiasm and encouragement :D You are amazing :D I'm so glad you're enjoying it :) Thank you so much for the review and all the other ones because they all make me smile... a LOT ^_^ Thanks :) xx Report Review
Oh my golly goodness gracious merlin. That was amazing. Ha ha her dress in flames!!! Xx write soon! 100/100Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review! It's all going a bit wrong for Lilith - but at the same time Victoire! I hope to post soon! Report Review
I love you too rain! :) This story is amazing, I'm serious okay! It has just the right smount of ufnny, teenage drama, family problems, angst and cliffhangers! Oh my merlin that cliffie! WHAT HAPPENED TO ALICE?? You'd better update soon young lady (wait are you a guy? somehow I doubt it, but I'm just checkin ;)) or there will be SERIOUS consequences. Love you! xx 1000/1000Author's Response: This review is amazing, thank you so much! ^_^ I will try to update quickly this time and yes I am a girl (though my friends would try and tell you otherwise -_-). Thank you for the review! :) xx Report Review
Cute! Love this story to bits! :)) 1000/1000 xxAuthor's Response: Oh wow 1000/1000! Thank you so much! I'm so glad that you love this story, I love you! :D Report Review
Oh my merlin this is so sweet and sort of sad at the same time! I really can't wait for the next update!! :)) 1000/1000Author's Response: thank you for reviewing~~ it really means a lot!! =) I'll update soon haha. Im glad you liked it! Report Review
OHMYMERLIN SHE SPOKE!!! That's basically my only reaction to this chapter other than how amazing this story is! Please carry on reading, I want to know how this plays out :))Author's Response: Actually that was a mistake on my part. She was only supposed to be thinking that last line, not saying it out loud. I just forgot a couple words to make it look like that. I just edited it and the change should appear in a few days. Sorry for getting your hopes up!! Report Review
I adore it, absolutely adore it! Please don't stop writing this. Freddie sounds wonderful, and arrogant and cocky and completely hot! I like Evangeline already, and I find myself intrigued by that very last sentence! Write again soon! :)) xxAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! So glad you like it :) Report Review
For once in my life I prefer someone else over James Potter. Golly. I think Evander is better for her. I dunno why, I just kinda like him. *blushes* James is sort of just there, like a constant supportive presence, which isn't bad, Evander is always there when she needs him most which I think is good. And he kissed her first, and they have all these cute gestures like the one with him asleep, tis cute ^.^ I still love James though! I just.prefer Evander. :)Author's Response: Haha :) I think they both have their strong and weak points. Thanks for reading and reviewing! Report Review
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